Translucence II - Complete

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Posted: 13 years ago

I liked how you opened up and cleared up the questions for both these characters. The way the conversation took place, how you described it was indicative of how close they are and have always been. I am glad in a way that Maan will still try to solve the business problems and not leave it undone.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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dear pls shoe some silght love between them dear

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An absolutely amazing update.

So Venkat was reporting back to Geet?

I really enjoyed the conversation between MG, there is a clear difference in their relationship. As always, the last few lines blew me away.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz
An absolutely amazing update.
So Venkat was reporting back to Geet?
I really enjoyed the conversation between MG, there is a clear difference in their relationship. As always, the last few lines blew me away.

Good you noticed as that is the only open thread in this FF which had to be closed.
Geet and Maan are different people; the way they see the same goal can be so drastically different that the outcome itself is going to affect a whole lot of people. Frankly I like that kind of a relationship where each party is extremely powerful but have no vindictiveness - super enthralling in my opinion.

Tonight - last chapter! 😆

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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Tonight - last chapter! 😆

*DEAD*

****REPORTS JUST IN, MS.SOOKIE PERSON, HAS BEEN ARRESTED FOR MURDER***

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Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

*DEAD*

****REPORTS JUST IN, MS.SOOKIE PERSON, HAS BEEN ARRESTED FOR MURDER***

Oh please 😆

Convergence will start next. Will also write one chapter of Lapsus Linguae. And one entry in Death Talkies. All by this weekend! 😆

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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Oh please 😆

Convergence will start next. Will also write one chapter of Lapsus Linguae. And one entry in Death Talkies. All by this weekend! 😆

I feel sorry for your finger tips.

****REPORTS JUST IN, MS.SOOKIE PERSON, HAS BEEN ARRESTED FOR ASSAULTING HER FINGER TIPS***

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Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

I feel sorry for your finger tips.

****REPORTS JUST IN, MS.SOOKIE PERSON, HAS BEEN ARRESTED FOR ASSAULTING HER FINGER TIPS***

😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 35
awesome part once again...
i just love them...
they might actually not share every second of their lives but when they do they are completely honest how tough or bitter the truth or the words are...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazing conversation and superbly penned...

love the clarity in their thought processes and dialogues...they are very matured individuals in that way...

why do i have a feeling that Mitalee is going to be the heir - maybe thats why her father never really helped her in anything - she is the strongest one...

last chap? no Sooks...

P.S - loved ur and Faria's convo😆

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