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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting...
nice start. verrryyy eager 2 read more...
cont sooonnn... n pm me plzzz...😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part, plz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for the late update friends. Thanx for your comments. Your comments inspire me a lot. So, keep commenting. Here is the next update: Part-3
Geet: mai yaha se nahi ja sakti.
Maan: kyu?😕
Geet: kyuki mai back-stage tak jaane ka raasta bhool gayi.😆
Maan rolled his eyes and says: ye to hona hi tha itni bakwaas karne ke baad to Einstein ka bhi dimaag chalna bandh ho jaaye to tum kya ho.😆
Geet misunderstood his sarcasm as compliment and felt proud of herself.😊 She started complimenting herself more.
Geet: mai to pehle se hi jaanti hu ki mai kitni intelligent hu. You are wondering na ki mai kya khati hu jo itna energetic rehti hu ki mai Einstein se bhi jyaada baat kar leti hu. Its a top secret. But you seems to be a genuine guy so i'll reveal it to u.
Maan got scared of hearing her top secret thing. He thought that if she started to reveal her her top secret then he would have to set his bed in the class-room itself because till now he's sure of one thing that after starting her non-stop bak-bak she won't stop until night. Even the slightest thought of Geet's stupid talk scaring him more and more. He got angry.
Maan: chup bilkul chup😡 ab agar tumne ek bhi word apne mooh se nikala to back-stage ke saath-saath apne ghar ka bhi pata bhool jaogi. samjhi tum.
Geet frowned on hearing this. Maan started to go outside the class but stops after few steps. He is facing the door of the class-room and Geet is behind him. Her back is facing the back of Maan. He stopped because he knew she didn't move even an inch.
Without facing her he (Maan) says: ab kya tumhe invitation bhejo chalne ke liye
Geet turns and sees him.
Geet with a frown on her face: mai aapke saath nahi chal sakti. Meera ne mana kia hai kisi bhi ajnabee ke saath jaane ke liye.
Maan got even more angry. He wasn't sure why he got angry on hearing the word 'ajnabee' from her. Unconsciously, he felt pain in his heart on hearing the word 'ajnabee' for him because somewhere in his heart he felt that they both knew each other since ages.
Maan with anger and sarcasm: Ajnabiyo ke saath jaane se mana kiya hai ajnabiyo se baat karne se mana nahi kiya?
She started to say something but before she could utter a word Maan comes to her side and grabs her hand and pulled her outside the class. She gave him an angry look but suddenly her look changed into a caring, dreamy and loving look unaware of the fact that Maan is taking her somewhere grabbing her hand. She started imagining him as the prince charming of her dream and herself his cindrella and their way as a mat of flowers and thought that he is taking her to the carriage which would led them to their palace.😍 She blushed. Maan suddenly stops.
Geet wth down-cast eyes and a blushing smile: hum itni jaldi carriage tak pahuch gaye😳
Maan: what?
His what brings her back to reality and she saw him again. She was surprised of her imagination. Then she saw the surroundings she saw the back-stage. Suddenly she felt that the warmth on her wrist is gone. She turns and saw him going away.
She felt happy when she acknowledged the fact that he actually helped her inspite of so much anger on her. A smile came on her face😊 and kept looking on his way until Meera came.
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Edited by dreamymishti88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Friends!
PRECAP:
Maan: Ye tum kya kar rahi thi. Tumhe dikhai nahi deta. Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to
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Posted: 14 years ago
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add me and send me the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awesome updates...precap is interesting...do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Guys! I will update on 10th.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweome start
cont oon
add me in ur pm list and send pm to me
cont soon
precap is intereting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends! I am back. Thanx for all your comments and admiration and for hitting the like button. Pls keep commenting and pls-100 hit the like button if u like the update. Your comments boost me a lot.😊
Pyar Ishq Mohabbat...inse badhkar kya?
part-4
Meera: where were u? I was worried for u. I searched u everywhere.
while meera was talking to her she was busy in Maan's dreams and replied while thinking of Maan.
Geet: Actually mai wo school dekhne gai thi. tu jaanti hai mai kisse mili, prince charming se.
Meera: what?😕
Meera's what brought Geet to her senses.
Geet: wo...wo..kya suna tune. lagta hai meera tere kaan baj rahe hai. chal di hume dhoond rahi hogi.
They went to Kanika. the annual function went well and all went to their homes after the function.
GEET''S HOME
Kanika was very happy after the function and seeing her, her mom and dad became happy. kanika ordered Geet to make all her favourite dishes because she was happy. In evening Geet was busy preparing dinner but she couldn't concentrate, all her attention was fixed on Maan.
Geet(talking to herself and smiling): Geet there was something in his eyes, something deep, something intense. why i felt that they want to say something to me. why i am feeling something different. 😳
While she was thinking about Maan her hand touched the hot pan, because of the burning sensation she came to senses.
Geet: ouch... Geet ye tu kya kar rahi hai. kaam par dhyan de. pata nahi wo dusht danav baar baar mere khyalo me kyu aa raha hai.😆
Kanika asks her about the dinner from her room.
Geet: di dinner ready hai mai abi lagati hu aap sab aa jaiye.
they all have their dinner and after the dinner they went to their respective rooms.
Geet (in her room while on bed and smiling): wo dusht danav kya kar raha hoga? pata nahi wo mere bare mai soch raha hoga ki nahi.
KHURANA MANSION
Maan in his bedroom was thinking about Geet and looking at the cloth which Geet had tied to his wound.
Maan: ye muje kya ho raha h. kyu wo ladki baar baar mere khyalo mai aa rahi hai. kyu mujhe uska chehra baar baar dikhai de raha hai...
He got angry on himself and looks at the cloth and became more angry and suddenly open that cloth and throws it in anger.
Maan: koi bi ladki Maan Singh Khurana ko kamjoor nahi bana sakti...koi nahi.
He after some time drifted to sleep.
A whole week passed but he couldn't able to remove Geet from his thoughts. Geet, on the other hand was fully drenched in his thoughts and unconsciously she started liking this sensation. she wants to meet him again but she doesn't even know his name. one day she was going to the market and when she was about to cross the big mall of that city she saw Maan inside the mall. She instantly became happy and wants to meet him. she decided to wait for him. Maan came out of the mall and on seeing him she started coming towards him but stops in mid of the road and called him.
Geet: suno...suno
When Maan heard the sound he instantly recognized her voice. Poor Maan despite of so much attempts he couldn't forget her. He turned towards the sound. He saw that she was standing in between the road and smiling and behind her a truck was coming on the same road. his heartbeats became faster and he got scared. Maan ran to her and pulled her towards himself.
Maan(shouting): ye tum kya kar rahi thi. tumhe dikhai nahi deta. agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to.😡
Geet remained mute and looking in his eyes. they both didn't realize that they were in each other's arms. soon Maan realized their position and he left her and started going from there but unfortunately ( for him not for dreamymishti and Geet😉) her dupatta got stuck in his watch...😊
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