MG ff :pyar ishq mohabbat... (part 7 updated pg 6)

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a heavenly story with heavenly love😊
PYAR ISHQ MOHABBAT...
inse badkar kya?😳
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hello guys! I am starting a new fan-fiction based on the characters Maan and Geet. My story is different from the show Geet hui sabse parayi. But its my promise to my readers that the story will be highly captivating and influential. And for that task I want your love and support along with your comments. Your comments will help me to make my story a wonderful story. So, please please please keep commenting.

PYAR ISHQ MOHABBAT...
inse badkar kya?😳

My story is an answer to this question.

LIST OF CHARACTERS:

Maan Singh Khurana, studying in class 9th in the topmost school of Delhi, 13 yrs of age, intelligent, witty, smart, handsome, rude, arrogant, rich, loves to live in solitude, no friends, but very close to his younger brother Vicky and his Dadi, and last but not the least a misogynist.

Vicky Singh Khurana, studying in class 7th in the same school of his elder brother, 10 yrs old, mischieous, fun-loving, don't like studies, loves playing and teasing others, but loves and respects his brother and Dadi a lot.

Savitri Singh Khurana, Dadi of Maan and Vicky, an old and elegant woman, though she is old but young at heart, loves her grandsons a lot but always worried for Maan because she knows the secluded nature of Maan. But deep in her heart she has a secret related to the secluded nature of Maan, this I will reveal later.

Mohinder Singh Khurana, father of Maan and Vicky, a nice person and a good buisnessman, always busy in office and official tours but very concerned towards his sons.

Yash Rathod, best friend and class-mate of Vicky, cousin of Maan and Vicky, same age group of Vicky, loves and respects Maan like his real elder brother, in nature same as Vicky, most of the time stays in their house.

Geet Handa, studying in class 7th in a government school of girls, 10yrs old, lovely, vulnerable, beautiful, naturalistic, charming, pretty, loves everyone, 'hate' word doesn't exist in her dictionary, an epitome of love, lives with her uncle(Geet's dad's elder brother) and aunt and elder cousin sister, her parents were dead seven yrs back, of medeocar surroundings.

Rajvir Handa, uncle of Geet, doesn't love her like her real daughter, works in the company of Maan's dad, greedy, selfish and manipulative, middle-class.

Rekha Handa, wife of Rajvir Handa and aunt of Geet, in nature she is like her husband, doesn't love Geet at all, scolds her at petty things, always prefers her daughter Kanika over Geet.

Kanika Handa, cousin-sis of Geet, six months elder than Geet, daughter of Rajvir and Rekha; apple of their eye, cunning and selfish like her parents, always in search of rich guys for friendship, don't like studies, studying in same school as of Maan and Vicky, class-mate of Vicky and Yash.

Meera Sharma, best friend and class-mate of Geet, caring, candid, fun-loving, always concerned for Geet because she knows the true character of her uncle and aunt.

Other characters I will introduce along with the story.

Maan Singh Khurana, a talented guy but lives in seclusion. On the other hand, Geet Handa, a secluded girl, but lives with her happiness. What happens when they meet each other? And how their relation trespasses pyar, ishq and mohabbat... ⭐️

Edited by dreamymishti88 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

hello guys! I am starting a new fan-fiction based on the characters Maan and Geet. My story is different from the show Geet hui sabse parayi. But its my promise to my readers that the story will be highly captivating and influential. And for that task I want your love and support along with your comments. Your comments will help me to make my story a wonderful story. So, please please please keep commenting.

PYAR ISHQ MOHABBAT...

inse badkar kya?

My My story will be an answer to this question.

LIST OF CHARACTERS:

Maan Singh Khurana, studying in class 9th in the topmost school of Delhi, 13 yrs of age, intelligent, witty, smart, handsome, rude, arrogant, rich, loves to live in solitude, no friends, but very close to his younger brother Vicky and his Dadi, and last but not the least a misogynist.

Vicky Singh Khurana, studying in class 7th in the same school of his elder brother, 10 yrs old, mischieous, fun-loving, don't like studies, loves playing and teasing others, but loves and respects his brother and Dadi a lot.

Savitri Singh Khurana, Dadi of Maan and Vicky, an old and elegant woman, though she is old but young at heart, loves her grandsons a lot but always worried for Maan because she knows the secluded nature of Maan. But deep in her heart she has a secret related to the secluded nature of Maan, this I will reveal later.

Mohinder Singh Khurana, father of Maan and Vicky, a nice person and a good buisnessman, always busy in office and official tours but very concerned towards his sons.

Yash Rathod, best friend and class-mate of Vicky, cousin of Maan and Vicky, same age group of Vicky, loves and respects Maan like his real elder brother, in nature same as Vicky, most of the time stays in their house.

Geet Handa, studying in class 7th in a government school of girls, 10yrs old, lovely, vulnerable, beautiful, naturalistic, charming, pretty, loves everyone, 'hate' word doesn't exist in her dictionary, an epitome of love, lives with her uncle(Geet's dad's elder brother) and aunt and elder cousin sister, her parents were dead seven yrs back, of medeocar surroundings.

Rajvir Handa, uncle of Geet, doesn't love her like her real daughter, works in the company of Maan's dad, greedy, selfish and manipulative, middle-class.

Rekha Handa, wife of Rajvir Handa and aunt of Geet, in nature she is like her husband, doesn't love Geet at all, scolds her at petty things, always prefers her daughter Kanika over Geet.

Kanika Handa, cousin-sis of Geet, six months elder than Geet, daughter of Rajvir and Rekha; apple of their eye, cunning and selfish like her parents, always in search of rich guys for friendship, don't like studies, studying in same school as of Maan and Vicky, class-mate of Vicky and Yash.

Meera Sharma, best friend and class-mate of Geet, caring, candid, fun-loving, always concerned for Geet because she knows the true character of her uncle and aunt.

Other characters I will introduce along with the story.

Maan Singh Khurana, a talented guy but lives in seclusion. On the other hand, Geet Handa, a secluded girl, but lives with her happiness. What happens when they meet each other? And how their relation trespasses pyar, ishq and mohabbat... ⭐️

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INDEX
PART 1 - PAGE 1 PART 2 - PAGE 1 PART 3 - PAGE 2
PART 4 - PAGE 4 PART 5 - PAGE 4 PART 6 - PAGE 5
PART 7 - PAGE 6
Edited by dreamymishti88 - 13 years ago
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do continue soon ...concept seems slight familiar ...
do pm me too..😊
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CHAPTER-1

KHURANA MANSION:

Dadi: Maan! Maan! where are you? we are getting late for your school annual function.

Dadi saw each and every corner of the mansion but she didn't find Maan. she goes outside to search him. then Dadi saw him in the garden leaning to a tree.

Dadi: beta what are u doing here? we are getting late for the function.

Maan: Dadi I don't want to go. u know Dadi i don't like crowdy places. u go with Vicky.

Dadi: u should come beta. jab tak aap kahi jaoge nahi tab tak aapko logo ke bare pata kaise chalega. har insaan ek jaisa nahi hota. or ye baat aapko tabi pata chalegi jab aap apni tanha duniya se bahar nikloge. so get up and change.

Maan: logo ko pehchanne ke liye aapka unse milna jaruri nahi hai Dadi. kyuki insaan ki fidrat hai doosre ka faayda uthana. or mai ek andhere se nikalke doosre andhere me nahi jana chahta.

Dadi: aap hamare sath chal rahe hai and that's final. aapko hamari kasam.

Maan gets angry but he couldn't do anything in front of Dadi. She is his life. Unwillingly. he has to go. Maan, Dadi and Vicky all three went to school to attend the function.

HANDA HOUSE:

Geet calls Meera.

Geet: Meera u have to come with me to di's school.

Meera: Why are u so tensed? what happened?

Geet: actually Meera di ke school me annual function hai and aunty told me to go with her to take care of her and her belongings.

Meera: oh! to tujhe us chudail ki watchman banke jaana hai. so what's the problem? tujhe to uski naukrani banne me bahut khushi milti hai. 😆

Geet: stop it Meera. actually i am nervous. mene suna hai wo Delhi ka best school hai or waha sirf bade bade ghar ke bache padhne aate hai. mai aaj tak kabhi aisi jagah gayi nahi hu na to is liye darr lag raha hai. and i don't want to listen anything u are coming with me bas.

Meera: ok baba i am coming. me tumhe tumhari di ke school ke bahar milugi.

Geet: ok bye.

Geet cuts the call and in the meantime Kanika comes with her bags. she gives the bag to Geet and asks her to follow. They rached the school entrance and Meera joins them. all three went inside. Geet was scared but she really liked the ambience of the school.

On the other side Maan, Vicky and Dadi came to principal's office. Dadi is the chief guest of the function.

Principal: Mam we are very obliged to have u as the chief guest of our school's annual function.

Dadi: hame to aana hi tha aakhir hamare pote yaha padhte hai.

then the principal takes them to the stage. Dadi gave a small speech to students and then the function starts. Maan didn't like the function at all. He goes from there and sits in a class room all alone. on the other side Meera and Kanika were fully enjoying the function but Geet didn't like the function. suddenly she thought to have a round of the school. she goes from there and then she sees Maan sitting all alone. she goes inside the class room.

Geet: why are u sitting alone?

Maan sees her and gives her an angry gaze but she didn't stop.

Geet: bolo na

He didn't react. then suddenly something strikes her brain.

Geet: oh! to tum bol nahi sakte. don't worry i can understand sign language. u can tell me through signs.😆

now Maan gets very angry and he bangs his fist on the desk. Geet gets scared. blood comes out from Maan's hand. on seeing his blood her scaredness fies and comes out her caring aspect. she wipes the blood from her dupatta and ties her hanky on his wound. Maan suddenly feels something and looks at her face and keeps on looking at her. 😊

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PART-2
Now Maan gets very angry and he bangs his fist on the desk. Geet gets even more scared. Blood started coming out from his wound. On seeing his wounded and blooded hand her scaredness flies and comes out her caring aspect. She wiped the blood with her dupatta and tied her hanky on his wound. When she touches his hand to tie the hanky he suddenly felt something and kept looking at her. Geet saw him staring at her. Geet(self-talk): Babaji lagta hai haath par chot lagne ki wajah se iska dard dimaag tak pahuch gaya hai. Or jiski wajah se iska memory loss ho gaya hai tabhi ye mujhe aise ghoor raha hai. Babaji what will i do now. And makes a crying face. Maan heard her and gives an angry glare Maan: Are u crazy? Geet: Babaji lagta hai iska memory loss nahi hua hai balki ye pagal ho gaya hai hai tabhi ye crazy -crazy bol raha hai. Babaji meri madad karo agar isne mujh pe hamla kar diya to. Nahi Babaji. Mujhe to kal Meera ke saath gol-gappe khane jana tha or mere dream ka kya hoga Babaji, aap to jaante hai na Babaji ki mera dream hai ki mai love marriage karu. Geet bhaag le yaha se. She tried to run from there but unfortunately before that Maan grabs her hand and pulls her hand towards himself. Because of the pull she bangs her forhead on his chest. Current ran down her spine and because of this new feeling she got scared. She started moving away from him but he again pulled her. She was shocked to death and looked in his eyes. She felt like heaven had come to earth. She felt a strange temptation to touch those eyes. She was not in her senses she felt like she was on the seventh sky. Unluckily her open-eyed dream got disturbed by Maan's harsh voice. Maan: Na hi meri yaadash gayi hai or na hi mai pagal hua hu. Samjhi tum. Geet started blabbering her non-stop but intresting bakwaas, unaware of the fact that she is in Maan's arms. Geet: ooh! to aap ye check kar rahe the ki mai kitni intelligent hu. Sab kehte hai ki mai bahut intelligent hu or mujhe har situation ko handle karna aata hai. Waise mujhe ghar ka bhi kaam bahut achhe se aata hai or sab kehte hai ki mai bahut achha khana banati hu or mai... Maan rolled his eyes and got more irritated because of her non-stop bakwaas.He left her from his hold. Maan: chup bilkul chup Geet instantly stopped and keeps her index finger on her lips. Maan: Ab yaha khadi kyu ho jao yaha se. She didn't move even an inch from that place. Maan was surprised by her audacity. Maan in a loud and sarcastic tone: yaha chipak gayi ho kya She nodded her head in no. Maan in a more louder tone: To jaa kyu nahi rahi? She got scared and started making some movements through her hand. Maan became confused and more angry now Maan: haatho se nahi mooh se bolo. Geet: mai mooh se kaise bolu aap hi ne to kaha chup bilkul chup. He rolled his eyes. Maan: Ab mai hi keh raha hu mooh se jawab do. Geet: mai yaha se nahi jaa sakti. Maan: kyu? Geet: kyuki mai back stage tak jaane ka raasta bhool gayi
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Friends plz-plz-100 reply. I am eagerly waiting for your replies. ⭐️
Edited by dreamymishti88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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owww this is sooo cute...plz pm this 2 me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!!!! 4 d new ff ...

add me to ur pm list ...

nice concept ...

good character sketch ...

interesting start ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..superb update.
love it.
geet is so cute..
do continue plz.
thx

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