Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 3

continue fst! y u leave us in suspense

THANKYOU SOOOO MUCH to all of u for all of ur comments...I'm going to write part 2 soo just wait few minutes...

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH
PART 2
They r KUMUD (right one) Kali (middle) & GUNGUN (left one).
K:Aaj 27th hai?
Ka(in sleepy tone): what's so big deal about it?
GU: yeah di...27th comes evry month.😆
E picks up the mess from floor these girls had made last night. 😆 😆 (messy girls)
E: get up all of u and come down in 5 mins.
ALL: 5mins!!!!!1
Gu: mama 5 mins toh hume bed se uthne mein lagegein... 😆 (god main toh alarm ki awaz sonte hi bed se uth jati hon, warna uski vibration mujhe chain se rehne hi nahi deti 😆 😉 )
E: Khabardar!!mujhe teeno paanch minutes mein niche nazar anni chahiyein WARNA......
ALL: OK....
E: that's my girls
E goes...

After 10 min at dinning table
All sits, when GArv also comes and sits..
E: arre Garv tum kab ayye?
G: When you were trying to wake these( ponits at K, Ka & GUNGUN) lazy bones ko utha rahi thi... 😆 😉
V & E & G laughs
other 3 gets angry.... 😡 😡 😡
K: how dare u? 😡 😡 😡
G: what!!! maine sab ko kaha hai...
K: KYON KAHA HAI????
G: Meri marzi...
K Kyon tumhari marzi kyon?
G: MERI MARZI...
E: ENOUGH GARV
G: MUM APP USKO....
E: I SAID ENOUGH...
V: Kumud tum aaj kuch zayada hi khubsooraat lag rah ho...Koi khaas baat?
before kumud could speak Kali spesks
KA: Khaas hi toh hai...aaj woh jo araha hai....
V & E: ohhhhhhhhhh
G: woh koun/
GU: bhai wohi jis ke bina inho ne 3 weeks tadap tadap ke guzare hain....
Kumud punches her jokingly...
G: ohh tabhi main kahon ke yeh BHOOTNI (GHOST) ajj itni achi kyon lag rahi hai?
KA: loh hogayi inki subhah...
Kumud gets up and tries to leave
E: kahan ja rahi ho kumud?
K: coll
E: but soo early. gungun aue kali ke sath jana na..
KA: badi ma humari classes late hain di ke early hai, and winks at kumud
Kumud leaves....

AT COLLEGE
Kumud is looking around everywhere, searching for someone...when ine of her collegue comes
GUY: hi kumud?
K: hi...how r u?
GUY: I'm fine...but u don't look fine
K: woh...actually I'm looking for someone.
GUY: the one u're searching for is there
K: thakns
and goes where guy told her. When suddenly she hear beautiful melody and start walking where this melody is comming from....
A guy is playing guitar (not shown face) everyone is sitting around him and lost in his melody....Coz he plays guitar sooo beautifully...
Kumud smiles and comes right behind him and sit behind him really close...Then suddenly guy stops palying guitar and without turing around says: AAGAYI TUM....
Kumud smiles guy turns around...He's is.....
THE END
NOW U GUESS WHO IS HE? 😉

Originally posted by: kshitij

Hi It geart. You wirte to gud.
It is possible if you cud write in english as i don't understand hindi.Plus Who does Kuud goes with Kshitj or Karan. and does Kshitj and Karna look same in ur fanfic. I mean do they both wear casual clothes or suit. Do they both work in bussinee but differnt company ect. Just giv more detail Of kshitj and Karan

Thankyou so much for ur compliment....

I'll try to write in engilsh...And this is mixure of HINDI & URDU....

Actually urdu more....

UMMMMMMM....Karan: lives in sydney...Goes to coll...He's like a cool dude...never weared a suit in his life😆....Loves music is his passion.... he has only grandmother....I think that is enough...when u'll read my story u'll understand more...

KSHITIJ: Lives in india with his mother, father and younger brother...Handles his dad's business...v good guy...never looked at a girl....loves music...wear suits...never weared a jeans...don't want to be cool guy.....I think that is enough...for futher read my story...Ok...

And u'll find who loves kumud is part 3.....

AND YES KSHITIJ & KARAN ARE LOOK ALIKE....

AMIT SAREEN IS PLAYING DOUBLE ROLE IN MY FAN-FIC....

Originally posted by: karan_ranveer

gr8 job!
keep it up!
do write anothe poem like tht...it was awesome!

OK I'll write soon...Ok but that will be not mine orignally....Nut I'll write peoms which r my favourite from different poets...ok....

Thers is another peom...this isn't mine nut this is my favourite....I hope u'll like it....(karan_ranveer, meri behena tumhare liye)

~~MAIN KHAYAL HON KISI AUR KA
MUJHE SOCHTA KOI AUR HAI~~

main khayal hoon kisi aur ka mujhe sochta koi aur hai
saray aeena mera aks hai pasay aeena koi aur hai

main kisi ke dast-e-talab mein hoon to kisi ke harfey dua main huun
main naseeb hoon kisi aur ka mujhe mangta koi aur hai

Kabhi laut aaye to na pochna sirf dekhna barhay gaur se
jinhe raaste mein khabar huee ke ye raasta koi aur hai

ajab aitabaar ba aitabari ke darmiyan hai zindagi
main khareeb huun kisi aur ke mujhe jaanta koi aur hai

teri roshni meri khad-o-khaal se mukhtalif to nahi magar
tuu qarib aa tujhe dekh luun tuu vahi hai ya koi aur hai

vahi munsifon ki rivayatein vahi faislon ki ibaratein
mera jurm to koee aur tha par meri saza koi aur hai

By: Saleem kauser (poet)

Hope u'll like it....

HAVE A GOOD DAY...

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Thers is another peom...this isn't mine nut this is my favourite....I hope u'll like it....(karan_ranveer, meri behena tumhare liye)

~~MAIN KHAYAL HON KISI AUR KA
MUJHE SOCHTA KOI AUR HAI~~

main khayal hoon kisi aur ka mujhe sochta koi aur hai
saray aeena mera aks hai pasay aeena koi aur hai

main kisi ke dast-e-talab mein hoon to kisi ke harfey dua main huun
main naseeb hoon kisi aur ka mujhe mangta koi aur hai

Kabhi laut aaye to na pochna sirf dekhna barhay gaur se
jinhe raaste mein khabar huee ke ye raasta koi aur hai

ajab aitabaar ba aitabari ke darmiyan hai zindagi
main khareeb huun kisi aur ke mujhe jaanta koi aur hai

teri roshni meri khad-o-khaal se mukhtalif to nahi magar
tuu qarib aa tujhe dekh luun tuu vahi hai ya koi aur hai

vahi munsifon ki rivayatein vahi faislon ki ibaratein
mera jurm to koee aur tha par meri saza koi aur hai

By: Saleem kauser (poet)

Hope u'll like it....

HAVE A GOOD DAY...

arre dreamer...its soooooo good!...i love it!..im gonna put it in my file!😆...kya pata...mere kaam aajaye future mein!!!👏

Can u plz write this poem & fiction in english?? The way others writing like nightangel ,gulee etc plz..

To be very honest I don't understand any words...

your fiction is good & I wanna read it.

I hope he's kshitij.hope that u'll make it a sweet musical college story

This is so cute Day Dreamer!!😃

I loved d poems so much!!😛

its kwel!!😛

The story linr is also on d rite track!!!😃

Gr8 Going!!👏

Weldun!!!😊

Keep it Up!😉

Take Care

Anoli

xxx