Y is life so UNFAIR??!! Thrd 2 (link thrd 3 pg 1) - Page 46

oh mine poor geet is having very tough time!!!!!! let see wat is maan up to !!!!

I hate this maan...i hate him so much...i really hate him😡

Omg!cant bare maan's evilness anythng.do smethng and change hm to a gud one.waitng for next part...
-mona

maan is really a bast***

geet shud hav killed him


but wht i hate most is he will torture her, he wll sleep with every girl possible but atlast he will get a life happily ever after but geet shud b pure, tortured n die evry min n , only hav him in her life n even after abused n rotten in hell by him she have to have a heart to forgive him when one 5n day suddenly he realise his mistake n a little remorse when compared to the hell evry min she gone


is it the same fate for ur story also ?? If so plz think some thing diff bcoz at last seeing maaneet together sucks

i knw i reacted a bit overly but wht to do evry where its the fate of mny stories n geet hav the same situatin n maan in same set of mind
so i am really waiting for some real twist n dhamaka where it can satisfy my brain while reading a story
actually i asked many writers to think in diff perpective but also respetd thir view but never twice mentiond my idea n so the case with u bcoz i will anyway read ur ff from ur view so its just my opinion n no offence or not to hurt u

so plz dont think it as -ve remark n take to heart n think abt discontinuing story
i liked ur story but having got to read same type of senarios through out the forumns made me ask for diff story line rather than a similar hunt n torture game

hope u dont take offence
n i wont b bashed by anyone for voicing my opinion
bcoz i wont anyway write same stuff twice so i will read n comment n like the posts

Any way after posting such a long post i was bit cool
being too involved in ur story i cant ctrl myself hating ur maan in this(only this bcoz in rest of ur ffs i loved his char) ff

so i must say u r one of those gud writers who can get extreme out of readers dear

really gr8