SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 - Page 22

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey,

After re reading your FF, I went on an emotional ride and penned down a poem for ur FF.

The Imperfect Wife! (Geet's POV)

My life has been filled with an abyss of darkness so deep

That night herself loses her way to the emergence of dawn

My days remain burdened under the dark pool of sorrows

And my nights strive under the blanket of my fears and my terrorizing dreams

I come from a past from which there is no return

I do not know who I am or where I belong

Since I have no identity of my own

Whatever I had was taken away from me

I have lost my heart, my body and my soul

I live in shame so deeply engraved that there is no indication of light

Because my body is tainted and ruined and can be never repaired

I have become small, as small as the smallest particle of an atom

As hollow, as the deepest hollow of a drum

My pain is as terrorizing as the life imagined in hell

Therefore, my each day is spent living in despair

I made the mistake of falling in love with you

Knowing you belong to someone else

You showed me with your utmost care and concern

And I just could not stop myself from feeling for you.

I think about you day and night

I want to be held, touch, caressed and protected by you

Because you make me feel like a human again

You make me feel that I belong in this world

And that I am a woman who can be cared, loved and cherished

Yet, I am scared, scared to come close to you

Because I am not capable of loving you

Because I know that I cannot make you happy

I can never fulfill your desires if I become your wife

How can I take away your life, your dreams and your happiness?

When you are the best thing that ever happened to me

I love you more than what my heart desires

And therefore, I do not want to you make this mistake

For asking me to be by your side

When I know that all I can be is The Imperfect Wife!

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey,

After re reading your FF, I went on an emotional ride and penned down a poem for ur FF.

The Imperfect Wife! (Geet's POV)

My life has been filled with an abyss of darkness so deep

That night herself loses her way to the emergence of dawn

My days remain burdened under the dark pool of sorrows

And my nights strive under the blanket of my fears and my terrorizing dreams

I come from a past from which there is no return

I do not know who I am or where I belong

Since I have no identity of my own

Whatever I had was taken away from me

I have lost my heart, my body and my soul

I live in shame so deeply engraved that there is no indication of light

Because my body is tainted and ruined and can be never repaired

I have become small, as small as the smallest particle of an atom

As hollow, as the deepest hollow of a drum

My pain is as terrorizing as the life imagined in hell

Therefore, my each day is spent living in despair

I made the mistake of falling in love with you

Knowing you belong to someone else

You showed me with your utmost care and concern

And I just could not stop myself from feeling for you.

I think about you day and night

I want to be held, touch, caressed and protected by you

Because you make me feel like a human again

You make me feel that I belong in this world

And that I am a woman who can be cared, loved and cherished

Yet, I am scared, scared to come close to you

Because I am not capable of loving you

Because I know that I cannot make you happy

I can never fulfill your desires if I become your wife

How can I take away your life, your dreams and your happiness?

When you are the best thing that ever happened to me

I love you more than what my heart desires

And therefore, I do not want to you make this mistake

For asking me to be by your side

When I know that all I can be is The Imperfect Wife!

Originally posted by: harshdb

how r u doing/

atlast i m here to comment lil. early

part 28 is

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really great part.

Beautiful the way u described the feelings and pain for geet suffering.

"Don't be so kind...leave me alone...I can't bear to see the regret in your eyes,"

Even after a year if I am unable to instill enough trust in you to share yourself with me, then we will think about separation as the last resort."

oh no not this condition. what if her insecurities still there?

He needed to talk to Sameera, she deserved to hear about the marriage from him. He took his phone to make the calls.

he should do that though i m happy for the marriage of maaneet, i don't want other girl to suffer for that.

i hope sameera will not create any problem for mannet marriage.

well, beautiful, painfully written. 👏