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Posted: 18 years ago
pls kripa dont kick him out of the house
or if ur r kicking him send him to my house i have no problem 😆
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ,

[Quote=jyotsna13]jyotsna13pls kripa dont kick him out of the house
or if ur r kicking him send him to my house i have no problem
pls cont soon
[Quote]pls kripa dont kick him out of the house
or if ur r kicking him send him to my house i have no problem
pls cont soon

lol ok ill ask her to send him to ur house ..lol

so ill post the next part umm on saturday or friday i guess

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Posted: 18 years ago
hello ppl thanx for being so pateint ill post the part tommorrow hope fully and if not then on the weekday

happy diwali and eid mubarak
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Posted: 18 years ago

CHAPTER 16


Kripa raised an eyebrow up at him then stepped forward, turning the stove off while using her other hand to take the wooden spoon from his huge yet soft hands.

"That's it you are not staying in this house anymore…
Mid way her sentence she glanced up at the man she dragged out of the kitchen.

"He had the what are you talking about look"

"I mean come with me ..the boredom is getting to your head we will go out to lunch and then to movies" Kripa finished her sentence just as she took his apron off for him.

They had lunch at "nandos", Kripa ordered her favorite chicken trinchados and Angad ordered peri rice with chicken.Lucnh went smoothely and the movie was awesome.Kripa had her favorite honey dew frozen bubble tea and so did Angad.

After the movie they just sat around square one discussing the movie and talking about random stuff. Angad indeed was a humorous guy. Kripa liked his company and so did he. they sat there without knowing what time it was until Angad stood up stretched and looked ,his watch read 8;30.

"what?!" he exclaimed half jumping

"what what?" Kripa raised both her eye brows standing up

"its 8;30 ,we've been here for almost 4 hours"

"seriously"

"yep"

They had to cross the roads two times before entering the condo's .the idea of crossing the road made Kripa sick, she was scared of crossing it. They were standing near the pole, Angad had already pressed the button.
"Kripa come on" Angad shouted he was already halfway and seeing Kripa fiddling with her fingers a nervous look on her face made Angad realize that she was scared of crossing the road. He ran towards her looking right and left. held her hand with his right hand and they slowly jogged through the crossing Angad held his left hand up to his chest level on the side to let people know to stop.

When the white man flashed on the signal pole Angad swept Kripa from her feet and started walking leaving Kripa shocked, she geld his neck tightly and her eyes were shut close. behind those eye lids Kripa saw flashes of some guy holding a girl scared she opened her eyes, she was in her bed now, she had a different vision, a girl standing on a road scared, the cars honking and a car speeding towards her, so scared to see what will happen next she opened her eyes.

She got up and sa5t on the floor took out a box from under her bed,it was silver with carvings on it which made the box look antique.

Sitting with a box a little box which held her entire life in it, for almost forever. She didn't know what she was about to explore know,but was scared,withn mixed feelings wanting and not watning to know the lid was cracked openby her soft hands.

In the box lay a black diary on top of 2 brown envelopes holding the diary to her face and examining it in the light of the lamp beside her she placed it down on the floor, both the envelopes were confidential and for her.
Too scared to read and see all the stuff in it she kept all her belongings in the box and placed it on her side table with the lid open.

At 10 in the morning she was ready with a white skirt, which fell loosely up to her knees and a red tank top on. It took her an hour and a half to mold her hair in that complicated French braid, her hands would get tired every time she would reach halfway through it but she did it.
When she walked out of the room she saw Angad waiting for her to come out so he could go change." morning sleepy head" she teased him as he walked pass her, scratching his head of messy hair. when Angad came back outside in the living room he wished Kripa morning and sat down on the chair near the island.Kripa looked at him from buttering her toastand smiled.he was looking so increadibly handsome in his jeans and a hollester "t" casual but breath taking.

"Angad

"hmm" he looked up from his breakfast.

" what are you ding today?" Kripa asked after gulping down her juice.

"nothing" his reply was spontaneous yet casual and resumed eating his omlette.

"chalain?"

"kahan"?

" to my boutique" she smiled holding her purse and a denim jacket in the other hand.

"what no… not the boutique" he said getting astonished.

"oh yes you are I have seen the result of you staying home alone..aaj jab mian waaise aayi kya pata tum mujhe hi ghar se bahar nikaldo" Kripa was talking and dragging hin towards the door.

" acha ok but my jacket"he tried to get away but Kripa had it already and before he knew it she was helping him with it.

"KRIPAAAA…. Where does this go?" he yelled from the other side of the plot.

"What?" Kripa made her way to the wall Angad was looking at. There were 5 humongous cartons around him. Angad had a huge question mark on his face he was holding a bowl full of pot puree and a shawl in his hands.

"Where is this suppose to go?" he questioned her when Kripa took the stuff from his hands he was in a deep thought.

"You certainly have good sense of interior decorating" Kripa was now standing 2 feet away from him in front of the table where she placed the goods.

" sab tumhare saath rehke seekha hai Alizay" Angad smiled ,which reflected from his eyes but vanished as fast as it had entered his face.

HELLO friends eid mubarak and avery very happy diwali to all fo you maza aaya ke nahin?? ok so here was the next part hope you all enjoy and dont forget to post your commenst and thoughts in there and tell me the 2 days you guys would like to read the story [wed,fri,sat or sun> okies dokz

so bye
-Hania
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
alizay is his so-called daughter rite?? i think he named her after his "past".........

great part.. continue sooooooooonn

o and i would like ot read this wed and sat...
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Posted: 18 years ago
eid mubarak and happy diwali nice part cont soon

😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
New part comming up in a few hours and yeah ill continue this ff 3 days aweek
kk

Edited by Hania baweja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Chapter 17


"KRIPAAAA…. Where does this go?" he yelled from the other side of the plot.

"What?" Kripa made her way to the wall Angad was looking at. There were 5 humongous cartons around him. Angad had a huge question mark on his face he was holding a bowl full of pot puree and a shawl in his hands.
"Where is this suppose to go?" he questioned her when Kripa took the stuff from his hands he was in a deep thought.

"You certainly have good sense of interior decorating" Kripa was now standing 2 feet away from him in front of the table where she placed the goods.

" sab tumhare saath rehke seekha hai Alizay" Angad smiled ,which reflected from his eyes but vanished as fast as it had entered his face.

She figured he wanted to be left alone.they drove in silence,without speaking a word without asking a question,she took him to her all time favorite place,her bestfriend,the lake.where she would sit let all her tears sink in the water of the lake.she could sit there and without hesitating share all her feelings.leaving him there she went to run some errands.

Angad sat there tears rolling down his cheeks eyes swollen,he hadn't cried since so long. He kept it inside,locked deepin hi heart. He still had the hope of meeting her someday ,somewhere.

Angad was standing in front of the mirror putting his jacket on.he had to perform in this caf,in the past 2 weeks this was the caf he would end up after his search,oneday the manager heard him humming some song and asked him to perform on a certain day.that certain day is the silver jubilee of the caf.

Sitting on a stool the spot light on him he strung the chords of his guitar.


Koi jo mila to mujhe aisa lagta tha
jaise meri saari duniya main geeton ki rut
aur rangon ki barkha hai khushbu ki aakdhi hai
mahki hui si ab saari fizaayen hain
bahki hui si ab saari hawaayen hain
khoyi hui si ab saari dishaayen hain
badli hui se ab saari adaayen hain

jaagi ummengein hain, dhadak raha ahi dil
sapnon main toofaan hain, hoton pe nagme hain
aakhon main sapne hain, sapnon main beete hue
se vo saare lamhe hain

jab koi aaya tha, jazron pe chhaya tha
dil main samaya tha, kaise main bataun tumhe
kaise use paaya tha, pyaar ke chehre pe bikhri jo julphen
to aisa lagta tha jaise kohre ke peechhe
ek os main dhula hua phool khila hai jaise
badal main ik chaand chhupa hai

He could see her standing in front of him hiding her face from her dupatta , when Angad moved his hand a bit closer she ran away laughing.

aur jhaank raha hai jaise raat ke parde main
ek savera hai roshan roshan aakhon main
sapnon ka saagar jismain prem sitaron ki chaadar
jaise jhalak rahi hai

lahron lahron baat kare to jaise moti barse
jaise kahin chandi ki payal goonjey
jaise kahin sheeshe main jaam girey
aur chhann se tootey jaise koi chhip ke sitaar bajaye

jaise koi chaandni raat main gaye
jaise koi hole se paas bulaye
kaisi meethi baatain thee
vo kaisi mulakaatein thee
vo jab maine jaana tha
nazron se kaise pighalte hain dil
aur aarzoo paati hai kaise manzil
aur kaise utarta hai chaand jameen par
kaise kabhi lagta hai swarg agar hai
to bas hai yahin par

usne bulaya mujhe, aur samjhaya mujhe
hum jo mile hain, hamain aise hi milna tha
gul jo khile hain, unhe aise hi khilna tha
janmo ke bandhan, janmo ke rishtey hain
jab bhi hum janme to hum yahin milte hain

kaanon main mere jaise, shahed sa ghulne lage
khwaabon ke dar jaise aakhon main khulne lage
khwaabon ki duniya bhi kitni haseen aur
kaisi rangeen thee khwaabon ki duniya
jo kahne ko thee par kahin bhi nahi thee

he closed his eyes ,expected and unexpected tears started rolling down his cheeks memories of the past years played in his mind… all the places and all the things they did together. The day he got to know ,she wasn't with him anymore ,she was never ever going to be with him anymore.

khwaab jo toote mere, aakh jo khuli meri
hosh jo aaya mujhe
maine dekha maine jaana
vo jo kabhi aaya tha, nazron pe chhaya tha
dil main samaya tha, ja bhi chuka hai
aur dil mera ab hai tanha tanha
na to koi armaan hai, na koi tamanna hai
aur na koi sapna hai
ab jo mere din aur ab jo meri ratain hain
unmain sirf aansoon hain
unmain seif dard ki ranj ki batain hain
aur pharyaadein hain
mera ab bhi koi nahi main hoon aur khoye
hue pyaar ki yaadein hain

he couldn't take it anymore .he crashed into the floor hands covering his face he started sobbing uncontrollably

HELLO frnds here is the next [art hope u all like it i kn ow its short but still kyounnke abhi next kuch parts main bohut saara kuch hone waala hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi acn u plzz tell me wich film the song is from..

btw good part 😛

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