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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

When Maan came back home…He was too upset…Geet tries to find out reason …But Maan had no satisfactory answer for her question She dared not to ask any thing else .

Next morning:

He was pretending to b normal…But he was not ...n Even Maan knew...Geet is suspecting his behavior.

However after taking breakfast .He left KM 1 hours early …..as He made excuse of any meeting

It was about 9:00 am in the morning when he pressed door bell button of same flat where Tina asked him to meet

An elderly lady opened the door." Tina Anand yahin rehti hai na " Maan questions .When lady nodded her head… He gives his introduction "Tina se kahiye k Maan Singh Khuraana ussay milney aaye hain "

Lady let him came in. And asked him to sit ….Before she can call Tina … She was in front of them …lik She had no work except waiting for Maan.

Lady moved in. Now both Maan n Tina were face to face.Maan was looking without a blink ….n suddenly... He put his eyes down from his face n turns around." Ha bollo kya baat hai " Maan says

" Maan hum kariban 6 saal baad mil rahay hai " She says ….without answering to that question which Maan asked

" Main yahan yeh jannay k liye nahi aaya k hum kitnay saal baad mil rahay hai ..I think I should go ...if u have nothing to say more " Maan moved toward her again in frustration

" Nahi Maan kehnay k liye bahut kuch hai tum pehlay baith to jayo …." She politely says

" Nahi main aise He theek ho " Maan was too angry " Jo baat hai who kaho "

" Maan I now u hate Sam fron depth of ur heart…Aur maine tumko uski baat karney k liye bhi nahi bulaaya " uska galla bhar rahaa tha ..while saying this

N this made…. Maan to cool down lil bit " toh fir "

She continuous " 6 saal pehlay Sam cheated u…tumhe chod diya .aur unsay…..Ek American milliner Mack Patel say shaadi kar li …Usko lagga k ek Milliner Pita k aulad hotay hua ….us daulat k waris hottay hua bhi …tum ...patta nahi …who sabh haasil kar payogay k nahi ……jo Mack k pass hai….Us waqt mujhko bhi uski baat theek lagi ..kyonki tumhara ek bhai aur bhi tha….."

"agar mera bhai tha to….." Maan says in high tone

" To tumko saari property usky sath share karni padti …aur kya patta tum agay barh patay k nahi…U was fresh pass out then ….n business main establish karna tha tumhay apnay aap ko….tumko success mil patti ja nahi patta nahi " She clears real intentions behind that what Sam did

" Aur huya uska ulta ….Maan Singh Khuraana apnay Pitta ki viraasat ka eklota waris to ban gaya….per this was not enough for me …..Jo mujhe milla ussay Char gunna say bhi jyaada ka Malik ho…" He continues "The great Maan Singh Khuraana ….India's top business tycoon…..To kya Sam aab apni galti sudharna chahti hai … phir say… " He lefts sentence incomplete…with lil smile on corners of his lips

Tina remained silent for some time " Maan Sam ko uski galti ki sajja mil gai ….ek Car accident main uskra puri body paralyzed….ho gayi hai three months ago "She discloses

Maan was shocked even when He had no emotions for Her. Suddenly he started to think back ...when He was in America for higher studies…He met Sam in a mutual friend's party ...Sam or Sameera She was also a there on study visa ….But her family background was totally different from Maan …..She was from lower middle class family from Punjab…..Her sister had been settled in America after marriage with an old age American Punjabi…..Sam always had big dreams…..She also wanted to study abroad... But her finacial conditions were not good….. Somehow She asked her sister Tina to help her…Her sister Tina Anand arranged everything for Sam….but also cleared that after this... Sam had to do everything by herself ….So Sam was living alone with her friend ...doing a part time job with studies …..When She met Maan …..a 22 year old handsome hunk….She thought her all desires gonna b fulfilled ….Maan Singh Khuraana was the Hier to great Khuraana empire in Delhi ….one meeting in that party …..was jst a beginning ….they fel in lov …For Sam this was lik a financial deal…but for Maan this was matter of Heart. He had everything…He was able to keep many girlz @ a time…But Daddi Maa's given values….were in Him…so even in America He was not spoiled ……This was the reason Sam internally hate him….coz He had no habit to spend money l without reason….no habit to throw late nite parties ..n no habit to over drink ..But He was Khuraana heir that was the reason... Sam was still with Maan…in this two year relation one day came when Sam met Mack …He was American Indian ..n a milliner …But he was twice the age of Sam…for Sam this was not a problem lik her sister…So She left alone ….Maan …..for him…..For Maan this was the biggest shock ever after his mother's death… He overcame...but became a emotionless….feeling less man…within couple of years ...He also lost his father..n He became Master of this empire ….for him only work n work n success was the aim of lif to hide pain….When Geet came in his lif he didn't know..what n when happened to him that he lost his memory he didn't know….But again jab Maan nay zindgi ko ek mauka aur diya….jab woh phir say Geet k sath zindgi shuru kar raha tha…to…phir say kyon destiny is reopening his that phase of his lif

" Maan Maan" when Tina recalled him twice he comes out of his thoughts

" to tum aab kya chahti ho ?" Maan straight forward question puts

" Maan na mujhe kuch chaahiy..na Sam ko….bahut sharam aa rahi hai mujhko what we did…Per Maan koi aur hai ..who needs u " She says in mysterious way

" Dekho Tina mujhko yeh pehalian suljhani nahi aati….tell me the real matter"Maan says in frustration

" Theek hai Maan ..the real matter is Sam has a child with u ….…She was pregnant with ur child when She left u…usko is baat ka tab pata challa jab woh Mack say shaddi kar chukki thi " Tina discloses real matter

" Mera Baccha …." Maan says these words only

" Ha ur n Sam's…A five n half year old girl….Shaddi k kuch time baad …Mack ko bhi patta chaal gaya tha ...tumhare pass who aa nahi sakti thi……coz tum bhi nahi apnatay us ko…Us nay Mack k samnay bahut mintay ki…tab Mack ne ek sharat raki k ….agar Sam ko uskay sath rehna hai then ...She will hav to abandon her child…after birth as... She was not in state to abort child… She accepted…She had no other way " She cries

" Aur Sam kar bhi kya sakti thi….uski fitrat he aise hai ..ya kahon tumhare khon main hai ' Maan shouts

" Maan jo bhi ho Maa Maa hoti hai….Sam k pass koi rasta nahi tha unsay apni studies chod di…coz She wanted to b permanent on marriage basis….But her marriage was at risk..means no scope to stay in US..tumhare pass janne k rastay bannd thy….India family k pass anahi sakti thi…So she took this decision…After delivery She handed baby to me….But it was also not possible for ne to keep baby..Mere husband bhi mere say kaffi baday hai..aur bimaar rehtay thay…unki dekhbaal karti ya baby ki…so I gav baby to a couple…humaray rishtaydari main he thy….they had no baby…..But they not adopted baby legally…do saal pehlay unkay apnay yahan beta hua to …Us bacchi k sath unka behavior he changed ho gaya..n few days back they came to me as they were not willing to keep her" She sits on the floor while saying this

" To aab tum us bacchi ko yahan lay kar aayi ho mare pass" Maan says same words which She has in her mind

" Aur kya karti Maan…hai to who tumhara khoon..usko kissi orphanage main nahi they pai…Usko apni Maa k kiye ki sazza mil rahi hai" She says

" to Tina tum chahti ho usko main apnay pass rakhon….how dare u…mainey koi anath ashram nahi khol rakka….Sam ja Sam say juddi kisi bhi cheese se koi matlab nahi mujhe …chahay koi zindgi he na ho…Mera bhi privaar hai….meri bibi hai…aur…after few months ….She gonna give birth to my child…aur apnay ajnamay bachay per hi main koi bojh daal du …no way….My baby with my wife is only heir to my empire….my lov my name…." giving his final verdict he was jst about to leave.at that moment he hears some words" Massi aap ro kyon rahi ho " Maan who was at door..He turned back…two lil hands were wiping Tina's tears.Maan became a statue looking at her without a blink

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Fantastic update...
so tina and sam both broke Maan's heart in the past. And now when he has moved on they came back in his life with an unexpected surprise.
Maan has a daughter!!
Loved how maan spoke to tina in the end. I was kinda relieved that you didn't take up a cliche scene like Maan accepting his child the moment he hears about it.
Maan is about to meet his daughter.
Sam is paralyzed but will she feature in future or not. I kinda want her to do. But then it is upto you.
Continue soon.
One more thing does dev live in km Kya??
Plz update soon.
:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
wow nice update...
OMG Sam n tina are so cheap...
awww maan meets his daughter..
cant wait for the next one...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update

cant wait to read more

love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like what Maan said to Tina
i'm scared that Tina and Sam are gonna use the kid to break up Maaneet!
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
let maan take that girl home which he obviously will
plz update the next part soon
waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awasome update
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: icy_magma

Fantastic update...
so tina and sam both broke Maan's heart in the past. And now when he has moved on they came back in his life with an unexpected surprise.
Maan has a daughter!!
Loved how maan spoke to tina in the end. I was kinda relieved that you didn't take up a cliche scene like Maan accepting his child the moment he hears about it.
Maan is about to meet his daughter.
Sam is paralyzed but will she feature in future or not. I kinda want her to do. But then it is upto you.
Continue soon.
One more thing does dev live in km Kya??
Plz update soon.
:-) :-) :-) :-)



THANX DEAR I WILL KEEP ALL THIS IN MY MIND...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update dear.
Totally different concept.
Continue soon pls.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

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