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Garv and Kumud reach the Kapoor house. They enter, holding hands.

Nakul, and Kali are playing with Kiran. Kiran is enjoying the horseback ride on Nakul. Kali is teasing Nakul, the girls are tag teaming on Nakul.

Garv and Kumud laugh...
Kiran sees them and runs to Kumud, Kumud lifts her in her arms and gives her a tight hug and give her a kiss.

Ki: Mommy, why did u come here without me?
K: I am sorry beta.
Ki: Its okay, I am so happy that Daddy got me here, I love India, but I missed you.
K: Awwwwww I missed you too.
G: What about me, did u miss me mommy?

(Garv smiles, Kumud holds Garv in her arms too, Garv and kumud hold kiran, they look like such a happy family)

K: ofcourse I missed you, u won't even know how much...

Kali and Nakul are like awwwwww such a cute family.

Ka: Garv u better believe her, she has definitely missed you a lot, its so good to see my sis back to normal, this Valentines' day has proven to be the best till date.
G: Oh yea I believe her. And today is gonna get even better, what say Nakul?
N: It sure is! So Garv u get ready we got some work to do.
G: Yup I will be right there.
N: Kiran beta, let mom and dad change.
Ka: yup we will go and get some ice-cream.

N: Kumud, let me hold her.
Ka: No let me.
N: Kali u will fall.
Ka: Shut up Nakul!
N: Kiran beta, who u like better massi ya chachu?
Ka: Maasi will get you whatever u want
N: Chachu will give u all the coooooool rides and whatever u want?

Garv and Kumud just watch them fight over Kiran, and find it amusing. Kiran is irritated.

Ki: Chup! Both of you, chup.

Nakul and Kali are shocked.

Ki: I love both my chachu and maasi!
Ka: Awww, she is choooooooooo chweet!
N: Yup a total cutie pie. Man Kali and I both had lotsa fun with her. I didn't know kids could be this fun.

G: Yup afterall she is my daughter.
K: Our daughter.
G: Yea! Sorry.
N: Yup our daughter.
Ka: Totally! I love her so much.

Abhay and Kkusum were watching this from upstairs, they come down.

A: Hey Guys!

Abhay sees Garv and Kumud happy, he looks at Garv and Garv gives him a thumbs up. Abhay realizes that everything went fine between garv and kumud, plus the happiness on their faces said it all.

A: Great, well, since today is Valentine's Day, I had promised to take your mother out and spend the entire day at her service, the day that will only belong to her, the love of my life for the past 25 years. (He holds Kkusum)

Kkusum blushes.

Kk: Well today we are not going to be alone, I want to spend the day with my valentine, its not you, Abhay.
A: What ?
Kk: yea I want to spend this Valentines' day with my granddaughter, too.
A: Well great, so I have two dates tonight, cool.

They all laugh.

Ki: I am going to have fun with grandpa and grandma.
Kk: Yes you are (she kisses kiran)

Abhay lifts Kiran in his arms and Kkusum and abhay are about to leave.

A: So what are ur plans for today?
N: nothing dad, u enjoy yourselves.
G: Yup, we will be right here. Mom and Dad have fun on your date.
A: Yup, I can assure u I will, by the way Aryaman and Saakshi are joinin us too.
N: Yea Dad told me.
G: Kiran beta, be good.

Kiran nods her head.

Kk: I am sure she will, right beta?
A: Alright kids, see ya.
Ka: Bye dad, mom u look great.
K: Papa u look great too.

Abhay and Kkusum kiss their daughters good bye.

They leave.

K: I thought u guys were upto something, I mean Nakul asked Garv to get ready right?
N: Kumud, I was just playing. I didn't mean it seriously yaar.
Ka: Nakul, u are soooo sick, always playing with emotions especially on such a special day.
G: Hey kumud, I already gave u my gift, the ring, so I am set.

(Garv winks at Nakul, they are just fooling their gals, they definitely something special in store for them)

K: I didn't expect anything from you anyway Garv.
G: Good, so I won't disappoint you. Now go change you are still wet.

Kumud is mad and so is Kali at the guys inconsideration. Kumud and Kali take the sofa pillows and hit them with it. Garv and nakul are laughing the whole time. They go upstairs, and go to kumud's room. The girls are soooooooo mad. Garv and nakul wait till they are gone to plan their special surprise.

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I know its not that great! sorry!

Sammu
Edited by Garv_Kumud_4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
hey sam ur story is gr8.hey plz update both ur stories
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Posted: 19 years ago
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G: Nakul, that was fun.
N: Yup its fun teasin em. So what is the P Lan?
G: I don't know yaar, its gotta be something that will melt em, yaar.
N: Yup, you are right. Its gonna be difficult, coz we have to do this in a secretive manner, coz they are at home.
G: Let's think this out first, then we will implement it.
N: Sounds good!

Garv and Nakul are busy planning everything. Kali and Kumud are still in Kumud's room. They finally come out. Garv has already changed and looks smashing as ever, Nakul looks very handsome too, and Kali and Kumud both look their gorgeous selves. Nakul turns on the TV when he sees them comin down stairs. Garv and Nakul are pretending to enjoy the cricket match on television and ignore the girls completely.

K: Not that you guys care, but Kali and I are going shoppin.
Ka: Yup, we don't need yall. We are going to be each other's valentines.
N: Good idea.
G: Smart move girls, have fun. This is a win win situation.
K: What?
G: Yea jaan, see you girls can enjoy this day going shopping spending time with each other, while Nakul and I get to do what we love to do that is watch cricket, it live- India Vs. Pakistan.
N: Yup its awesome, sachin is in full form. You gals can join us too, no problem.
G: We can't miss this match, it's the final, sorry Kumud, its been a while since I watched a cricket match.
N: Bye girls.
G: Yea bye, unless u wanna stay.

Kumud and Kali are so mad, and vow not forgive them for this. They walk out the door and bang the door shut behind them.

Garv and Nakul give each other a hi-5 and laugh.

They shut the TV off.

G: The match was like last year, I watched it.
N:hahahaha, they didn't even realize it. good one Garv, live match! Hahahaha.
G: Girls and cricket are at two ends yaar.
N: Yup! So now that the coast is clear lets' implement our Plan.
G: Cool.

Garv and Nakul make a bunch of calls, and stuff. They are really busy. Its 3 pm and they have till 6 pm to get everything done, and before the girls get home.

The End.

Preview:
The Valentines Day Surprise!


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Sammu.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
awww tht was soo cute...i wonder wat the guyz have planned...lol..newayz plzz continue soonnn 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome job....cant wait for their reactions and the surprise.....so plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Garv and Nakul are busy in the kitchen cooking for the very first time in their lives. They have the cook book out and are trying out new dishes.

G: Nakul, hows the chicken tikka going?
N: It looks fine.
G: hopefully it tastes fine too.
N: It does... wanna try?
G: No thanks, I mean later, we have so much to do yaar, this cooking thingi is so difficult. This is my first time yaar
N: Mine too, but guess what there a first is always time na, by the way hows the butter chicken going?
G: Smells good, looks good, and sure does taste good. Man I could actually be a chef.
N: Dude, did u know that the world's famous chefs are guys,
G: I am not surprised, I mean look at us, one shot and we already good at it.
N: Hell yea! Garv the fruit salad is ready too!
G: awesome bud, i am almost done with the cake, u wanna write on it, you know Happy Valentine's day to the love of our lives, you know some thing like that.
N: You do it.
G: Come on Nakul u got pretty writing, i don't u know the whole cursive thingi.
N: alright I will try.

After 3 long hours of cooking, these boys are tired, they clean up, set the table and get ready for the special night. its only
6 pm.

They are now relaxing on the sofa.

G: Wow, that was tough.
N: Yup.
G: But i guess it was worth it, after all it's for Kumud and Kali yaar.
N: yup, it sure is worth it, it was fun too.
G: Nakul, I am proud of you, you really have changed, now i really like you.
N: Thanks Garv, I like you too, ummm...could I call you bhaiya?
G: Nakul, we are the same age, but i guess you can call me Bhai.

N: I know we are the same age Garv, but you are so much mature than I am, I admire you and u are definitely someone I can look up to.

G: Look up to me because of my height?

They laugh.

G: I appreciate the respect that you have for me, and you can surely call me Bhai.

N: Thanks Bhai.

G: I am happy that things have changed between the two of us.

N: I am too, glad to have you back.

Garv and Nakul hug...The door bell rings.

N: I will get that.

G: Are you sure its not the girls.

N: I am positive, Bhai... 3 hours of shopping is not enough of girls, another hour and half atleast.

G: Alright, open the door, the person must be waiting.

N: Yup.

Nakul opens the door, it's the salesman, lets call him Mr. Malhotra.

M: Hello, My name is Mr. Malhotra...

N: Oh hello Mr. Malhotra, we just spoke on the phone, I am Nakul, Nakul Oberoi.

M: Oh yes, Nice to meet you sir.

N: Nice to meet you too.

Garv comes along.

G: Hey buddy.

M: Hello sir, Are you Mr. Sachdev.

G: Sure am!

They shake hands.

M: Well, the order that you and Mr. Oberoi made is ready, and is waiting outside, you want to have a look at it, gentlemen?

G: We would love to.

Garv and Nakul look at the deliveries and are blown away.

G: Beauties!

N: mind blowing.

G: Worth every penny yaar.

N: True Bhai, they are gorgeous.

M: So are you both satisfied?

N: 100%.

G: yea, we love it.

M: Well then, you can drop by my office and pay the first installment before the end of the day or pay it online...hold on a min... you guys already did. Well great, yall are set. Congratulations gentlemen!

(they shake hands)


M: thanks for doing business with us.

N: Your welcome.

G: Thanks for the speedy process, we appreciate it.

M: customer satisfaction is our main priority. Thanks, and have a nice day.

Malhotra leaves.

Garv and Nakul go inside.

G: That was a good choice Nakul!

N: Hell yea, best gift possible.

Garv's phone rings. Its kumud.

G: Hello Jaan!

K: hi, If you guys are done with your cricket match, Kali and I are coming home.

G: Oh the match is great, we won, Sachin kicked ass. Hold on a minute... he won man of the match I wanna hear his interview....hold on

K: You are impossible. We are 25 minutes away from home.

G: Hold on Kumud...(Garv indicates to Nakul that they are gonna be back in 25 minutes, Nakul asks him to make something up)

G: Hey I am back, so what were you saying?

K: Kali and I are coming back now we are almost there.

G: Well, we aren't at home.

K: What, don't give me that... you just said you were watching Sachin's interview.

G: You see I was. Now Nakul and I left the home we are at the tennis court. Jaan you were on hold for 5 longgggg minutes, so yea.

K: Why are you both doing this to us, especially on Valentine's day.

G: coz for us every day is a Valentine's day jaan... don't make a big deal outta this. Chill we will be back in an hour, we need to exercise yaar.

K: Kali and I are gonna kick you guys' mean asses just wait and watch.

G: Go ahead my love after we return, ok?

K: I hate you right now

G: but I love you, bye.

Garv hangs up.

Kumud and Kali are soooooooo mad, they are gonna make em sorry for what they did.

G: Oh shit, they are almost here, just switch off the lights, time to hide Nakul.

N: Bhai, we are so in love, look at all we did for em.

G: Yup, the girls are lucky.

N: Bhai, run I hear em coming.

G: Yup, lets do this.

N: Bhagoooooooooo!

G:Chill, weirdo!

Garv and Nakul hide, while Kumud opens the door and Kali follows, they are in a bad mood.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks jas. i appreciate it, u r the only reader, thanks.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sammy....awesome....the words have formed a video in my eyes...aww man...Garv an Kumud teasing each other would have looked darn cool in KKUSUM 😭 ...anyways, your fiction keeps me sane 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks kitty means a lot to me, i am glad i am keeping u sane, lol. keep reading i miss ya!
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i cant wait for the next part!! plz continue soon....I LOVE ure fanfic!! 😃

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