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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx buddies for great response 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ooh sounds interesting!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
sorry my comments will be late due to school!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2


"Maan Main tumse milna chahti hun...Per tumko mere pass anna hoga " She says

" Kis Sam ki baat kar rahi ho .?.main nahi janata ...or Haa Kyon aana hoga ?" in frustration Maan says

" Ha Maan tumko aana he hoga ..aur kyon iska jawab main tumko aise nahi de sakti " She clears her intentions

" Main nahi aa sakta ...Koi bhi Sam mere liye aab mynay nahi rakhti Main apnay say nikal kar bahut aagay aa chukka hun... aur wapis jannay ka swaal bilkul nahi hai .. " Maan cuts his phone without listening to her

But Tina had dialed his number again n again many times... Maan disconnected every time.


" Tumko smajh nahi aata... kyon kar rahi ho baar baar phone " Maan speaks in High tone more then... He usually has

" Maan plz phone mat kattna..ek baar mere baat sun lo '" She was begging

" Theek hai bollo kya bolna hai " to get rid of her phone calls ...Maan agrees ...n then listens to her

" I know ..k tum Sam ko hadd se bhi jayada nafrat kartay ho...k uska naam sunnna bhi gawara nahi "She says same words ...which Maan has in his mind

" Agar patta hai phir bhi " Maan contacts his forhead while saying this

"Haan Maan phir bhi kyonki jo baat main tumsay karma chahti hum who sirf Sam say nahi tumse bhi judi hai ...chahay Sam Tumhari yadon say kaab ki mit gayi " She continues " Phir bhi kuch cheesain aise hai jo mitaye bhi nahi mit sakti aur issay jayada main phone per kuch nahi keh sakti ...Aur mujhe yakeen hai tum jaroor aayogay " saying this n giving her address ..She disconnects

By holding his phone he was thinking that whenever he decides to restart his life toward future ...Why destiny cheats him ...puts new hurdles in front of him.

Years ago Sam cheated him...he was living a life like robot...feelingless...jst money n success was his moto...Daddi told him K Geet k pyar nai usko jinnay ki wajah di...agar usko jinny ki wajah mil gayi thi... to kyon ...he lost his memory ..again why destiny cheated him. .?..means ...this time again destiny washed away the most beautiful phase of his life...that is Geet...till now ...He was not able to accept Her...n when they hav decided to restart their lives ...why again same thing...with him ?

Suddenly his phone buzzed n Maan came out of his thoughts .Geet was calling

"Ha Geet"Maan takes call

" Ha Geet yeh kya baat hui..kabse phone lagga rahi hoon ..har baar busy " Geet joor say chillai


" Who Geet client say baat kar raha tha ...main 30 minutes main ghar aa raha hun " Maan ensures Geet n moves out of his cabin

Before moving in the car ...He made a call to Tina on same number He was going to meet her next morning


I hope u will lik 😃

thanx for lovely comments...this encourages me to write more..plz plz keep on commenting ...n hit lik😳

Edited by Jass.KN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awasome update!!

maan is married geet now!!! what will be the geets reaction when she come to know about maans past???????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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is that Sam trying to trap him in some way?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome beginning dear pls continue...but the part about Maan-Geet-Dev and step-mum has confused me a bit. But I expect it will be explained as the story unfolds. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehek25

Awesome beginning dear pls continue...but the part about Maan-Geet-Dev and step-mum has confused me a bit. But I expect it will be explained as the story unfolds. Thanx for pm.



thax so much for reminding me ...I gonna edit part two ..coz whenever I write i always save one copy on my Laptop n from that copy I paste it on IF with corrections...so When I was writing in MS office ...I decided that k Maan ko sabh patta hai ...n Geet has told whole truth to him...n Tina was Sam's Mausi ...I changed Tina as Sam's sister...But not that part where Maan thinks about his past...I m gonna correct this...Maan ko kush nahi patta ...I did this mistake coz I finished this part late nite n pasted as such this morning ...so I forgot to do corrections ...sorry again...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaha bhi ML... but it will be interesting... nice update dear... update soon... thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!!!!
hmm wht does tina hve to say??
wonder how geet would react to his past with sam...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

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