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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye dear ... Hai dear...
just loved it.very nice n intresting part...thanks cuty
Enjoyed it alot...Glad u had fun
will wait for d next part...
Thanks alot for d pm



its fine...u need not thank me for the PM...😉
😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sunaha6



😃
Glad that you like it tani...(hope u didn't mind me calling u like taht)

will continue after ASAP

not at all di
ap jo bolna chahe wo bolo di😃😃
Edited by tanisha997 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hmm...what a romantic pyaar ka izhaar yaar...
just love it...
khand mishri just love it
and wanna read more romantic scenes

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: danno

hmm...what a romantic pyaar ka izhaar yaar...
just love it...
khand mishri just love it
and wanna read more romantic scenes


jab bhi kandh mishri bolthi hai,,,,mujhey bahut acha lagtha hai.,,,,,,,sure will give you more romantic scenes,,,,😳😳😳😳😳😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
hello suhana
so romantic post yaar ❤️ finally lv ka izhar ho gaya ha 😉
bt was 2 short😔 nw dreaming fr u ur next part 😍hehehehe
next part jaldi se update karo😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Heyyy Anusha🤗🤗


See.. I finaaly commented on your FF😉😆😆

What a proposal👏👏👏 Poor Arpi was so tired.. My cutie pie is very courageous👏👏👏

Avi too was soo wooried fr her.. A big hug to him😉😉🤗

Now Im sure... they wll speak thier heart out in the morning and will hug each other😉😉😉

so in short .. Romance is on the way😉

Im eagerly waitin fr it😳😳

Wonderful part⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love you😳😳

Btw.. when you are commentin on my FF❓❓

Im waitinggg


nd Please update sooon😉


PS: I updated my posts on page 1 and 4

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Hellooo...people,,,😊😊i know, this was the most longest time i've taken to update. almost a month...you guys really deserve a along update...woke up early and started writing...😭😭😭😭...but after i read back my own work, i understood the morning effect...hahahha...😆😆😆My god, i really want GKD 2 to start again😭😭😭...Missing avitha so much...those days were the best...ok..ok...Know u people will kill me if i mess around for more...Happy readinggg folks😃😃😃...I'll be back in the evening and i need good amount of comments😉😉😉...i am greedy now...😆😆😆😆😆

Part 5

Arpitha could listen to the stream flowing. She is no mood to wake up and find the way out of the forest. She hugged the rock tightly and pulled her legs closer. She could feel something beating. What could it be? She opened her eyes and found that she was not hugging any rock but it was Awdesh and she was in his arms tight enough to listen to his heart beat. She tried to push him away which woke him up and the act has caused pain, as her hair got stuck in his shirt's button.

Awdesh – "wait a minute. You will hurt yourself otherwise."

Arpitha – "awe… how you dare touch me. Who do you think you are?"

Awdesh looked at her stunned, but had to release her hair stands first.

Awdesh – "Don't move. Or else you will be at loss. I'll have to cut your hair."

Arpitha – "What, what did you say. I'll kill you if you touch my hair. Leave it. I can manage. Leave it."

Arpitha hit his hands away and tried harder. The hair really was stuck hard and knotted all around the button. Arpitha carefully undid each hair. Awdesh was going restless now and moved a little.

Arpitha – "Don't move. Stay silent and still."

Arpitha came closer and seriously was struggling with her hair. She didn't notice that, Awdesh was just an inch away from her and even air found it difficult to pass between them. Arpitha was still in her act when Awdesh put his hand around her waist and pulled her gently closer to his chest. Arpitha couldn't stop him but silently watch him with her hands on his chest. Silence started to make the atmosphere more passionate. Some forest sounds had broke the silence and arpitha moved away.

Arpitha – "Ouch my hair."

Awdesh – "wait. Let me help. Trust me, it won't hurt."

Arpitha watched while he carefully unknotted her hair. He helped remove each hair strand carefully. Arpitha was in her own land in the mean time. She could see his childish expressions while trying to help her out. His innocence pulled her much closer to him. Smiling to at him, arpitha found herself getting closer to him. Remembering the world, she takes a deep breath and pulls Awdesh's attention.

Awdesh – "it's almost done. Anyways I pity your pillow."

Arpitha (Surprised)– "Why?"

Awdesh – "I couldn't get out of your tight hug all night. You have good grip."

Arpitha opened her mouth wide open and chased him at the river bank while he ran in fun. He looked behind and found her irritated face also to be cute. Slipping away on the greasy rock Awdesh fell on the ground. Arpitha in no time climbed upon him and held his collar.

Arpitha – "First tell me, what you were doing here. How dare you touch me? Why the hell do you do this to me?"

Awdesh kept on smiling at her boyish acts. He found it good even being attacked by her. Arpitha kept on punching his rock hard chest and finally slowed down. Arpitha slowly started to sob. Awdesh notices and holds her in his arms.

Pushing her hair back her ear, Awdesh wipes out her tears with a worry in his eyes for her.

Awdesh – "I am with you arpitha. Don't panic. Nothing can happen to you. Stop crying."

Arpitha – "What else should happen now. You have touched me all night. I hate you."

Awdesh was shocked to hear that. What does she think of him? Awdesh let her go off and stood up without any further word.

Awdesh (Seriously) – "I didn't cross any limit. How could you…"

She stood up wiping off her tears.

Arpitha – "Why were you saying like that and laughing like some psycho."

Awdesh – "Leave it. Let's go now. We need to find the way out of this forest."

Arpitha followed him and all the day they have been walking and he didn't speak any word to her. Even when arpitha said something, he wouldn't respond. Arpitha couldn't understand his behavior. She waited for him to talk, but no use.

Arpitha – "By the way, what's your name?"

Awdesh just didn't want to answer. He was quite angry with her that she didn't trust him and how can she ever think of him like that. He remained silent without any word.

Arpitha – "I m asking you only. Hey!!!"

Awdesh still didn't answer. Arpitha stood right in front of him and cut his path.

Awdesh – "Move away from my way. We need to get out from here then I'll drop you back at your place. Then we'll never see each other again. I'll be done."

Arpitha was dumbstruck by his answer. She didn't make a move. She had no other idea of what happened to him. All that she knew was he is being rude to her. And what did he mean by he will be done.

Arpitha – "Fine. Even I have no interest in your details. Go ahead."

Her words hurt him more and more. Arpitha did notice that. What is he up to? He is ignoring her from morning. Why so? What did she say that he is being so rude? Arpitha continued to follow him without any word. The day started to rest and the night got ready for its shift. The duo sat down for some rest.

Awdesh – "Wait here. I'll be back."

Arpitha – "Where are you going. I will also come with you."

Awdesh faced her with his hands folded and gave her a scary look.

Arpitha – "o.k. will wait here."

While Awdesh was away, arpitha moved around the area and saw a light at a distance. She moved in that direction and found that they almost reached the village. Her face brightened up with happiness.

Arpitha (thinking to herself) – "Wait. I can't let this guy be rude to me. I'll find out what is his mind and heart. I'll not leave him without knowing what he feels for me. Yes."

Arpitha hurried to the place where Awdesh left her and waited for him. Awdesh was back and arpitha happily smiled at him.

Awdesh – "Come let's move"

Arpitha – "Not this way. I've checked this out and there is a dead end. Let's move in the other direction."

Awdesh suspected her words and arpitha hid her expressions and didn't let him find out her plot. Awdesh finally moved in the other direction. Arpitha danced at her victory and continued to follow him.

Starting the conversation,

Arpitha – "So, should we be so serious. Can't we be friends?"

Awdesh is still upset at her for not trusting him. He remained silent. Arpitha didn't give up.

Arpitha – "come on Awdesh. Stop it now."

Awdesh was surprised a bit and knew that she already knows who he was. He faced her with a happy smile.

Awdesh – "so, you know me."

Arpitha (Gulping down her words) – " umm. Yeah. I knew."

Awdesh – "Then why were you lying to me?"

Just then, huge sounds of people's screaming started coming. Awdesh moved In the direction into which arpitha denied and found the village people dancing to the tunes of some village folk songs. He faced arpitha.

Awdesh (seriously) – "So even this is a lie. What are you up to? Do you want to die starving? What is up in your mind tell me."

Arpitha couldn't hide her tears. She burst out into tears.

Arpitha (Sobbing) – "I was lying. Yes I did. I lied every time to my heart when it started to beat for you that it shouldn't. I lied every time to myself to never get excited when I see you. I even lied to my soul that I don't need you all my life. I lied every time to myself when I said I Hate you."

Awdesh came near her and hugged her silently. He wiped of her tears with his cheeks and planted a gentle kiss on her cheeks. The wind blew silently. The entire forest stopped to make sounds and the world felt that there were only these two people on earth. Awdesh held her comfortably in his arms and didn't have any intention of leaving her. Arpitha calmed down and felt the warmth of his hug. She hugged him back and they remained tight in each other's hug without a word but they could their hearts speak to each other. Arpitha broke the hug and moved apart. Awdesh continued to stare at her and waited for her to continue. Arpitha didn't react much. She moved and stood facing away Awdesh. Awdesh held her from behind and took a long breath.

Awdesh (whispering in her ears) – "Even I lied to myself many times arpitha. I lied to myself that I don't want to spend time with you. I lied to myself that I don't like you. I lied to you too when I said it was a mistake when I hugged you for the first time. I lied to myself every time when I saw you that I never can LOVE you."

Arpitha started to cry again. Awdesh could feel her tummy vibrating as she sobbed.

Awdesh – "Did I also lie to you that you look cute when you cry like a child?"

Arpitha laughed out as she sobbed and turned around to hug her man tight to her heart's desire. Awdesh smiled as he held her princess completely for life in his arms.

The night moved on with its time and so did our two lost lovers. The next day, arpitha woke up early again and moved up to his shoulders and rested her head on his chest feeling his heart beat. She started playing with his shirt buttons while he was still asleep. She looked up at his face and confirmed that he is still sleeping. She took a small forest shrub nearby and started tickling his ear. Awdesh didn't move. Arpitha repeated and this time harder. Awdesh didn't move.

Arpitha (Whispers) – "doesn't this man have any tickling sensations. Really he is a rock."

Arpitha turned away and was enjoying the early morning when she felt him pull her back and set her flat on the ground.

Arpitha (Surprised) – "What are you doing?"

Awdesh – "Tickling"

Awdesh started to tickle her waist which let arpitha to cry out of laughter.

Arpitha – "Please stop it."

Awdesh – "no way"

Arpitha couldn't take it anymore she threw her hands around him, pulling him closer and kissed him.

Awdesh pulled her closer and locked his arms around her making the act more passionate. Arpitha moved away and Awdesh held her back in his hug and examined her lips with his fingers. He moved forward and touched her cheeks with his lips sending tickles in her body. Awdesh continued and reached her lips again. Arpitha moved away in shy and smiled as she breath hard.

Awdesh (bowing before her) – "Arpitha, will u marry me. Will u be mine forever and lie to me every day that u hate me."

Arpitha looked happy. She cried and nodded her head happily in agreement. Awdesh rose up and lifted her in his arms and swirled her round.

*Ahem ahem* i am waiting for my comments sweeties...be generous BTW...😉😉😆😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Wopppieee back to 1position




yipeee...but where is my comment sweetieee😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
My Sunahaaa...😳😳😳😳

Finally.. U updated😛😛😛 Dont wry sweets.. Its ok...😉

Awesomest Update neha...👏👏👏👏

Their confession😍 Their hug😍 Their romance😍 Hayeee😍 Super hit👏👏

Wooohooo!!! Loved it!!!

I want a good SR haan!!😉😉😛😛😛😆😆 Plzz write it fr me😛😛😛

i knw im demanding too much😛😛😛 Plzz try 2 do it😉😉😉

As usual Awesome one!!

Update sooon😉😉

Love ya... Hugs and Kisses 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
yeahhh
omgg what a romantiv and passionate part
love u r writing yaar
love it

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