I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

awesome update...👏

so our mannu is thinking about mr. rudy...n feeling guilty...😊

n jyo n yogi...jyo spending too much time with yogi...ye to gaye...😆

n mannu is alone in farmhouse......The night was quite scary ...she herd some weird noises of drums played by tribal people ..in that lonly night that drum noises were raising her heartbeat in fear...she was now on the verge of crying...😆

n ur precap...interesting...😃

yeah yeah...finally our mr. rudy n mannu ka conversation...😉

n thanks for the pm...

update soon...

luv u...😊

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Hey Karu...Superb, too good amazing part...i am glad you updated after a very long time...the conept is good...i am already liking MR ROODY the royal heir...please update soon...you have left on an interesting note...waiting eagerly...

Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Both the parts are lovely Karu

luvd them

I hope this Yogesh harbors no evil intention

y do I hv a feeling that our roody, oops i mean Ajinkya Raje Bhosle is attracted towards Manu n perhaps that's y he's avoiding her.

Awe! Poor manu is scared.

Intrstng precap. Now plz yaar Karu. Update soon this time.

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

woowww simply amazing n rocking parts..

loved all of them..

beautifully written..

loved all the interactions b/w manu n mr. rudy..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Thanx for update n pm n sorry for late reply
so the g8 ARB is from Royal Maratha Family!! wow!!
tabhi pehele hi eye war se shuruvat ki
but he was toh guzing her beauty manu replied n taken as war
but dil toh dono haare hai both r thinking of each other
ek blue car se chakkar kaat raha hai n ek mind mein bas usi ko lekar baithi hai!! areh milo toh pehele ek dusare se
ohh so mr yogi n jo ek dusare k jyogi ho gaye hai loved use of combination wisely 'JYOGI' hope he is not only playing with emo of jyo
And whts thi both arthi n jyo manu ko akele chhod kar gaye hai
n now she is scared n drum sounds increasing it!!
interesting precape
so Gr8 Mr.ARB will arrive in next part chalo darshan toh honge busy AJINKYA RAJE ji k (he toh busy in chakkar kating in blue car around girls house glace for manu😛)
waiting for next war ohh sorry update😉😍

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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piuli

@prahelika

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

nice update di...😃

hmm...so our ARB is not in this update too...inki rah dekhte dekhte to main aur manu buddhi ho jaungi...

yogi and jyo now a confirmrd couple😳...good😃

but poor manu...she is so restless as she didn't get a glimpse of her rudy for a while😳...love has already started showing its magic on manu...this is only the beginning dear manu...😳

karu di...don't know why but i think that ARB is not rude actually...there's a misunderstanding between these two..😕

so manu is scared.....poor girl...

i loved the precap...i found it very passionate for some reason...😳

plz update soon...