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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
nice update
but have a feeling there is more in background story
whatever happens, hope there are no misunderstandings between maan and geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
luved it
do continue soon
nyc concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Part Four

Tina looked at lil girl .Hold lil kid's hands in hers

" Nahi Beta massi has pain in her ankle ….thats why I m felling lil pain " Tina said

Lil's girl noticed Maan standing lik statue at the door…" Inhi uncle ne apkay sath fight kin na….Mannat ko patta hai…I heard...But Lila Mausi ( old lady ,a servant at house ) nay Humko ..roka... aanay nahi diya " revolving her round eyes baby says

When She used term 'humko' …Maan came out of his thoughts …coz Daddi Maa always used same….Girl moved towards Maan.Put her one hand on Her waist... She started to shout at Maan in her low pitch " Apnay Mannat ki Massi k sath fight kyo ki ?"

Maan was not giving any answer to her.He was jst gazing her…Her way of pronunciation… was same as Daddi n Maan had….lik use of 'Hum ' as Daddi 's habit..n Maan always used... His full name instead of " I " for himself….when ever he got angry or he had …some thing important to say as…. She was using her name " Mannat"

Maan was trying to find himself in her….Her curly hair….her big broad eyes ….n fair complexion all resembled with Maan…coz Sam had straight hair….medium eyes n not much fair complexion as Maan had ….

Tina who was down on floor ….Got up n also moved towards them …She Put her hands on Mannat's shoulders n formally introduced her" Maan yeh Mannat hai "

Maan looked once n without responding …moved out.He was too upset..Without going to office ….He went back home .

He found Geet no where... then asked Deepak about her whereabout " Geet kahan hai?" He was too upset.Deepak informed him that ...She was watching movie in theater room

Maan moved in hurry towards room.When he opened door without making any noise ...Geet was sitting... crying aloud ….dark was all around…So He switched on light hearing her voice …." Geet kya hua kyon ro rahi ho..kissi ne kuch kahha" He put many questions at once while sitting next to her

" Maan dekhiye na Kitni acchi bibi hai...phir bhi dusri aurat say shup shup k milta rahha ..n now …who kahin challi gayi aur yeh musheebat ..mera matlaab ….apni beti ko is aadmi k pallay bhand gayi…aab kya hoga bechari bibi ka….is musheebat ko apnay sath to rakh nahi sakti….waise bhi Patti ki ek galti ne usko jeetay ji maar dia ….hay babaji kissi k sath aisa mat karna…" Geet was giving her reason….coz this was the emotional story of movie

" Oh main to darr hi gaya tha…." Taking her face in his hands a lil smile on his lips " Per Geet tumhara sixth month chall raha hai …itna TV aur movies mat dekha karro ….many programs can giv u much tension ..which is not good for u n our baby " putting his hands around her visible tummy …n palced a soft kiss

" to kya karon …Mr Khuraana bor ho rahi thi Daddi apni friend ki khabar lainay gayi hain…she was ill..so time pass to karma he tha "

" theek hai challo main yahin hun …tumhara time pass ho jayega " He helped her to get up while saying this

" Per Mr Khuraana aap itni jaldi kaise aa gaye…suraj ulti taraf say kaise nikla aaj " Geet taunts.

"geet jaise jaise tumhari delivery ka time aa raha hai ….waise waise apnay bacchay ko dekhnay ki chahat aur tumhari health ki hotti hoti hai .Mera mann nahi lagga main aa gaya….or dekho daddi Maan bhi nahi hai…so I n rite " He gives reason. Both looked at each other smiled n moved out. But deep inside Maan was struggling with himself..on on side there was unwanted child from broken relationship..n on other side ….Baby inside Geet….their dream… the bond which helped them to get closer n more closer …they r waiting eagerly for their child.From this co-incident ...film story n his past …Maan easily judged what will b Geet's reaction if She came to know bout Mannat n his relation with Sam .

But it was much important to keep Geet away from all problems due to her condition. Daddi had told him about Geet's first miscarriage …n doc also instructed him... to keep Geet happy n way from any tension ...So He was bound to show that he had no problem n he was happy…jst for Geet…His one wrong step was able to ruin all peace n happiness of Khuraanas n more their married lif…. which was under crises for many months due to Maan's ML….

Daddi Maa was back home within two hours when Maan got a call from Addi..so he had to go .

In next two days : Maan's lif had been turned into living hell….was bound to life dual lif.One as Geet ka Maan …n other in which he thought he is cheating Geet n himself.Maan was not able to concentrate on his work…..

In office: In his tension…..Maan had started to shout at each n everyone without any reason..n all were surprised but no one had that courage to ask him the reason .

Maan got a sudden call from Tina after two days of silence.She was going back n had made her mind…only orphanage was left as a option for Mannat she was not able to take Mannat's responsibility ….

Maan was shocked " Tina tumhara dimaag khraab ho gaya hai .."

" To kya karro Maan…..Beti tumhari or Sam ki hai…na tum or na hi Sam iski responsibily lannay ko ready ho…Main kya karro ….tum donno ki shaddi shuda zindgi ….. meri shadi shudda jindgi barbaad ho rahi hai…is k kaaran" She said

Maan remained silent for a while …He had something in mind " Main tumse milna chahta hu…aaj shaam ko at ur home .."he said


So I hop u lik .as other parts ..plz plz comment ...ur appreciation is my way 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
nice update
plzz let MAan accept the child .. she's too cute ... waisay bhi is mein masoom bachee ka kya fault hai ... am sure Geet can never hate her ... she might get upset with Maan (though I highly doubt that too ) ... for the time being Maan is right in keeping this info from Geet ... she cant take stress .. but plzz let Maan bond with Mannat ...
cant wait to read more
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Awesome update dear. ...

Story is really very heart touching..

Plz let maan accept maanat& geet too... Don't creat geet as kadus to tat little soul...


Story was tooo good...
Do continue soon...
Waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
i have sent u a buddy request...please pm me th next parts :-)
great concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
nice update
plz update next pt erly
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
nice
but is he planning to take the her home, what he will tell to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Wonderful update dear.
Hope Maan accepts the child.
But feel scared about how Geet will take it.
Am sure he will not tell her now.That will definitely create more problems later on when she finds out.
A very different concept.
Loving it.
Pls update soon.
Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Awesome update...
guess maan would bring the mannat home..
wonder how geet would react...
plzz continue soon

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