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Posted: 19 years ago
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man i keep wondering..r garv and kumud gonna get back together?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kumud and Aaliyah are at the airport. Kumud is crying.

A: Kab tak apne aap ko sazaa dogi. Garv, apne zidd par adaa hain, lekin sooner or later he is gonna break.
K: Garv, ko meine majboor kiya hain. Aaliyah,
A: What are u thinking? Are you sure u want to leave.
K: Kuch nahin, mein yahaan se jald se jald jaana chahti hoon, agar Garv ki khushi mujhse door rehne mein hain, toh mein …
A: Kumud… (Kumud is crying, Aaliyah tries to comfort her, then suddenly the phone rings).

It is Kiran!

Ki: Aaliyah aunty?
A: Hi bolo beta, kaisi ho tum. How was school today?
Ki: School was fun, but I am looking for Kumud mom, I can't find her. Do u know where she is?
A: She is over here beta, u want to talk to her?
Ki: Yesss (she is all happy)

Aaliyah hands the phone over to Kumud.

K: Hello! ( she tries to control her tears)
Ki: Mom! Aap mujhe chod kar kyun chali gayi.
K: Beta, mein toh bass, Aaliyah aunty se milne aayi thi.
Ki: Aap mujhe school mein nahin lene aaye. Daddy bhi bahut angry the.
K: Beta, I am sorry. Papa kahan hain?
Ki: he is packing my clothes up, I think we are going some where for the weekend. U are coming na mom?
K: I don't know beta.
Ki: You have to come, otherwise I am not going either.
K: Beta, u have to listen to ur papa. Be good, and remember I will always love you.
Ki: why are u not coming here? Mom please come back.

(kumud is crying too).

K: Daddy ko phone do beta!
Ki: ok.

Ki: Daddyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! (she yells out for him).
G: Kya hai beta, itna chilla kyun rahi ho?
Ki: Daddy, phone!
G: Hmmm.

Kiran hands over the phone to her Garv papa, and she runs around the house.

G: Hello?

Kumud doesn't say anything, and cries, she hangs up. Kumud is about to board the flight. What will happen next?

Will Kumud go back? Will Garv realize his mistake? I don't know, do u?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
candy u are soooooooooooooooo funny, seriously that dream was sooooooooooooo funny. ur dreams r so satisfying naa?

btw call me sam.
i don't yaar i am thinking abt the next part. yup father and mother relationship is the best.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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candy u are soooooooooooooooo funny, seriously that dream was sooooooooooooo funny. ur dreams r so satisfying naa?

btw call me sam.
i don't yaar i am thinking abt the next part. yup father and mother relationship is the best.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi sam ,

plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!!
hope gaev realizes his mistake!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome...i just the whole thing from beggining....it was great...i love it....but i hope garv realizes his mistake and marries kumud....anyways plz continue soon...cnt wait for the next part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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when r u gonna continue?? i cnt wait for the next part!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kumud is still on the phone. She is not saying
anything. Garv is saying Hello Hello, but no answer.
Kumud is crying and Tere Naam is going on in the
background.

Garv: Hello?

He hangs up. When Garv looks at the outgoing calls
thingi, he finds out that someone had called Aaliyah's
number. Obviously it was Kiran, so he calls Kiran.

Kiran comes running.

Ki: Daddy, aap itna kyun ghussa karte ho? I don't like
this daddy, I want my nice daddy back
Garv smiles and kneels down to her height.

G: I am sorry beta, I won't be angry, promise!
Ki: Okay ( she gives her daddy a hug) nice daddy is
back. (Garv laughs).
G: Now tell me beta, were you talking to Aaliyah
aunty?
Ki: Yup. I just wanted to know where Kumud mom was
G: Did you talk to her?
Ki: I spoke to both mom and Aaliyah aunty.
G: What did Kumud aunty say?
Ki: Daddy she is my mom not my aunty.
G: Ok baba, What did your mom say?
Ki: She said to be good, take care of you, and
remember that she will always love me.
G: She will always love you. (He gives her a kiss)
Ki: Daddy, I am going to ride the bike with Molly,
okay?
G: yea, and take care beta (Kiran goes to play).

Garv thinks about Kumud, and all those wonderful
moments and her confession and everything.
He calls Aaliyah's cell since Kumud is with her.

A: Hello
G: Aaliyah Kumud ko Phone do.
A: she left.
G: What where did she go, did she leave to come here?
A: Why would she?

Aaliyah is right outside his door.

A: Open the door, I am outside.
G: Alright.

They hang up. Garv opens the door and Aaliyah comes
in.

G: What do u mean why would she?
A: Garv, how can u expect someone to come back after
all that stuff u said to her.
G: Aaliyah, come on tell me, where is Kumud?
A: I said she left.
G: Where? (he is mad)
A: Back to Mumbai. She just got on the flight.
G: WTF, how could you do this to me? Why the hell did
you not tell me this before?
A: Why would you care Garv? You are my best friend
Garv, but Kumud is a friend too. Despite the face that
she came all the way over here when she realized her
mistake, you still broke her heart again.
G: Again, she was the one who …
A: Garv, don't tell me that you were not at fault, you
both were. You just saw her mistakes Garv. You were
the one who did not trust her and your insecurity led
you towards Kali. Now destiny wants you guys to be
together, Kumud and you could have gotten all the
happiness you guys deserved, but you blew it again.

Garv is tear eyed.

A: (she holds Garv's hand). Garv, I know you love her
a lot, and she loves you too. By staying away from
her, you are not only doing wrong to her, but yourself
too. I know you very well and I know no matter how
hard you try, you won't be able to stay happy without
her. Without each other you guys are incomplete.

G: You are right Aaliyah, I just looked at all this,
from my perspective, I can't lose her again, before
its' too late. I will go and her her. I sure am
incomplete with out her, without her, within me, I
can't find no rest. And without her all I am gonna be
is incomplete. Now before its too late, I will go and
her.

Aaliyah smiles.

G: do you think she will forgive me, or do u think
she….?
A: Garv, its never late, especially when confessing
your love, but the sooner the better.
G: Tell me about it. Trust me there is always a
deadline when confessing your love, I have experienced
it twice.
A: The best part is that she loves you too.
G: She always has. I am the one who was at fault. I
didn't trust her.
A: You both were. Now before its too late, let's book
your ticket, and Kiran is going too right?
G: Yea duh! And you gonna come too, got it?
A: Me, If I come who will take care of things here.
G: Tumhare begair yeh shaadi, kaise hogi, my best
friend has got to be there.

Aaliyah laughs

A: Already, thinking about the wedding haan? Shaadi
par toh mein zaroor aaungi. 100%. You better not get
married in absence.
G: I won't.
A: Now you have to go there, you go ahead do the
packing, I will book your tickets.
G: yea thanks. (he gives Aaliyah a hug).
A: Your welcome Garv.
G: I will go ahead.
A: Garv, hold on a min. What about Kasak?


G: You are right, again. What about Kasak? Shit, what
am I gonna say to her. I hope she understands, and
this doesn't affect our friendship.
A: She will understand, hopefully. I mean she has
always been understanding.
G: Yup but the main person to convice is mom.
A: Don't worry I will do that, aunty will understand.
I am sure.
G: You think so?
A: I am so positive.
G: All right the, I am gonna go, tomorrow to get back
with the love of my life, what say?
A: Tomorrow, its kinda hard. This is so last moment.
G: I know, u have got connections yaar, do something.
A: Okay, okay, I will ask that Delta airlines guy who
has a huge crush on me to do something.
G: Great! Sounds good, that always works on guys.
A: it worked on you?
G: Nah, I am too smart for that. But Ali do u think I
should ask Kasak to meet me now?
A: Yea I think so.
G: You gotta be there too, to give me moral support.
A: Yea I will be there, but.. you have to do the
talking.
G: Oh yea, I will.

Garv calls Kasak.

G: Hi Kasak, this is Garv
K: Ofcourse you are, I mean I can tell its you,
without even hearing your voice.
G: Yea sure, caller id does the magic.
K: Very funny. Garv what's up!
G: Can I see you tonight for dinner. We three can go
out for dinner.
K: Three? Kiran is gonna join us?
G: No yaar… u, aaliyah and I.
K: Oh yea, sure.
G: Meet me at Olive Garden, cool?
K: Yup, I will be there.
G: Alright then, bye.
K: Bye.

Now let me make this clear. Garv and Kasak are only
friends, Kasak is going by the traditional arranged
marriage thing, coz she has not fallen in love with
anyone yet. Garv knows Kasak since they were kids, so
she doesn't mind marrying someone who she knows all
her life, and is very good friends with. I wouldn't
either.
Next part coming soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
thanks for the wonderful comments guys. i will update it once a week. now the next one will hopefully be up by friday the 17th. please post ur comments. there are a few typos in the recent update, please pardon them. and tell me what u think of the story so far. this is my version of kkusum, so i will try to make it like i imagined kkusum to be all along. hope u like it.

love,
sam 😆

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