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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#941

This story wasn't something I had come across earlier or heard it in passing, and so if it had not been for Rasgulla_sp I wouldn't have come to know about it.

It was indeed a case of hook, line and sinker for Arnav when it came to Khushi. During their early interactions I first had a feeling that he had taken a dislike towards her, but when it was revealed that he had actually fallen for her, I was surprised...pleasantly, of course.

The bifurcations in the story in the form of Garima's relation to Arnav and the new chracter Tanirika also formed for an interesting read.

The protagonists shared the most toe-curling of kisses😳; even their intimate interactions were well written...loved their honeymoon in Bora-Bora as well.

You used to update so frequently!👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#942

I am surprised I never came across this story before.

Thanks to Eccentrica, who recommended it to me, I got to read it.

Read the first few chapters and got hooked.

Read it all day yesterday and finished reading before going to bed!

Even though essentially the characters were the same as in the show, but still you added your own touch to it. The chemistry between the two protagonists was palpable. Liked Lavanya too.

Aakash was a little less serious, which was a good change.

Appreciated the fact that in spite of knowing who Khushi was, Arnav didnot ill treat her, like he did in the show.

There was a bit opf thrill, passion, romance, all that is necessary in a good masala film.😆

Really enjoyed the read.

Will definitely go through all your work now.

Wish and hope you write more.

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: Eccentrica
This story wasn't something I had come across earlier or heard it in passing, and so if it had not been for Rasgulla_sp I wouldn't have come to know about it.

It was indeed a case of hook, line and sinker for Arnav when it came to Khushi. During their early interactions I first had a feeling that he had taken a dislike towards her, but when it was revealed that he had actually fallen for her, I was surprised...pleasantly, of course.

The bifurcations in the story in the form of Garima's relation to Arnav and the new chracter Tanirika also formed for an interesting read.

The protagonists shared the most toe-curling of kisses😳; even their intimate interactions were well written...loved their honeymoon in Bora-Bora as well.

You used to update so frequently!👏

Thank you so much. Wow is all I can say. You read is appreciable itself and then you go and recommend it to others. Really really grateful for this.

Yes, it was essentially a masala story created in the same fabric that was laid out. Just the cut and stitching was my own. It is like two designers have bought the same fabric and made dresses that look similar yet have some distinguishing factors.

I do write but not on IF anymore. Hopefully soon I shall have my own book published. May be you would read that as well some day.

and yes, it is romance that I write about.

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: 1chilly
I am surprised I never came across this story before.
Thanks to Eccentrica, who recommended it to me, I got to read it.
Read the first few chapters and got hooked.
Read it all day yesterday and finished reading before going to bed!

Even though essentially the characters were the same as in the show, but still you added your own touch to it. The chemistry between the two protagonists was palpable. Liked Lavanya too.
Aakash was a little less serious, which was a good change.
Appreciated the fact that in spite of knowing who Khushi was, Arnav didnot ill treat her, like he did in the show.
There was a bit opf thrill, passion, romance, all that is necessary in a good masala film.😆
Really enjoyed the read.
Will definitely go through all your work now.
Wish and hope you write more.

Thank you so much for your note here.

I don't have to much to add after my reply to eccentrica... but yeah I have written some stories on IF. Some One shots, FF and SS on Geet and IPK. As you can see Gul's characters inspired to awaken the writer in me.

I shall forever be indebted to Gul and her stories.