SS: The Gift - Teaser Jan 9 pg 55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

i havent read anything sad fr a long time...nd discontinued reading something which would have or has a sad ending...because my last sad reading took me a lot time to cease my crying...

i wasnt getting nything to read...nd saw this ss...i ws actually scared only happy thing i read of yours ws teri bindiya re...nd really loved it...nd i found others quite sad...

nd after a long tym today i cried reading the update...nd felt really sad abt maya...

loved it!!!!!

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

JAZ , rocked the update . mera upar ka breathe upar hi hai aur neeche ka neeche . abhi bhi i did not become normal .. so, emotional and in one update many things happened . waiting for next ...nothing more to say just 👍🏼⭐️🤗

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

part 2
Jazzy dear i honestly NEVER expected such a twist...
OMG that was completely out of blue...
the GIFT now i understand...
am so speechless...
wanna know what was wrong with Maya and Rohan...
so Rohan is Geet's son but unfortunately his biological father is a swine, Dev...
i dunno what to say at all...
but very nicely written...
no connection between Maan and Geet except for Rohan who has a part of Maya in him which connects Maan and Geet...
cont soon dear...

PS - kahan se tumhe aise ideas milti hai?

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL STORY AND WHAT A TWIST

THIS IS THE FIRST FF OF YOURS WHICH I HAVE READ AND I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS KIND OF A TWIST

BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN

THE BEST LINE WAS WHERE SHE SAYS THAT THE BEST DAY OF HER LIFE WAS THE WORST DAY OF HIS

POOR MAAN, SLOWLY HE LOST HIS WHOLE FAMILY, FELT REALLY SAD SPECIALLY FOR THE LITTLE BABY MAYA

BUT REHAN IS SO MATURE, HE LOOKED UP THE PERSON WHO MADE IT POSSIBLE FOR HIM TO LIVE AND CAME ALL THE WAY TO THANK HIM

HOPE NOW THAT GEET IS THERE, SOME HAPPINESS IN STORE FOR MAAN

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

How do you do it? Building up a story one way and then making it completely different the next moment. There's no way this twist was seen. You know, I did wonder why u called this story The Gift...the setup gave no hints yet now I totally understand. So sad that his whole family passed...first with Pammi, then Brij, and then Maya. Very tragic. But you really did make this a beautiful story. You are truly talented and have a great knack of story-telling. Brilliant!