I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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piuli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: princesspriyart
Sunday to gya di 😭 bache ko rula diya na 😭 not fair ab to sunday bhi gya 😭 u r sooo... Lazy hoing

hi priya...jab tak di update nhi krte chalo sath milke rote hain😭😭😭

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: prahelika

hi priya...jab tak di update nhi krte chalo sath milke rote hain😭😭😭

Oye chup ho jao dono...nd pri kisne kaha m reply nai karti...u r to my swthrt na?
Nd prahu dnt cry baby iss update me naam pata chal jayenga 😃

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Sorry for being so late...kindly ignore grammatical error n spelling mistakes..thanxx guys for your love 😃

Part - 4 (a)

One week passed by after that insidance. The blue car passed over many times from their farm house ..but he didn't give even a single glance to them..

That day when manu again saw the car passing with it's extraordinary speed , she hissed out ,

''Uff kya aadmi hai !! and to our luck he is our nearest neighbour..'' manu said sarcasticaly
'' koi aur hota to ab tak hamari help karne jarur aa jata..par ye to Mr. Rudy hai na ...inse ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai ''

''Stop it manu !!! Why are you cursing him??'' aarti snapped ..''infact he was the one who had helped us..remember petrol favour ! Agar uss din usne petrol nahi bheja hota to pata nahi hamara kya hota !!''

''Aur to aur petrol ke paise bhi nahi liye...Mr. GAZER ne ! ''jyoti added winking at manu.

''Shut up jyo !!'' manu goggled.

''wait a sec ..Mr. GAZER ??? am i missing something?? Arti frowned again..

''kuchh nahi Rti ..jyo to kuchh bhi bolti rahti hai..'' manu said glaring at jyo with grited teeth.. ''aur waise bhi usne paise nahi liye qyonki usse show off karne ki aadat hai''

''Whatt?? Show off..??''

'' han show off..and why the hell we are talking about that man who even doesn't give a single look to us..''

''ooohhhooo .. to tum iss baat se chidh rahi ho coz he didn't give u a look !'' jyo again winked

''jyooo... !!'' manu shouted

'' nd by the way manu ...you started it !!!!'' arti

'' okk ok baba..my fault ! But now can we go back to work...of course with kind permission of 'THE RUDY FANCLUB' ..'' manu mocked and ran from their chuckling as jyo n arti was staring her with not so good intention...

...to b continue

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Happy new year friends...here is part B

Part 4 (B)

The next week went on without any diffrence in their daily routine ..but a grt diffrence could be seen in farmhouse and garden...

Farmhouse was in far better condition with suitable furniture nd their garden was ready for next seasonal crop ..

''Finally ...we done it !!'' manu exclaimed running a wide glance around the garden ..

''our garden is all ready for it's 1st seasonal crop...wowww''

''Hold on manu..abhi bhi bht kuchh baki hai''...jyo stopped her ''its just we passed our 1st step..thank god we got some good servants and...''

''..and a good friend ...like yogesh'' manu complete her sentence with a wink...

''really yaar...agar yogesh nahi hota to pata nahi ye sab ham kaise kar pate..'' -Arti

Manu remembered the day when yogesh visited their house for the 1st time

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Flashback...

It was a bright and pleasent morning but not so bright for our girls..they were so busy n tenced as everything was a mess in house n in garden also...they were trying hard ..they had some servants for cleaning n repairing but as they were new to this field ...things were not happening as they want...but still they were trying... suddenly they herd a loud voice...

''Good morning , lovely ladies !!! '' a joyful voice resonate through nearly empty farmhouse...

Jyo , arti n manu ran at ones towards the living room only to see a handsome man observing their house keenly,

''Hii..'' manu wished him reaching 1st

''ohh hii...i'm really sorry couldn't visit you earlier..''

He paused as he noticed three girls staring him in awe ..

''Actually i was on vacation with my mom - dad ..they live in pretoria...i just came back last evening and got to know about you guys...'' he paused again as he noticed confusion and lots of questions in their eyes...

''ohh sorry ..let me first introduce myself ...Hii i'm Yogesh sharma...in short.. 'Yogi'..'' he introduced himself with a toothy smile.

''My 'Lakota' garden is just near the hill ..one and half miles away from here...soo I'm your NEIGHBOUR ...umm you must be Arti ??'' he gestured towards Mansi...

''Ohh ..No no..she is manu..i mean mansi..'' jyoti replied instantly ...'' and here is Arti..Arti kapoor''..she properly introdused them..she was about tell her name when he suddenly asked ...

''and you miss beautiful???''

jyo startled by his words but then she friendly answered him..

''I'm jyoti ,aarti's friend...''

''ooo woww that means I'm honoured to be in neighbourhood of three beautiful girls'' ..he gave his toothy smile again..

It was his joyful and friendly nature that they got mix with him easily in short span of time...

But manu was more curious about one special neighbour ...that rudy wasn't ready to leave her thoughts easily...she decided to ask yogesh about him..may be yogesh knows him...

That evening arti was roming in garden and jyoti was in kitchen ...yogesh was instructing a servent somthing about reparing ..manu joined him ...this was the great opportunity to ask yogesh about that rudy...

''Thanks yogesh ! We are really lucky having a neighbour like you... You know...''

''Noo...i don't know ''

''umm wattt?? ''

''are.. i don't know how many times i have to tell u to call me YOGI...is it that difficult?? '' he asked pouting his face

''Hahaha okay...i just want to tell you ...you are the only person who seems to be happy having us as neighbour...''

''hey..noo ..it's not true..its not only me...infact everyone is really glad having you as neighbour..''

''Okey...and who are their in this 'EVERYONE'??? '' manu asked in curious tone

'' my English neighbour Mr.and mrs. Johnson ..this lovely couple soon going to have a baby...they will visit you soon..''

''ohh ..that's great ..and what about our nearest neighbour...that Mr Rud...arrr...i mean ..the one who has blue car..'' manu asked with thrombing heart...

''ohhh...you must be talking about 'AJIN'...''

''AJIN????''

''yea the one and only AJINKYA RAJE BHOSLE ...''

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ananyashera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

finally u updated😊...thank u so much...i was eagerly waiting...

so manu just can't forget about Mr. Rudy / Mr.Gazer 😆...oh i mean Mr. Ajinkya...so finally u told us the name of manu's prince charming😳...

i really liked this Yogi😊...he is so friendly & helpful...manu is curious...asking information about him😆...good going dear😉...

can't wait for another meeting of these two...but plz plz update soon...it is already getting unbearable to wait for RTMC show...so plz don't make us wait for long for next part...

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shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

At last after long time u updated 😛
Awesome update!! but too small dear!!👏
hehehe so manu frustrated now tht Mr. Rudy not paying attention n was irritated before tht he was gazing her😆 yeh tumhe kya ho raha hai?
milo naa tum to hum ghabraye,
milo to aankh churaye,
humein kya ho gayaa hai?😳

and new name to Mr. Rudy by jyo!! Mr. Gazer😆
hey count me too in "Mr. Rudy Fanclub"😳
karu seems tht u r not telling his name to us tht early😉
thanx for gr8 update🤗
waiting for next update😍

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: shruja
At last after long time u updated 😛
Awesome update!! but too small dear!!👏
hehehe so manu frustrated now tht Mr. Rudy not paying attention n was irritated before tht he was gazing her😆 yeh tumhe kya ho raha hai?
milo naa tum to hum ghabraye,
milo to aankh churaye,
humein kya ho gayaa hai?😳

and new name to Mr. Rudy by jyo!! Mr. Gazer😆
hey count me too in "Mr. Rudy Fanclub"😳
karu seems tht u r not telling his name to us tht early😉
thanx for gr8 update🤗
waiting for next update😍

awww thanxx so much shruja dear...are ye small update me aur add karne jaa rahi hun...for new year 😃...lov u 😊

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shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Manipadma

awww thanxx so much shruja dear...are ye small update me aur add karne jaa rahi hun...for new year 😃...lov u 😊

hey thank u so much!!!
koi toh rtmc ff update ho raha hai is year ending eve pe😃
chalo fir new year jarur happy jayega😃
thanks in advance🤗
waiting for additional update😍

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Gauri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

hey finally u have updated...but no pm 😡...

so manu just can't forget Mr. Rudy 😉...she is so eager to know about him that she was asking for information from Yogi 😆...so his name is Ajinkya...the one to whom no one can win over...but i am sure manu will win his heart 😳 ...eagerly waiting for their next meeting...

& is there one more love story starting between Jyo & Yogi?...hmm...looking forward to this one also...

plz plz update soon & do send the pm...waiting...