SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: bangalores

but u r saying i cant keep even a tiny weeny one for myself but i have to transfer them

awww is it me who can't seem to cheer u up or something is bothering u. u shud know...u r extremely luvd.

and

as for the characters...all hugs n kisses remain with u and don't go to anyone else.🤗

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

amazing update. both of them r superb. they think of each other so much

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nafisa_kazi

@nafisa_kazi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

bindu, simply wow...i love this story...one of my favs...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Awesome update...just loved it how Maan presented to Geet why they should get married...Geet's insecurities are not unfounded - i guess the only expression of "sex" she has encountered is the rape and thats why she says she doesnt like it..

The dialogues you wrote for Maan today are beautiful and touched my heart - they give us a good peep into his heart and soul - he truly loves Geet to no ends..

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muskaan

@dh_riti

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

amazing concept. any girl who has went thru somuch in past can't simply accept that aspect of marriage.

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

awww is it me who can't seem to cheer u up or something is bothering u. u shud know...u r extremely luvd.
and
as for the characters...all hugs n kisses remain with u and don't go to anyone else.🤗

thank u...
went away to prepare lunch...
and no probs...was just kidding

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Awesome update...just loved it how Maan presented to Geet why they should get married...Geet's insecurities are not unfounded - i guess the only expression of "sex" she has encountered is the rape and thats why she says she doesnt like it..

The dialogues you wrote for Maan today are beautiful and touched my heart - they give us a good peep into his heart and soul - he truly loves Geet to no ends..

you diagnosed geet's problem very correctly...the longest relation she had with a male is with her uncle with whom she and her mother resided once her father passed away. After being violated by him she stays clear of men in general...now with maan she has learned to trust again... and maan will help her understand and adjust...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

1stly , sorry , for late comments ! read it last night & today had an early Uni so ...

Very touching update 😭

Feel deeply for Geet . How much she had to go through ????

Hope Maan replaces those painful memories with loving ones !

I loved Maan's self-talk 👍🏼

It was good & realistic .

Loved it

Thanks for pm ...

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wala66

@wala66

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

speeechlessly in love with your maneet..wow this keeps getting better and better..please read my pm...cant wait cant wait.. thanks so much for pm...its o realistic and pleasure to read and imagine😊

Edited by wala66 - 13 years ago