ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp - Page 60

WOW!!! Bravo Vrushali, you are one amazing story teller.

You are just so brilliant; you covered the story from every angle possible. Humor, passion, drama, romance, and suspense everything a reader wants in a story. Did you ever think about publishing your work? Not this one of course any other work, you are awesome. Maybe you have to think about it.

You know how to capture reader's attention; you are brilliant with character sketch and the scene description is just amazing.

Girl, you captured my attention from the beginning, its weekend husband is home but I can't just stop to think about your story and what happens next, when will I get chance to read the next chapter. You made my weekend very exciting.

The way you interlinked Arnav and Kushi's past is just so brilliant. And the way you made Arnav realize let past be past, we can never redo it but future is something we can look forward to, oh that was so beautiful. Every scene description was just perfect, But for me the best scene is Arnav's anguish, heart break and loss over Kushi's limp body when she fell from the stairs; I had tears while reading it, Hats off to your writing skills Vrushali (don't know why I feel something similar is going to happen in the serial for Arnav to open his heart and realize that he cannot live without Kushi Kumari Gupta)

Once again I say you are an excellent writer but you are an amazing story teller. Thanks for With or Without and now I wait for the next update.

Ps. Oh I am sorry I did not press the Like button on any of your chapters as I was reading it without logging in on the forum. But you know I LOVED it, oh there it is no Love button to press.

And I loved the banners made by Lekha & Arhilicious on the front page. It's so beautiful.

Oh mein boolgayi "Meri Rani" how can I forget that, Kya baat hai yaar I love this ASR man!!!! I get it serial mein Kushi is the one who gives nicknames to ASR and here it's the other way isn't it?

Originally posted by: Radhe1085

WOW!!! Bravo Vrushali, you are one amazing story teller.

That's so nice of you to say so. I am humbled.

You are just so brilliant; you covered the story from every angle possible. Humor, passion, drama, romance, and suspense everything a reader wants in a story. Did you ever think about publishing your work? Not this one of course any other work, you are awesome. Maybe you have to think about it.

I just try to give what i like a story. do onto others what you want other to do onto to you!!

Yeah i am working on a story to write as a book and see if it has potential to be published. I need to first write and then think if its worth. If nothing i shall tell a story. the rest i shall leave to God!

You know how to capture reader's attention; you are brilliant with character sketch and the scene description is just amazing.

thanks! i am a very visual person with photographic memory so my descriptions are how i would describe a photo in my mind.. i try and call it painting with words for i wish i could paint but not even to save my life can i do a brush stroke. may be in some other lifetime!!

Girl, you captured my attention from the beginning, its weekend husband is home but I can't just stop to think about your story and what happens next, when will I get chance to read the next chapter. You made my weekend very exciting.

Thanks so much i try and garner involvement for without that one would not read beyond a couple of chapters.

The way you interlinked Arnav and Kushi's past is just so brilliant. And the way you made Arnav realize let past be past, we can never redo it but future is something we can look forward to, oh that was so beautiful. Every scene description was just perfect, But for me the best scene is Arnav's anguish, heart break and loss over Kushi's limp body when she fell from the stairs; I had tears while reading it, Hats off to your writing skills Vrushali (don't know why I feel something similar is going to happen in the serial for Arnav to open his heart and realize that he cannot live without Kushi Kumari Gupta)

Once again I say you are an excellent writer but you are an amazing story teller. Thanks for With or Without and now I wait for the next update.

Thank you. i guess that is how i would love to see him in the serial. What he wont let be known even to himself would come out when he thinks she is lost to him. the pain of losing someone whom you should have if nothing told that i love you, i think is the worst kind. bol dena chahiye, jyada se jyada mana karega.

Zindagi tere bagair rukti nahi

Par chal rahi hai ye bhi toh hosh nahi

tere na hone ka sabab toh meri muskurahaton mein hai

par tere hone se ye aankhein naam ho ye bhi toh laazmi hai.

Ps. Oh I am sorry I did not press the Like button on any of your chapters as I was reading it without logging in on the forum. But you know I LOVED it, oh there it is no Love button to press.

And I loved the banners made by Lekha & Arhilicious on the front page. It's so beautiful.

Oh mein boolgayi "Meri Rani" how can I forget that, Kya baat hai yaar I love this ASR man!!!! I get it serial mein Kushi is the one who gives nicknames to ASR and here it's the other way isn't it?

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Dont worry about the likes...

and the meri rani is what usually nagz calls me..so i just passed that endearment to Arnav..JLT
Oh that is so sweet of nagz (its Nargis right?).
i am into endearments and felt Arnav may be romantic enough to be that indulgent towards her!

I love it, actually it gives a personal touch to romance isn't it?