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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyszzzzzzzzzz ......thnxz for liking it ... and nabz ...thnxzz i hope i win heeh
ill continue soon inshallah
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HEY!! HOW RU ALL?? HOPE U GUYS R FINE AND WAITING ANXIUOLSY FOR THE MARCH BREAK LOL...YEAH SAME ME TOO ..I JUST CANT WAIT TILL THIS WEEK ENDS CUZ THEN I GET TO SPEND TIME WITH MY FRNDZ ...HMM SO....I HAVE MADE U GUYS WAIT ENOUGH NOW ..SO FOR THE TREAT OF THE WEEK ...HERE IT IS ...ENJOY!!

PART ^6^

So ronit told her abt what happened while she was gone. First she got a bit worried about the nightmare thingy because the last nightmare was like a year ago …but then Kripa assured her that she was ok.
"So back to the point…should I go or not?" they sat there sipping on their coffees and discussing abt the plan when Angad came in with a girl and sat beside kripa's table.
Angad 's face had mix emotions he was sad and worried, just then the girl spoke up."Bhai kya hai? I am going for studies, not for a war …and over react bit too much …more than Mum". Angad looked at his sister and said "laikin Aaliyah I'm gonna miss u, why do u have to leave?" Aaliyah looked at her brother..Like what's up with him? Even though he was older than her he acted like a 5 year old.Even Anu acted older than him ….uff!!!!!

Anu.Was their eldest brothers daughter …they were three siblings. The oldest was Amey bhaiyya who was now married and worked with hi dad in the Khanna empires his wife's name is Anjali who is a homemaker. Next comes Angad.He is a singer and then Aaliyah the jaaaaaaan of the Khanna mansion. Aaliyah and Angad are very close to each other …
Oh brother! This is going to be a big day …she thought.
Aaliyah is leaving for Canada in 2 days and that's what the argument was abt he doesn't want her to go because he thinks that he is going to lose someone he Luvs the most, someone who is really close to him again. Aaliyah knows that but she wants him to move on …she wants him to learn to alone for a while…even though he is not going to be alone with full house especially anu's loves her chachoo a lot.
After an hour of conversation on both the tables they go home; Kripa satisfied that she isn't going anywhere, but Angad knowing that he has to move on..He has to move on in life and leave the hand of those memories as he walked out of the caf it felt like he was dragging himself to the future ,should he be happy ?if Aaliyah is going to leave early she is gonna come back soon or the fact that she is leaving…someone very close to him is leaving once again.
Angad an Aaliyah were in the same car and he was driving, happy yet very serious very sad. Once in a while Aaliyah would look at him and smile when she started to laugh and Angad looked at her angrily and stopped the car "kya hai…what's the problem" required and annoyed Angad. "Nothing. We just had a 2-hour chat that you have no problem abt me leaving. Kya bhaiyya. How is it going to work if you do that?" asked Aaliyah. She knew what Angad felt but didn't want to mention it "bhaiyya aap kabhi kahi na mujhse chote bachon ki tarah act karte ho" she said again, Angad couldn't say anything; he just hugged her and continued to drive.
Kripa's car
In kripa's car she sat behind the wheels started the car and reversed it, while driving all she could think of was Angad and Aaliyah. How close they were and their fight in the caf.. it was so cute..
When she reached home, it was 3 o'clock; she threw her purse on the sofa and went in the kitchen to get a drink of water,
5 mins later, a servant stood in front of her asking what she wanted to eat. she replied "no… I'll wait till bhaiyya and bhabhi come" the servant was walking away when she called him back asking" do u know where they went?" and the servant nodded in disagreement. A few mins later, she was upstairs taking a shower.

It was about an hour later, she was outside on the patio painting when the servant came asking "khana laga dooon?" she replied" no I'll wait for them" after he was gone, she started to paint again. 30 mins later when she was tired of painting, she wrapped up all the stuff and sat on the recliner grabbing a book to read. As minutes passed, she got so absorbed in the book that she actually thought that everything that was happening in the book was happening to her and leaded herself to her dreamland.
2 hrs later the trance was broken by the servant there was a phone call for her. Sighing, she stood up straightening her lime green kurti and walked in through the sliding doors. Her grip on the phone got tighter as the caller spoke she felt the floor exploding and her knees went weak, everything in front of her was getting blurry but she got control of her self, over her emotions and handed the phone to the servant.

Running out of the door and drove away. she wanted to get there as fastest .running her hand through her hair she remembered past few hours before dozing off to her dreamland ….how many times she had called prithvi and mishti cell but no one picked up the phone. Reaching the hospital she ran inside to the receptionist. "p..prithvi bose"? She asked nervously hoping the lady would say that no one by this name are here and ….

"go down the hallway and the room to ur right" said the lady. She ran to the room but stopped in front of the door that said "Operation Theater".





COMING UP : WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM?? WILL THEY SURVIVE OR WOULD KRIPA HAVE ANOTHER GUEST ENTER IN HER LIFE FULL OF SADNESS ??..KEEP GUESSING UNTIL THEN TOODLES

HOPE U GUYS LIKED ..IT ...DIDYA?? OK SO WAITING FOR UR REPLIES ...ANXIUOSLY...

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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loved it! don't do anything to p-m!!!! and can't wait for more!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nabz ...wait and read ...and there are a few surprises in store for u guys ....something u guys wud never expect. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hania baweja

hey nabz ...wait and read ...and there are a few surprises in store for u guys ....something u guys wud never expect. 😉

hope they r happy good surprises........i luv ur fan fic....its soooooooo awesum.... i cant wait 2 see whjat happens.. plz.cont.soon

luv himani

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hwy ..how are u guys??...did all of u have fun in the march break or not?...i am so so sorry i couldnt udate the part sorry but here it is..


[Quote=Sour Skittles] Sour Skittles hope they r happy good surprises........i luv ur fan fic....its soooooooo awesum.... i cant wait 2 see whjat happens.. plz.cont.soon

luv himani
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hmm so himani ..i sant tell u whther the surprise is ahppy one or a sad one ..but ..i can garuantee u that ..its gonna be good and u will like the story for sure ...so keep on reading ..
luv ya ..
hehe
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so guys here is the

PART 7

It was about an hour later, she was outside on the patio painting when the servant came asking "khana laga dooon?" she replied" no I'll wait for them" after he was gone, she started to paint again. 30 mins later when she was tired of painting, she wrapped up all the stuff and sat on the recliner grabbing a book to read. As minutes passed, she got so absorbed in the book that she actually thought that everything that was happening in the book was happening to her and leaded herself to her dreamland.


2 hrs later the trance was broken by the servant there was a phone call for her. Sighing, she stood up straightening her lime green kurti and walked in through the sliding doors. Her grip on the phone got tighter as the caller spoke she felt the floor exploding and her knees went weak, everything in front of her was getting blurry but she got control of her self, over her emotions and handed the phone to the servant.

Running out of the door and drove away. she wanted to get there as fastest .running her hand through her hair she remembered past few hours before dozing off to her dreamland ….how many times she had called prithvi and mishti cell but no one picked up the phone. Reaching the hospital she ran inside to the receptionist. "p..prithvi bose"? She asked nervously hoping the lady would say that no one by this name are here and ….

"go down the hallway and the room to ur right" said the lady. She ran to the room but stopped in front of the door that said "Operation Theater".

She felt dizzy and nervous, not able to control her balance she got hold of the chair beside her ,sitting on the chair she tried to calm her self ,tried to over come ,tried to hold back the Lava erupting in her heart.


Couple of minutes later a doctor came out of the operation theater. Rushing up to him she asked .. "h.how ..How is my family doctor?" the doctor replied "we are trying our best Mr Bose has lost a lot of blood and the ladies are having problem …breathing" saying that he goes to the operation theater again…. Kripa walked over to the receptionist to ask where could she get water.

After drinking water she walked back to her chair and sat down, The time seemed to crawl …slower than a turtle Kripa stood p and was walking back and forth. It was killing her. Why couldn't they just tell? As each minute passed by or we should say second, it made her feel that she is going to lose them. Just thinking abt it made her cry. An hour or two passed. Doctors came and went, nurses bought cylinders of oxygen and a few more medicines. An hour later a doctor came rushing out and called for any relatives of the Bose family. And Kripa stood up saying yes its me. It was a lady doctor she came up to her and put her hand on kripa's shoulder saying" I am sorry.. They are no more" " what?!" she cried unbelievingly.

The doctor placed her hand again on her hand again on her shoulders and said that its true. She shoved her hand and started to walk backwards saying "no. That it is not possible" tears welling from her eyes. How can this happen. They just can't leave her like that. A day passed.. She was sitting in her room, her hair messed up. She was wearing white shalwar kameez. Her knees up to her chest and looking at the pictures beside her lay her diary. Today she wrote in it after at least 2 weeks. Last 2 weeks of her life were the best. But this had to happen she was thinking over tall this when someone knocked the door and entered it was Niharika.
She sat down beside her on the floor moving pictures aside. Kripa turned and looked at her. The other thing she knew was that she was hugging her. Both of them parted…Niharika could see how miserable she was. After 20 mins of silence Kripa said "I am leaving" in a firm, calm but shaky voice.

Niharika looked at her in disbelief, "what?. Where?"
"Iam leaving for Canada in 2 days " she said again only more calm this time.
"But …but why?" inquired Niharika.
"Bhai ,maasi & bhabi wanted me to go to Canada. to study further ..and that's what Iam gonna do."
"But Kripa…" before Niharika could continue any further Kripa said "no …no nihi …no if's or but's… all my life nihi..All my life. I have done what I wanted, main nain kabhi kisi ki koi baat nahin maani ,not like I was a bad kid or anything ..But..But now I feel like I owe "them" something …some part of my life.." tears welled up again in her eyes ..Niharika wiped them away fro her. Her eyes were read from crying …but not anymore. she is not going to cry, she is not going to melt in front of anyone not even her self. She has to be strong; no she has to live up to their expectations. From now on..These eyes wont well up on those stupid things.



so how was it?.....

to know if the decision kripa made was made in ...a hurry ..and if she is gonna go to canada or not ,keep on reading....

PSSTTTT::: she meets someone ...and that someone ...bbecomes her frnd...is that frndship for good or for the worst...and who is that some one?.

guess and post ur msg ... 😃 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay!!!!! i liked the part, i won't say loved it becuz it was depressing. as far as guessing wat happens next is concerned, let me inform u that i have appointed myself to be the local astrologer and thus guessing is wat i do....so here are my predictions:
venus says that kripa does leave for canada n meets angad's sis who is also going there n then angad's sis n kripa become good frndz!!!!! prove my star reading abilities strong / weak by posting ur next update real soon!!!!!!!!!!!
ps. i am watching out for those surprising twists!!!!!!!
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hey so did Neha die in the accident or was it only mishti,damini, and pritvi? 😭 😭 😭
nice update, loved it and continue soon. 😊
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Hello guys how r u all??....nabz this one is for u ..hehe even tho ur alwasy online ..ur still not ..ur sisters are preatty nice hehe..

ok so here it is

PART 8

Couple of minutes later a doctor came out of the operation theater. Rushing up to him she asked .. "h.how ..How is my family doctor?" the doctor replied "we are trying our best Mr Bose has lost a lot of blood and the ladies are having problem …breathing" saying that he goes to the operation theater again…. Kripa walked over to the receptionist to ask where could she get water.

After drinking water she walked back to her chair and sat down, The time seemed to crawl …slower than a turtle Kripa stood p and was walking back and forth. It was killing her. Why couldn't they just tell? As each minute passed by or we should say second, it made her feel that she is going to lose them. Just thinking abt it made her cry. An hour or two passed. Doctors came and went, nurses bought cylinders of oxygen and a few more medicines. An hour later a doctor came rushing out and called for any relatives of the Bose family. And Kripa stood up saying yes its me. It was a lady doctor she came up to her and put her hand on kripa's shoulder saying" I am sorry.. They are no more" " what?!" she cried unbelievingly. The doctor placed her hand again on her hand again on her shoulders and said that its true. She shoved her hand and started to walk backwards saying "no. That it is not possible" tears welling from her eyes. How can this happen. They just can't leave her like that. A day passed.. She was sitting in her room, her hair messed up. She was wearing white shalwar kameez. Her knees up to her chest and looking at the pictures beside her lay her diary. Today she wrote in it after at least 2 weeks. Last 2 weeks of her life were the best. But this had to happen she was thinking over tall this when someone knocked the door and entered it was Niharika.
She sat down beside her on the floor moving pictures aside. Kripa turned and looked at her. The other thing she knew was that she was hugging her. Both of them parted…Niharika could see how miserable she was. After 20 mins of silence Kripa said "I am leaving" in a firm, calm but shaky voice.

Niharika looked at her in disbelief, "what?. Where?"
"Iam leaving for Canada in 2 days " she said again only more calm this time.
"But …but why?" inquired Niharika.
"Bhai ,maasi & bhabi wanted me to go to Canada. to study further ..and that's what Iam gonna do."
"But Kripa…" before Niharika could continue any further Kripa said "no …no nihi …no if's or but's… all my life nihi..All my life. I have done what I wanted, main nain kabhi kisi ki koi baat nahin maani ,not like I was a bad kid or anything ..But..But now I feel like I owe "them" something …some part of my life.." tears welled up again in her eyes ..Niharika wiped them away fro her. Her eyes were read from crying …but not anymore. she is not going to cry, she is not going to melt in front of anyone not even her self. She has to be strong; no she has to live up to their expectations. From now on..These eyes wont well up on those stupid things.

"don't put yourself in a cage and limit yourself.i mean yeah its good you have to control your tears and emotions ,but…" " nahin ..iam not being hardonmy self ..its hust the way it has to be ..its destiny.."
"yea ..so it was ..destiny …it was detiny ..that all that happened to you in those 5 years ,bhaiyya's accident ..that was destiny,you going to Canada that is destiny that all was bound to happen but .. being hard on your self limiting yourself and forcing yourself to smile isntdestiny,that's you whos doing it …not god ..ok.."
"nihi…plz ..i really don't wanna argue..wud u plz help me with my packing and yeah plz call ronit too…cuz this is probably the last time I wud ever ask you guys for help." And nihi truned around wiping a slap on kripas face …"what the hell is your problem ..missy?..kab se tumaree baqwaas sune jari hoon… "its all destiny" "and I have to be independent" talk …stop it ok..stop the nonsense this instant ….whay are you vlaming all of this on destiny..huh..and being independent doesn't mean ..all that your saying ok..!" she said all this fuming with anger.and instantly hugged ,both of them crying . "Kripa plz …stop being so harsh ..so tough on tour self ..plz." niharka said

Kripa broke the embrace and walked over to her bed "niharkia ..plz ….i have to go …don't stop me"."you've gone nuts".was what nihi said while leaving the room to call Ronit…because she knew ..there was no use in explaining Kripa furthur …because she was always like that ..never taking anyones advice…if her mind was made up.nihi thought this while walking down the hallway …a lot of memories crossed her mind ,when they were in college ..how they used to bug the teacher ,and when ronit first joined the college and their prank on him in the caf,she just smiled at those smiled but her eyes were welling up …she didn't have to call ronit because was standing in front of her as she reached the living room,and instantly hugged him ,she was crying and saying"ronit ..kyoun ..kyoun ..Kripa kyoun nahin sunnti kisi aur ki.bas hamesha apni hi kyon chalati hai?ronit she is being really toug on her self"

It was 2 hrs later when the packing was almost done and they were just sitting out on the patio when ronit broke the silence "so…kripa tum wahan jaa ke humain bhool jaaogi na!" Kripa looked up at hi,,tears in her eyes "haan tum doono ko kaun yaad kara ga!" and hugged him .nihi joined them as they cried.ronit spoke "why are you doing this"!
"I have to " she said in the niddle of je sobs .

IN THE KHANNA MANSION

Angad was being chased by Anu,they were running all around the house,Angad would hide behind people but she would catch because every one was too short ..heheh.they both end up on angads bed.anu sitting on top of angads stomach playing with the buttons of his shirt
"chachoo"…
"hmm"he said smilling.
"chachoo..you promised me!"
"oh iam so sorry bacha ..i forgot again" he said making a "sorry" face.and those twinkiling eyes on anus face truned sad and her lower lip moved a bit forward."aww ..anu..sorry bacha.."..and anu moved a bit closer to angads cheek and rubbed her nose against angads shaved cheek."oh no…not that bunny nose he said and handed her the chocolate and anu kissed hi cheek saying "thank you chachoo I luv u"she jumped off from hi stomach and ran away.

Angad stood up straightening hos shirt and walked away.coming out of the room he bumped in to Aaliyah.
"ouch..bhai..daikh ke nahin chal sakte ?"she said rubbing her head
"array…aiwain main …tum mere kamre main ari thi,tumhain nazar nahin aya?" Angad snapped at her rubbing his arm.
"deewar jaise to aap ho hi to mujhe laga ke deewar hai aur baad mian darwaza aye gaa" she said getting annoyed
"hahaha ..u carck me up .."he said sarcastically,made aface at her and waled away

DOWNSTAIRS
Anjali is standing in front of Angad asking him "Angad tum nain anu ko aaj phir chocolate laa di?"
"haan bhabi par…"
"par kiya …addi? Kyoun uss ko bigaar rahe ho?"
"bhabi..don't worry who bigar nahin rahi hai aur plus jab who kuch galat karti hai to main usse samjhata bh to hoon ! aur aapko to pata hai ke iss dunya main meri sirf 3 weaknesses hain (1) Aaliyah,(2) anu (3)…"his voice trailed off

Anjali hugged her dewar cum younger borther and said smilling "tum nahin mano ge naa!"
"never" he reaplied smilling ear to ear.


SO HOW WAS IT HUH? HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT ...
NABBYY UR PREDICTION HAHA
LUV YA 😳
BBYE

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago
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OMG IM ALREADY IN LOVE WITH UR FAN FIC!!! Lovely part! Cont. soon plz!

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