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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tkx for pm
G8 update dear
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Pyar Ishq Mohabbat...inse badhkar kya?
PART-5
Geet remained mute & was looking into his eyes. Maan also looked in her eyes and was mesmerised by those innocent eyes. Both were unconscious of the fact that they were in each other's arms. Maan realized their position and instantly left her and started going away from her but her dupatta got stuck in his watch. He turned towards her and was lost by her smile. Geet comes closer to him and stopped few inches away.
Geet: Hi! aap yaha?
Maan came in his senses and was frustrated by himself. He can't help himself not to look at her.
Maan: nahi ye mera bhoot hai.😆
Geet lifted her hand and touched his face, first his forehead, his eyes, his nose and at last his lips😳. Maan felt like heaven and was mesmerised by that soft touch but came into his senses. He snapped her hand and got angry.
Maan: ye tum kya kar rahi ho?
Geet: mai to sirf check kar rahi thi ki aap bhoot ho ki nahi.😆
Maan:kya?😕
Geet (loudly in his ears): mai to sirf check kar rahi thi ki aap bhoot ho ki nahi.😆
Maan kept his palms on his ears and got more angry.
Maan: are u mad? why are u shouting in my ears?😡
Geet (innocently): aap hi ne kaha kya. isliye maine thoda tez se bola.😆
Geet smiled while answering and Maan again lost his track.
Geet: aap yaha shopping karne aaye the. mai bi shopping karne aayi thi. aapne kya-kya kharida?
Maan: tumse matlab & by the way do you even know me?
Geet: are aap bhool gaye wo annual function wale din maine aapko patti bandhi thi. mai Geet hu.
Geet smiled and Maan thought that her name is like her, sweet.😳 But regret came over him of thinking like this.
Maan: tum Geet ho ya Meet muje tumse koi matlab nahi. samjhi tum.
Geet: aaj mera birthday hai or Meera kehti hai ki agar koi kisi ko uske birthday wale din daat ta hai to babaji usko punish karte hai. mai apna birthday Meera ke sath celebrate karne wali thi par use kahi jaana pada. ghar par bi sab bahar gaye hue hai. (smiling) kya mai aap ke sath apna birthday mana lu?
Maan was surprised by her question.
Maan: I don't waste my time in nonsense things. I am going.
Geet grabs his hand and he turned towards her.
Geet: I helped u that day plz for that sake be with me for some time. I promise I won't take much of your time.
Maan was overwhelmed by her request and couldn't say no to her though inside he was assuring himself that he is doing this in return for her help.
Maan: ok.
Geet (happily): to fir gol-gappe khane chale.
Maan: kya gol-gappe?😕
Geet: I love gol-gappe.😃
Geet grabs his hand and pushed him towards the gol-gappa stall. Her mouth was watering when she was looking towards the gol-gappa. Stall wale bhaiya gave gol-gappa to both of them. At first Maan refused but changed his decision after looking her eyes. Geet's small smile turned into a wide smile.
Geet: aapne muje abi tak apna naam nahi bataya. mai Meera ko kaise bataogi ki maine kiske sath apna birthday manaya.
Maan: Maan Singh Khurana.
Geet: aap jis school mai padhte hai usi school mai meri di bi padhti hai.
Maan was not giving attention to her words and was busy in counting every minute. With her he can't be himself and felt losing himself, felt like losing the real Maan Singh Khurana. While Maan was in deep thought, they finished their gol-gappa treat.
Geet: aap bahut achhe hai.
Maan was surprised by her words as well as felt heavenly. He felt like he got the treasure of the world. He looked in her eyes and there was something deep in her eyes, he was lost in a new world, a world where he and Geet are alone and there was only happiness.
Geet: Thanx aapne mere sath mera birthday celebrate kiya. its one of my best birthdays. ab chale.
Maan felt the same but due to his solitude couldn't voice his feelings. He thought that at least he should give her a gift.
Maan: chalo mere sath.
Geet: kaha?
Maan: tum bolte-bolte thak nahi jati. chup chap chalo mere sath.
They both went to the mall and Maan bought a teddy for her. She was surprised of his behaviour. The person who was at first refusing to spend few minutes with her is now giving her a gift. But she was happy. Maan read her mind and thought for an excuse.
Maan: I am giving this just for mannerism.
Geet got angry by his rude answer but she can read his mind and that moment she promised to herself that she will make him voice his feelings. She didn't know why she feel like this but she felt that there is a bond which connect them to each other. Maan felt something he couldn't resist and decided to leave.
Maan: Now i am going.
Geet: hum dobara kab milege?😃
Maan: shayad ab kabi nahi.
And he goes from there. But Geet was sure that they will definitely meet again.
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Thanx for your comments friends. This is the new update. Friends plz hit the like button and plz keep commenting. pms tomorrow.⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Friends!

A Very Happy & Prosperous New Year To You All.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 HAPPY HOLI 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-6
Maan goes from there but he felt something different that he can't deny. When When he was leaving Geet he felt that some important part of his life is left behind, a pure and a sacred bond is getting broken, some thing is withering away from him. But he is Maan Singh Khurana and in his world emotions and feelings are just weaknesses and have no place at all. He went home but something was changed in him and Dadi sensed that. When he was coming Dadi saw him lost somewhere and saw a spark in his eyes.
Dadi: Maan beta, from where are u coming?😊
Maan: I went to mall.
Dadi: Oh! waise aap kiske saath gaye the?😉
Vicky was also there. He was sitting on the couch playing video game and when he heard Dadi asking Maan that with whom he went to the mall, he got surprised as well as shocked😳😲. He and Dadi both knew that he never go with anyone and he also knew that if Dadi is asking something especially to Maan there must be some truth behind that. He stared at Maan with big eyes. Maan got irritated with the mischievous eyes of Vicky and Dadi and moreover by the question of Dadi because the moment Dadi asked hm the question he remembered Geet.
Maan (irritated)😡: mai akela hi gaya tha or kaun jayega and u already know that I don't like company of anyone.
He went to his room and laid on bed. Today's event was more than enough for him. On the other hand Vicky got sure by the irritated and emotionless voice that there is nothing odd in his life, by odd he meant any friend's or girlfriend's company😳. But Dadi sensed that there is something different today in Maan but she doesn't want to pester him and she leave everything on God hoping for the best.😊
continued below😊
Edited by dreamymishti88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nyc story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continued PART-6

On the other hand Geet couldn't take out herself from the thoughts of Maan. Her cerebellum (brain which is active in the morning) and hind-brain (brain which is active in the night) were full of Maan. She couldn't forget his eyes, his care though unconsciously, his strong arms☺️, his warmth😳 and everything. It's midnight time but Geet is wide awake. She is hugging the pillow or crushing the pillow to herself as if it is Maan☺️😳☺️.
Geet (smiling)😊 : mai inhe apne dil or dimaag se nikaal kyu nahi pa rahi. kyu muje unki daat bi inti meethi lagti hai😳. kyu muje unki angry eyes bi 'full of love' eyes lagti hai😳. yeh kaisa ehsaas hai. I think I should ask Meera (with a wide grin)😃 yes Geet u are absolutely right u should ask Meera.
With that thought in mind she dosed off to sleep🥱.
Next day after completing all household work she got ready for school. She met Meera and told her everything. Meera was surprised 😲and she looked at her with wide eyes.
Meera: Have u gone mad. U don't even know him and U just met him twice.
Geet (innocently) 😃: I know him Meera. His name is Maan.
Meera noticed the blush, her sweet smile and twinkle in her eyes when she was saying his name. Meera noticed a new Geet at that time.
Meera: Do u like him?
Geet (blushing and thinking about him) 😳😊: pata nahi but I am sure of one thing that I want to be with him always. I always think about him only whether I am cooking or studying. I can't take him out of my mind.
Meera realized that she started loving Maan. But Meera didn't take it seriously as she thought it might be an infatuation which would pass of with time. Meera thought that right now the best thing is to distract Geet.
Meera: Geet hum tumhare Maan ke bare me baad me baat karege. Abhi hume school jana hai so think only about school.
Maan was also in the school. After the school he went to park. The park was in way to Geet's home. Meera and Geet were also returning from school. Geet noticed Maan there. He was sitting in one of the secluded corner under the shade. Geet realized that he was tensed (our Geet can sense everything related to Maan😃). She wants to talk to him, want to know what happened to him, soothe his pain, shower her love and care on him.
Geet: Meera tu ghar jaa mai baad me aati hu.
Meera: Geet tu kaha ja rahi hai ruk...
But Geet didn't listen to him and went to Maan. Geet came to Maan and checked him.
Geet (with a wide smile 😃) : Hi! aap kaise ho?
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Hi friends! I came after so long. Please read this part and pls-100 press the like button and give your valuable comments. I am ardently waiting😃
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Edited by dreamymishti88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update dear...
welcome back...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-7

Geet: hi! aap kaise ho?
Though maan sensed her presence but denied. But he couldn't deny his heart which craves for her one sound, one voice, her one glimpse. He turned his head and found her standing there smiling😊. Instantly his heart felt an unknown satisfaction, an unknown heavenly pleasure, a calmness. When he didn't say anything Geet again started her question-answer session.
Geet (smiling)😊 : Aap yaha kisi ka wait kar rahe hai? Kya koi important kaam hai?
Maan glared at her but inside he was feeling heavenly as she was so much close to him. But as usual shows his rude and all time favourite face to her.
Maan (angrily)😡 : Tumse matlab. Aur kya tumhe logo ka pichha karne ki aadat hai?
Geet (in trance)😳 : Sabka nahi sirf aapka.
Maan (confused)😕 : Kya?
Geet: umm...mera matlab hai kya mai aapko company de sakti hu.
Before his reply, she sat on the bench with him. Maan felt conscious with her proximity as her closeness is giving him a jolt, a current ran down his spine.
Maan (hesitating) : Tumhe apne ghar nahi jana?
Geet: Jab dost is tarah upset baitha ho to koi ghar kaise ja sakta hai.
Maan: Kisne kaha mai tumhara dost hu or tumhe kaise pata mai upset hu?
Geet (with a sweet smile)😊 : Jab ek dil doosre dil se baat karta hai to jubaan ki jarurat nahi hoti.
Maan got surprised by her reply but felt happy and contented. Though he didn't say a word but his eyes showed his happiness. But he again got nostalgic about his past and very soon his anger overcame his love.
Maan (with anger)😡 : Go from here. I don't want anyone. I don't need anyone. Samjhi tum.
Geet: Aap unke bare me soch ke jinke liye aap kuch bhi nahi unko dukhi kar rahe ho jinke liye aap sab kuch ho, jinke liye aapki khushi sabse anmol hai. Kehte hai duniya me sab kuch sabko nahi milta lekin kuch-kuch sabko milta hai or jo us kuch-kuch ko sab kuch bana le wahi ek perfect insaan hota hai.
Geet then smiles. Maan looked at her, he was stunned by her maturity. He saw a new hope, a new light in her eyes, her smile gave him an inspiration. His heart says to agree to everything whatever she says. He started believing that she is different from others, she is not from this cruel, tyrannous, hateful, beguile, hypocrite world. But somewhere his mind is constantly barring him not to show his emotions or feelings.
Maan: umm...lets go home.
Geet (with a cute sad face) : Lekin mujhe apne ghar nahi jana.
Maan: To kya mere ghar jana hai.
Geet noded her head in yes with a cute and sweet smile😊😳. To that Maan raised his brow. Geet came to her senses.
Geet: umm...mera matlab hai aap kaha rehte hai?
Maan though understood the meaning of her noding head but he didn't show that to her.
Maan: Geet it's getting late you should go home now.
But Geet was reluctant to go home. She wants to be with him till eternity. She was unaware that she is in love with him from head to toe. Maan sensed her reluctance and smiled in his heart for the first time but he knows how to convince her.
Maan: We will meet tommorrow after school here only.
Instantly a smile came on her lips, and seeing her smile Maan also gave a small smile which gone unnoticed by Geet.
Geet (excitedly) : Pakka.
Maan noded his head in agreement and both head to their abode ardently waiting for the next day to come.
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Hey friends updated part 7. Please read my story and pls-pls hit the like button and give your valuable comments. I'm waiting.😊
Pms 2moro.⭐️
Edited by dreamymishti88 - 13 years ago

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