Okii here I am with my comments 😃
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Wow this was different .. a good different .. nothing like your usual except when it comes to Maan and Geet not being together! 😆
Well where should I start .. ok I absolutely love Geet's son!! What an obedient child! I mean you just don't find boys like Rohan these days .. still waiting to see why he's her miracle child .. but now that I've read the teaser for the second part (which I'm yet to read) I guess I have a jist of where it's leading.. but back to Rohan .. yea .. so you just don't see such civilized, mannered, respectful and independent boys like him anymore.. I mean they're so rare that it almost feels unreal that this boy actually listens to his mom instead of throwing a tantrum at every possible moment.. I don't know .. is this something that's common in children who don't have siblings? I guess it's because they have to grow up a lot on their own .. they become more independent that way .. but he's shooo cute 😳 LOVE HIM LOVE HIM! ❤️
Geet a teacher .. oh wow .. had to imagine DD in a teacher avatar lol .. but I liked the whole set up .. only mother and son .. of course the entire time at the back of my mind I was like "where's Maan" .. "is he dead" .. "are they married .. "are they divorced" 😆 ..you see .. reading your work has made me delusional .. no matter what I'm always having second thoughts at the back of my mind because with you -- you just NEVER.KNOW. 😆
So yea I liked the atmosphere .. very quiet .. I mean only two people .. who are just going about with their daily routine .. aww Rohan is so sweet and shy when he wants to ask her something but hesitates 😳 .. and how sweetly he mentions his birthday to her !
Ok coming to what he's wanted .. hmm .. I wonder how much or what he knows about Maan? I want to know if he knows Maan is his father .. because it's really interesting that he wants to meet him .. I guess he does know because of the tension that arose when he mentioned him .. and how Geet kept stalling their meeting .. well of course we're going to know all this in the next update .. which is up by now and I got to read it .. but yea .. lol
So yea you make Rohan so perfect that I feel like telling my brother to act more like him 😳 .. I mean my brother.. as he grew up..has turned into a spoilt brat .. right this moment.. he's arguing with my mom .. no kidding 😆 .. so yea you've made Rohan too perfect .. perfect student and all 😃 .. makes me think that having kids in the future shouldn't be so bad 😆
So they finally go to New York .. btw can't believe Rohan arranged everything .. what a wonderboy! There's no turning back or saying no with him 😛 Geet just had to meet Maan 😃
So Maan turns out to be the Khadoos that I imagined him to be .. just like the show .. except this one is a tad more khadoos than usual .. won't even allow anyone near him gosh .. where do they get all this attitude from .. think about the person waiting for you na 😆 sorry I was getting defensive for Rohan and Geet.. pura din wait karvaya! Shweet boy he was ready to wait for Maan the entire day!
So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana keeps a photo of Geet on his office desk .. well good enough sign that he still thinks about her and hasn't chucked her out of his life 😃 .. aww got a little teary when he was remembering her .. don't know if I'll feel the same way after reading Part 2 because the teaser itself made me a little mad.. but yea .. well he thinks about her .. wonder if he ever tried to call her in all those years .. and I'd like to see him justify himself if he hadn't .. especially knowing Geet was pregnant! (Well I'm just second guessing here as I haven't read the next part)
But yea .. I was kind of fuming at his pompous attitude of not attending the people who waited for him all day .. I mean comeon dude what if this was an emergency or what if they didn't know about making an appointment .. lol I'm thinking way too hard on this .. but oh wellz. 😛
So Maan finally decides to go home .. finally the moment we've all been waiting for .. like how the moment when he sees his own son who he's oblivious to has been kept a moment between these two only .. makes it more special .. it's always fun to see a man interact with his own child without knowing it .. the impact is that much harder .. but sweet Rohan finally gets to meet MSK .. and I'm still wondering if Rohan knows he's his son!
But of course Geet ko bhi aana tha .. and well this is just like a filmy moment .. was totally picturing it in my head.. man turns around to see his lover after all these years .. and first thing is a flashback .. that hot flashback lol! Hmm he mentions his father .. wondering if there's more to that or if that's just how he is .. doesn't like being called Mr. Khurana 😆
There's so much more .. and I can't wait to find out all of the mysteries revolving around these two when I go to read the next part!! 😃
But I loved the start to this.. I love Geet, LOVE Rohan .. and Maan .. well yet to like him although he's still dangerously hot as ever 😛 yea yea .. that's what matters.. his hotness 😆
Loved it! And Love ya .. and now I have major carpel tunnel so I shall take a break from typing! 😆
Z
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