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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

wonderful update...
to me everybody is right in their own way...
eagerly waiting for your next update...

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Awesome
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

yes... wht matter is d present nd d future to come... her father is nt here but her mom is... true conclusion...loved d update

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

I enjoyed the update, Sookie. I loved it! Can't wait to read the convo between mother and daughter..

Thanks for the update!

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

The songs says it all that I need to say tonight ...:)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sRY1NG1P_kw[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by -Aarya- - 13 years ago

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

That was such a nice way of showing the truth...

Sometimes you tend to cling on to the past and your POV on it. It becomes such a habit that you cant see outside it. A story is never complete unless heard from both sides - I am happy that Geet was mature enough to acknowledge her father's shortcomings and her mother's love - Maya has truly been a wonderful woman and mother to Geet - she suppressed her own heartbreak to stabilise her family - thats a great feat indeed ...

I specially liked Geet and Maya's phone convo. Its apt that you showed Geet running to Emily and not to Maan - it shows the strength of their friendship and the unbiasedness of a third person towards the situation...

Splendid update...😊

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: ucompleteme
Reality is just your perception of people, events and things. For a young girl to have a flawed perception made sense, now that she is older and wiser it is correct to see the full picture.
For someone who likes things black and white, I am beginning to like all the grays in this story. Thanks for the update and PM.

Loved your comment. Very well said😊 I match your preference of black and white - but Sooks stories are too tempting to avoid😊