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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Geet and Maan have wallowed in self pity blaming everyone for the mess called their life and have lost precious years of their life. Good that atleast now, they start to understand.

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

wonderful update... amazingly represented geet's dilemma and feelings...love emily, her characterization is superb

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@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

hope everything will be settled among geet-maya-nayantara

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Reality is just your perception of people, events and things. For a young girl to have a flawed perception made sense, now that she is older and wiser it is correct to see the full picture.

For someone who likes things black and white, I am beginning to like all the grays in this story. Thanks for the update and PM.

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

brilliant piece of work!!! loved this update!!!!!

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

part 31
am speechless...
for once i feel Tara is right in her act...
Geet is now realizing...
but well better late than never, Geet and Maya might settle between themselves like wise and family...
cont soon dear...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

In the end he wasn't there for her.

But her mother was. And for now, it was enough.

nice lines

wow...this fic has more drama than i can ever expect from you.

I hope Geet clears her mind and accepts the situation soon.

For once, Tara did right :)

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

wow it was absolutely fantastic update...

everybody is right in their own way...Geet now realized her mistake...

one thing Sookie...why the characters in ur FF are talking in such filthy language like fu...g, f..ku,or sister calling her sis bitch...in my family I never seen anybody use such language...
or I think I don't know the society where these words are used in a family

thanx for pm