Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 4

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Thankyou so much for ur compliment....

I'll try to write in engilsh...And this is mixure of HINDI & URDU....

Actually urdu more....

UMMMMMMM....Karan: lives in sydney...Goes to coll...He's like a cool dude...never weared a suit in his life😆....Loves music is his passion.... he has only grandmother....I think that is enough...when u'll read my story u'll understand more...

KSHITIJ: Lives in india with his mother, father and younger brother...Handles his dad's business...v good guy...never looked at a girl....loves music...wear suits...never weared a jeans...don't want to be cool guy.....I think that is enough...for futher read my story...Ok...

And u'll find who loves kumud is part 3.....

AND YES KSHITIJ & KARAN ARE LOOK ALIKE....

AMIT SAREEN IS PLAYING DOUBLE ROLE IN MY FAN-FIC....

It ok but just write in english as much you can and By the way the guy is none other than Karan. As you said he live in Sydney so does Kumud and He loves music and go College. So he is the one. I'm i right well i guess i have to wait for part 3 Contiune soon

AWESOME!! the first parts of the fanfic were great....u have a nice style of writing....now plz jaldi se continue karo...and i wonder who the mystery guy is?? 😉 😆

That was AWESOME!!!!! BRILLIANT!!!!!! FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!SUPERFANTASTIC!!!!!! I am loving this!!!!

daay_dreamer tusi gr8 ho!!!!!!!!!
thanks 4 dedicating tht poem to me.
awesome
cont karna...plz

fantastico!!! gr8 going 👏 👏

THANKYOU THANKYOU.....4 all ur comments...
I'll cont. soon...JUST wait few hours. 😃

~ EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH~
PART 3

Guy turns around, it's none other than KARAN SAIGAL. Kumud smiles and both hug..after a while they let go...Then kumud asks him
K: how do u know it was me? koi a ur bhi toh ho sakti thi...Karan smiles and kisses her on cheeks and says
KAR:Tumhari saanson ki mehak, tumhari paayal ki chan chan aur tumhari mujodgi ka ehsaas.

Then they both leaves for classes and at lunch time they meet again and then comes by tree and sit there and chat lovey dovy...When suddenly someone from behind hold both of them and kumud screams. When they turn around it's none other than KALI & GUNGUN... 😆 (kya ladkiyan hain)They both are laughing...

KAR: TUM LOG YAHAN!!!!
KA (kali): Kya karan...tum bhi na...since last 3 yrs se u know DI...then obviouly u know us from last 3 yrs...
GU: aur last 3 yrs se jab bhi tum humse milte ho yahi kehte ho.."TUM LOG YAHAN"...
Both r luaghing, karan embassarased and kumud angry..
Kumud gives them an aNGRY LOOK..
KA: we're just kidding DI...
GU: ok...sorry...now shall we leave?
KAR: where?
KA: not u karan...us three home...
KAR: ohhhhhhhh....
K: ok lets move on...
before leaving karan hugs kumud and kisses kumud on her cheeks..Kumud blushes and kali & gungun
KALI & GUNGUN: OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Then they all leave...Karan goes to oposite direction from kumud...

Karan goes to hostel (note: karan lives in boys hostel)
He goes to his room. When his roommate gives and letter that he recived for karan...Karan reads the letter...and smiles...

MEHRA'S HOUSE

In the evening all r sitting and chatting aving good time..When sunddenly whole atomosphere changes from Kali's 1 question.
KA: Badi ma, you never told us about ur your family? (KALI & KUMUD DON'T KNOW THAT ESHA & ABHAY RBROTHER & SIS) & how did u met BADE PAPA?
K: and also never told us what relationship u have eith papa & mama?
KA: what happened to our parents?
At these questions they both sis' asked both VISHU & EHSH r shocked......
THE END

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT

Originally posted by: kshitij

It ok but just write in english as much you can and By the way the guy is none other than Karan. As you said he live in Sydney so does Kumud and He loves music and go College. So he is the one. I'm i right well i guess i have to wait for part 3 Contiune soon

GOOD GUESS..😉😆

I'm trying to write in eglish coz sooo many people said it...But uk now what....It's not just good that people don't understand their langauage....I'M NOT BEING RUDE....But it's good we know english..but we must also know our home language...as mine is URDU...I know it since i was child...I know english as my 2nd language...But we must now our home language as others....

If my this reply have hurt so I'm really really sorry...i don't have intention to hurt any one...

HAVE A GOOD DAY....

"Day Dreamer Wah! Wah! Kya bola! Sur ki aawaz moo se nahi, dil se aayee! Kya bola!!!!!!"

That was AWESOME!!!!!! BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!! I am speechless!!!!!

You deserve this:

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