Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kshitij+Khumud

That was VERY VERY interesting.
Yaar, Day_Dreamer, hume yeh to baata diya ki ladke ladkiyon pe marte hain, leken kounsi ladki?

Please start a bit sooner than you had posted. I am very eager to read htis onE 😉

Arre agar ladiyon ke naam bataye toh meri kahani ka toh suspense hi pani pani hojayega...Todha wait karo....

aur haan

Main kuch hi dair main part 1 post karne wali hoon....

so do watch out for ti,,,,

~~~EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH~~~

Part 1

(Vishal=V, Esha=E, Kumud=K, Kali=Ka, Garv=G, Gungun=Gu, Karan=Kar)

NOTE: Esha is good character. I'll say Vishal as Vishu.

Sydney
Its 8:00 am in the morning. Esha is preparing for breakfast. Vishu is also woken up and getting ready.


V: Esha!!! Jaldi aao…
Esha is holding jug full of juice then put it down on the dinning table. Then says:
E: Aa rahi hon.. 2 mins.
V: Jaldi aoo..
E: Aa rahi hon na…to herself "pata nahi koun si qayammat aney wali hai."

Esha enters in her bedroom, she's holding glass of milk. Puts the glass down on table.

E: Kya howaa? Kyon sara ghar saar (head) pe utha rakha hai?

Vishu turns around and he's holding tie in his hands, make very cute face….
Esha sighs.

E: vishu kitni bar kaha hai ke tie khud bandha karo…

And then Esha starts doing his tie. Vishu holds her tight, Esha blushes.

V: arre agar tie khud bandon ka toh yeh itni khubsoorat pal miss nahi karonga…

Esha blushes then says: Sharam karo kuch, 2 bachon ke baap ho, ghar mein 4 jawan bache hain. Koi…koi dekhega toh kya kahega?
V: Yehi kahega ke "Bhude (old) hogaye par romance karma nahi chota".. and smiles…

Esha smiles, she'd done his tie. Now she tries to leave but Vishu holds her hand. Esha tries to free her hand.

E: Vishu chodo na late ho raha hai. Tumhe office ke liye aur mujhe bachon ko uthana hai.
V (still holding): Arre who toh kab ke uth gaye Garv toh jogging karne bhi chala gaya.
E: aue appki who teen (3) rajkumariyan?

When Esha said about teen rajkumariyan Vishu leaves her hand and sighs, then says:
V: ohhhooo yeh teeno toh sudharti hi nahi, itni late tak sonay (sleep) ki yeh addaat tumne hi unhe dali hai.
E: KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

V laughs and says He's just joking. Then his cell rings Vishu picks up. Esha signals him to come to dinning table, he's like Ok.
Then Esha goes to TEEN RAJKUMARI's room. Opens the door and sees three girls sleeping on king size bed. There faces are covered with blanket. Esha open the curtains.

E: Uttho meri rajkumariyon…

All girls take ungarais…

The girl on the left says: let us sleep mama…Abhi toh sirf 4;00am howe Hain.
E: 4 nahi 8 hogaye hain. GET UP!!!!!
Girl in the middle: 8 toh roz bajte hain, iss mein kounsi nayi (new) baat hai. Waise bhi Chem class mein ajj baran bajne wale hain. Turns around and sleep again.
E: Hey bhagwan kya hoga iin teeno ka?
Girl at the right: ohhho kya shor hai… sone kyon naih deta koi mujhe (in very sleepy tone). And turns around and sleep again.
E: shor ki bachi jaldi uthho 8 bajgayein hain.
Girl at left looks at watch and says: 8 nahi 8;15. 15 mins toh appne paap ko tie bandhne mein laga diye hain. (God yeh hain ajj kall ki ladhkiyan..LOLZ)
Esha blushes and embarrassed.
Girl in middle: ajj date kya hai?
E: 25th January
Girl at the right suddenly sits up with jerk and shouts (not very loud):WHAT!!!!27TH JANURARY!!!!!!!!!! (showing her back)
Other two also sits up from her shout…and keep yawning….they take blankets off….Their faces shown they are….

THE END

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT….

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Title Sequence:

Dekha hai humne ek sapna
sapne mein dekha ek humsafar ka saath..
Kya hoga kabhi yeh sapna sach?

Yeh kis mour pe le aayi mohabaat ki raah
Ik mour pe tha ik jhoote humsafar ka saath
Ek mour pe thama ek ajnabee ka haath

Kya rahega aise hi tere haathon mein yeh haath
Kya milegi apni manzil ek humsafar ke saath
Kya rahega akhiri saans tak ik humsafar ka saat
Ek humsafar ka saath…….

for dh rest of

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Title Sequence:

Dekha hai humne ek sapna
sapne mein dekha ek humsafar ka saath..
Kya hoga kabhi yeh sapna sach?

Yeh kis mour pe le aayi mohabaat ki raah
Ik mour pe tha ik jhoote humsafar ka saath
Ek mour pe thama ek ajnabee ka haath

Kya rahega aise hi tere haathon mein yeh haath
Kya milegi apni manzil ek humsafar ke saath
Kya rahega akhiri saans tak ik humsafar ka saat
Ek humsafar ka saath…….

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

Awesome Poem yaar!!

Thankyou sooo much....Yeh meri life ki pehli aur SHAYAD akhri ho....

Any ways I'll cont. soon

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Title Sequence:

Dekha hai humne ek sapna
sapne mein dekha ek humsafar ka saath..
Kya hoga kabhi yeh sapna sach?

Yeh kis mour pe le aayi mohabaat ki raah
Ik mour pe tha ik jhoote humsafar ka saath
Ek mour pe thama ek ajnabee ka haath

Kya rahega aise hi tere haathon mein yeh haath
Kya milegi apni manzil ek humsafar ke saath
Kya rahega akhiri saans tak ik humsafar ka saat
Ek humsafar ka saath…….

Arre wa!!!! Kya likha Day Dreamer!!!!!! That was simply AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You know what, this fanfiction reminds me of the movie Yaadein, 3 sisters...

That was an AMAZING start!!
!!!

PLz. cont. soon!