I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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Gauri

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Posted: 14 years ago

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plz update soon dear...& plz send pm as u update...waiting...

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karuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I'm writing now...will post soon...😊

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART - 5 A..

'' AJIN???''

''yeaa The one and only 'AJINKYA RAJE BHOSLE'..one of my close friend'' Yogi answered in little proudy tone

''RAJE???? '' she was hell confused.

''Yea...he is from Royal Maratha family''

'Royal Maratha'.. ohhh tabhi itne sharp feachers hai iske aur chalta bhi to aise hai mano puri duniya bas isika raj ho...' Manu's thoughts were racing in her mind while Yogi continued The Great Saga of Mr Rudy..no..no .. Mr Ajinkya Raje Bhosle..

'' He is one of the richest person here but still very down to earth..he is very helpful..It's just you should be aware of his behaviour..as he doesn't talk much people generally misunderstands him as rude,proudy but the thing is, he really can't tolerate clumsiness..'' Yogi was so engrossed in praising his dear friend , he missed the frown on manu's cute face..

''hmm..u said he is helpful ..but he never came here..'' she complained as matter of fact.

''aww..yea even i was thinking the same...why on earth he is not here??..I mean he was the one who always helped Mr Kapoor..in fact he was like son to him..then what happened now???''

Manu didn't utter a word just shrugged her shoulders ...

But her mind was now fighting with her...

'what happened now???? ...this must be due to me..but what did i do??..he had started it..first that eye war and then that chandni incidance..yes that was my fault but fir bhi..urggg...uff..just forget him manu...ab kuchh nahi ho sakta...ab wo yahan kabhi nahi aayenga...'

..Mansi was feeling little bad now...somewhere she had accepted her fault ...but due to her they had lost a neighbour ...a neighbor like HIM...this feeling of guilt was making her sad...

But little did she know , this bad was just a start...a start of somthing heavenly precious...

...Will add tomorrow part B 😃

Edited by Manipadma - 13 years ago

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

hey friends, thnk u for all your love n support to this ff...plzzz keep loving n commenting as it is the only thing that lead me to continue this ff...as we all know our dearest RT-MC are drifted apart ones again...its only thier ff's in which we can see them together...so i will love to continue it with all your support ...love u guys 😃

Part- 5B

It was late in the evening ...manu was pacing in frontyard waiting for jyo...jyo was out of the house all the afternoon and hadn't returned yet..

''manuuu...i'm leaving..i'll be back soon..'' Arti informed wearing her shoes.

''hey aarti ..it's getting dark yaar..''

''I know manu...but it's so boring to stay here in this house doing nothing...and don't worry..it's just an evening walk..'' she said casually.

''Actually it's LATE evening walk '' manu said pressing the word late..

''so what??'' aarti rolled her eyes ..

''okey, let me come with u..''

''ohh common manu...stop babysitting me...!!'' manu startled at her sudden burst...but then aarti lowred her tone ,

''i mean..jyoti is not here so...atleast one of us should be here na..''

''hmm..okey..but plzz don't be late...jaldi wapis aana plzz..nahi to muze aur tension aa jayenga''

''hey, meri chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai...uss jyo ko samzao...aajkal to uski har sham Mr Yogi ke saath gujarti hai..and that Mr Yogi ...he has become Mr JYogi now..''

''Okey okey...now plzz jaldi jayengi aap...jaldi jaayiye aur jaldi wapis aayiye..''

They both chukled on this and aarti left leaving manu all alone...

It was over a month now ... Everything was nearly settled in this month ..

Yogi was helpful ..he had helped them in every aspect of their work...

He was visiting them almost every day..but aarti was a little bit suspicious regarding his intentions as he was spending his time more with jyo either chatting or eating delicious food made by her...but it was undoubtful that their ready to cultivate garden and live worthy house was the result of yogi's constant encouragement and wholehearted help.

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Manu was alone in farmhouse for the 1st time ..she took a chair and placed it in frontyard ..as she closed her eyes, all the moments since their arrival in SA started to run in her mind...she was missing her beloved family...she was here in a forign land away from her family with friends and neighbours...neighbours...with the thought of neighbour that rudy again popped into her mind...she never expected to meet that rudy again but now that blue car was also missing ...According to Yogi Mr Ajinkya raje bhosle was out of town for some important work..

''..god knows what was that so called important work...anyways who cares..hun..achha hi hai, kam se kam najronse dur to hai...ufff manuu...stop it ..stop it...what are you thinking???...'' she jolted her head cursing herself.

The farmhouse was now engulfed in darkness..manu got up and lit a small lamp as they didn't had electricity yet...

It was quite late and jyo hadn't return ..manu was getting nervous ...half an hour passed in this anxiety ...it was unbearable to wait alone in that deserted farmhouse...she headed towards balcony atleast she could check whether any vehicle is coming or not...

The night was quite scary ...she herd some weird noises of drums played by tribal people ..in that lonly night that drum noises were raising her heartbeat in fear...she was now on the verge of crying..

''where are you jyoti...plzzz come backk...plzzz...''

It was enough now...she couldn't just wait and hope...she has to go and search for jyo as she never got so much late...thank god atleast Arti was nearby the house...but jyo???

She was about to leave when she herd a screeching voice of vehicle...but..it wasn't chandni (their station wagon) ..she literally ran towards the balcony only to see ...

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Precap - '' I don't understand why do girls have to be so dreamy ..!!!! '' , he said annyoingly

'' even I don't understand why one has to be sarcastic all the time.. !!!''

she replied in the same tone folding her hands...to which he turned instantly ...and once again her deep black eyes met that smoky intense eyes which were shining now with a tint of passion...

Edited by Manipadma - 13 years ago

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Gauri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

nice one dear 😊...

so he belongs to royal family 😍...hmmm...looking forward to see all his good qualities getting unfold before manu...

manu keeps on thinking about him all the time 😆...good going...

loved the precap...so finally they r going to meet again 😳...

plz plz update soon...as u said it is difficult time for RTMC fans & these FFs r the only source to see them together...so plz give the part soon...eagerly waiting...

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago

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samiksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

updated that long ago and i don't even knowww????????????

hey ms. rudy, here's a rude warning for you, that next time if you ever show such rudeness by not informing us about your update regarding our mr. rudy, then don't blame me for turning ruder to you.

PS- do not take my rude threat as some joke. i mean it, word by word.😛

and now wen u seem quiet scared of my warnings, there's another one - better bring my(oops) our rudy in the next update...😉

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Reply for Part -4:

Achha...so the name is AJINKYA RAJE BHOSLE...!!!

That's a cool name... sounds so royal... is he from royal family...chalo next part me pata chal jayega...!!!

To Manu ne puchtach shuru kar di hai...!!! Gud... Want to know ki Yogesh kya bolta hai...

I liked Yogi as well...!!! Waiting for next update...!!!

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

See... I was right... so AJIN is from a royal family...!!! Gud to see that my guess was right...!!!

So both Arti and Jyo have left Manu alone at house... and she is getting scared...!!!

Precap is interesting...m waiting for the update...

Cont soon...

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rashmi gautam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

they r simply irresistible...

manu thinking of him...though unconsciously

at last they r meeting again...i really waited for this...

ud soon...

eagerly waiting

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ananyashera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

nice one dear😊...

manu just can't stop thinking about ajinkya 😆...

precap was awesome 😳...can't wait to see them meeting again...

plz plz plz update soon...