Garv and Kumud - kkusum goes on 3/20 upda - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will update hopefully by friday, lot going on this week, i will also try to update my other fan fiction. please post ur comments, and thanks to those who did.

sam
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sam u r too good a very nice story.plz post the next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
great part....cant wait till garv and kumud reunite again!!keep up the amazing work and continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
great part 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
hey this is great...plzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Garv runs towards Kumud. Kumud looks back and then stops. She thinks that she is just imagining Garv there. She goes and touches garv's face. Kumud cries when she realizes that he is there for real. Garv gives her a cute smile. Garv opens his arms wide open. Kumud just hugs him tight and melts into his arms. Kumud cries and Garv wipes her tears off. He kisses her forehead, they look into each others' eyes and are lost. They hug again, they are so in love. The wind is blowing, there is thundering and they just cherish the moment. It starts raining, the rain of love,

(tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan ) - 2

jo dhup nikli chaya ban jaaunga
jo ho tu akeli saaya ban jaaunga
jo uljhan mein ho mann main behlaaunga
tum aa gaye ho toh jeena aaya hain
khushiya ka tumne yeh jaal bichaya hain
khoya hain khudko yah sab kutch paaya hain
tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan

ho gam ke badal mujhpe tham jaane de
bechainiyo ko mujhse takrane de
dukhti ho koi baat mujhpe aane de
dil sochta tha ke koi apna ho
koi raaz na ho jo uss se rakhna ho
aankhein na kholu main shayad sapna ho
tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan


This song plays in the background. I might even make a video mix sometime on this song. Garv tries to kiss her, kumud is shy, she tries to let go, Garv holds her hand and pulls her over to him.

K: Garv choddo, tumne mujhe bahut rulaya hai. (she hits Garv on his chest, you know the typical ishtyle, I mean style)
G: Garv Sachdev ek baar haath pakad ta hai toh zindagi bhar nahi chod tha.
K: Stop being filmi, tum yahan kyun aaye? Tumne toh mujhe doosri baar jeeteji maar diya.
G: Kumud, kehte hain na jisse tum sabse zydaa pyar karte ho, that person ends up hurting you the most. So I ended up hurting you the most and you hurt me the most, I am sorry yaar, I realized that without you meri zindagi kuch nahin hain, you make me complete, Ms. Kumud Kapoor.
K: Promise me you will never ever leave me again!
G: I promise. (Garv bends down on one knee and its still raining, he takes the ring out of his pocket and says
...Kumud Kapoor, make me the luckiest man on earth, marry me?
Kumud is crying: Yes!! I will marry you

(this time tears of happiness, Garv and Kumud kiss. They are in each others arms, they laugh and feel that everything around them is perfect, they couldn't be happier)

After an hour...

G: So kumud, lets go home before you fall sick.
K: Yeah.....hakchu (she sneezes)
G: aww shee you are already catching a cold
K: Don't worry Garv, I am fine.
G: I don't wanna take any chances, let's go...
K: No wonder Kiran...
G: What?
K: kuch nahin
G: No you were saying something about Kiran..
K: I was just saying you need to stop worrying about small things.
G: Alright I will stop, now ....(garv calls for a rickshaw, since Nakul dropped him off he don't have no car)

They get into the rickshaw.

Garv is trying hard to feel comfortable in the rickshaw but has trouble feeling comfortable, kumud finds this amusing and laughs. Garv is so happy to see her laugh.

G: What? Its not funny, its not my fault that I am tall.
K: Garv you are a giant, and I told you we should have taken a cab.
G: Giant haan? Thanks. You fell in love with a giant.
K: A very handsome, one though. (she holds his hand, they laugh. Garv kisses her forhead, they reach the Kapoor house.


Edited by Garv_Kumud_4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: candyfloss

when will you continue jaan 😳



candy this one was dedicated to you. I am sorry guys couldn't update with a longer episode, but like i said my kkusum is gonna continue, for a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
hey sam,

cont soon. this part was gr8
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this was really nice...plz continue soon...i luv this fanfic...itz soo adorable...adn i like the fact tht itz gonna go on for a longgggg time... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok, Kumud suffered cuz of Garv's infidelity, while Garv suffered cuz of Kumud's cowardice.....both their pains are even...and I am so glad they have reunited...now, truce candyfloss? 😆

Saammmu - I want some post-marriage scenes too...hehe..;)

Wish Ekta had brains to follow this plot... 🤢...let's all recommend Sammu for KKUSUM-2... 😛

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