I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

at last u updated...awesome part as usual..waiting for b to b completed...and now m really failed to understand..why u always do deny the fact..that u r gifted writer

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Manipadma
edited part 6th A on pg 21...Part 6 B is on the way 😊 ..kindly ignore grammer nd spellings mistakes...

hey updated n din't pm us😡
also u din't even changed post topic with part updated n page no.
how will come to know tht u had update ff next part😕
i came to know while i was checking aru's post😊
nahi to yeh topic watchlist mein rakhna padega (but how will know tht u had updated or others had commented?😕 there should be option of such in watchlist)
was waiting for it so longgg😭
next time u better pm n update ff post topic n index too😆
😆😉😛

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

thanks for update
n angry for not pming
loved this part evenif its short
poor manu worried n the gr8 ARB talking in code language
and wht happened to Arti?
so again war between ARB & manu started
n she made a confident back stroke
gr8 girl power!!
wow again eye war!! oh means eyelock!!
but wht is going in the gr8 ARB's mind?

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

oh nooo...!
main late hoon kya comment karne ke liye!.
but mujhe koi pm nhi mile tha...

may b aapne kissiko pm nhi diya...
forget it.
i lov this story, so i will comment.

tho bichaari artii ka accident ho gaya...
but she is luckier than manu...
usse itni jaldi ajinkya ki ghhod ki savari mil gayi...
bechari manu.

manu worried for artii, n artii enjoying her ride in his arms...
lovely desc.
shorty ud, but i like it,
thnx for ud...
plz ud soon.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

@sweetsanyo n shruja...not only you...but lagta hai kisi ko pm nahi mila...

but the update was really nice...👏

again eye war is going to start b/w manu n mr. rudy...😍...waise naam kafi acha dundha tha...mr. rudy...😆

waiting for the part 6 b...😍

update soon...

luv u...😊

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Moumi majumder

@tmsg

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

oh nooo...!
main late hoon kya comment karne ke liye!.
but mujhe koi pm nhi mile tha...😕

i lov this story, so i will comment.

tho bichaari artii ka accident ho gaya...
but she is luckier than manu...
usse itni jaldi ajinkya ki ghhod ki savari mil gayi...
bechari manu.

manu worried for artii, n artii enjoying her ride in his arms...
lovely desc.
shorty ud, but i like it,
thnx for ud...
plz ud soon.