ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp - Page 93

Oh my god... you still want one??

i thot this story was dead and buried long back...

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Oh my god... you still want one??

i thot this story was dead and buried long back...

Originally posted by: Kiely

epilogue???

What??? after 6 months or more... you are still waiting for one??

i am amazed... ab toh ye story mujhe yaad bhi nahi!!

Originally posted by: kins103

yes i want it

i miss your writings

i am writing a novel... once it is published inshallaah... you will find something to read...

for now.. watch Suvreen Guggal...

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Awsome FF...loved it..

Thank you so much for liking my work... i am humbled and touched that someone still finds this FF and reads it...

appreciate it...

@sana11 Thank you... OMG someone is still reading... FF's on IPK...
i am amazed... glad you liked it...

Res

Edited:

This is one story which was started in the initial days of IPK when most of us werent even on the Forum then, coz a story THIS entertaining deserves audience.

Arnav is a jerk. Period. He is attracted to her so he kisses her. He wants to punish her so he kisses her. He misses her so he kisses her. He wants her to agree to something and he kisses her. Many a times it progresses into other things woh alag baat hain 😉 😳 Whatever happens he just wants to touch her. To me it is less of a desperation to be physical and more to be close to her... to assure himself she is around... that she is for real and close to touch.

Khushi too reciprocates his feelings with equal ardor. For a girl this innocent, Arnav is a magnet and she cant help but reciprocate- the tigress that she is. If he shouts, she can shout too. If he acts weird, she can too. If he makes out with her then she can too.

Amidst their pyar and takraar, noks and jhoks you interwove so many cliffhangers... It is good I had the entire story to read at my disposal...

The past, which was hinted at in IPK during the time you wrote this story, was described well by you. All the past which turned out all lousy at the end in the show was more than justified by you. And yes, I hate Tanirika. A woman who would want to use her daughter for riches instead of hugging her tight when she sees her after ages... such a woman is despicable.

I feel for Lavanya though. She got neither his love nor a marriage of convenience from Arnav. And also had to witness a public display of Arnav's love for Khushi on her own pre-wedding function. But like the wise La in the show, when she saw his love for Khushi she left. Who wants to live a loveless marriage?

Payal and Aakash got their happy ending too. Though Payal was the same shy sorts, I loved this playful Aakash.

Good the granny decided to get ArHi married. Arnav expressed his love for Khushi in the last chapter, if left to him, Khushi and he would have been far from married, only bickering and making out or if things got too hot to handle then sleeping with each other... but certainly not married or pregnant.

But they are... and I am happy for them. They will be parents and I am happy.

This is to the Arnav and Khushi of your story and all their love and love making 👏 😉

PS: Why did you rush the end?

one of my fav arshi FF s :)

@rasgulla

i hardly log in to IF now

and to find someone having read a story i wrote so long ago is a compliment i shall cherish.

Moreover, the reply and its length humbles me.

Thank you for liking my story.

The reason i finished the story so fast was that the real show did not give me much to go on. And once i lose interest, very difficult to find inspiration.