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Posted: 13 years ago
Jaani. I am back. About the reserve. I know that reserve is still there but I commented on the part elsewhere because of my over laziness. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy 100 Pages Maitree 😊😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SmokingDreams

Jaani. I am back. About the reserve. I know that reserve is still there but I commented on the part elsewhere because of my over laziness. :)

Are you sure? Because I checked from Page 80 (from the page I posted the part ) till here..and I didn't get your comment anywhere Love...So Please check and tell me..

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMFY YOURE BACK I AM SO HAPPY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MUAH MUAH YOU MADE ME CRY YOU IDIOT I MISSED YOU SO MUCH...NOW GIMME A HUG! 🤗 I Love You <3 <3

Dun you DARE go anywhere again! <3 And Now,Go and Edit your comment. Now that you're here,i promise to update soon <3 MUAAAHH <3

And HAWWW kitni gandi hai,u didn't congratulate me 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

OMFY YOURE BACK I AM SO HAPPY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MUAH MUAH YOU MADE ME CRY YOU IDIOT I MISSED YOU SO MUCH...NOW GIMME A HUG! 🤗 I Love You <3 <3

Dun you DARE go anywhere again! <3 And Now,Go and Edit your comment. Now that you're here,i promise to update soon <3 MUAAAHH <3

And HAWWW kitni gandi hai,u didn't congratulate me 😭

OMG YOU CRAZY KAMEENI. CONGRATULATIONSSS. I LOVE YOU TOO <33 AND WHY DID YOU CRY? PAGAL LADKI. I won't go anywhere again okay. sholly. i promise :) And yesss. i have too many FFs to comment on 🤣 I'll finish commenting on MTB and Je t'aime by tomorrow 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

OMG YOU CRAZY KAMEENI. CONGRATULATIONSSS. I LOVE YOU TOO <33 AND WHY DID YOU CRY? PAGAL LADKI. I won't go anywhere again okay. sholly. i promise :) And yesss. i have too many FFs to comment on 🤣 I'll finish commenting on MTB and Je t'aime by tomorrow 🤣🤣🤣

Kameeni tera Tomorrow kab ayega?? 🤣 🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

I Know love...But I'm in a total mess now..Anyways,will update a preview <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

I realize its been long since I've updated. My real LONG update..comes on December 10,as promised. Here's a preview,for all those who missed me..Yes,Radhika and Amal,I am Talking about you!😆 The preview isn't much,and its TOO dramatic. As usual,I am NOT at all Happy with the way its coming out. I mean...I am in a mess,and I Made the Preview So Crappy -_- !! Anyways,its from the Present. And something you guys anticipated :P


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Preview to Part 15:


"What is she doing here?",his voice thundered into the room.
Padma sat up startled in her seat at the anger his voice held. His eyes were flaming,and stared right into his daughter. Riddhima was unfrazzled. Her deep bitterness for him,the poison that she had held for seven years came back to her,and she closed her eyes before gathering herself up again. Standing up,confident,tall and strong,she faced him..Like she hadn't ever wished to.

Her eyes bore staright into his as she said,"I came here to meet my mother,Mr.Gupta. I hope I don't need Anyone's Permission for that.And you Don't have to worry.I won't be coming here anymore."
His jaw hardened. Shashank Gupta knew this part of his daughter,afterall..he had faced it from the past seven years. But today it was a little more power-packed,he thought. He always wondered,had his One desicion made him lose her forever?He never knew his desicions to be wrong. And nomatter what,he wouldn't change them.

"This is MY House.",he replied.
"Well,ofcourse. Unfortunately,my mother lives here too. I just came to see her.",she replied calmly.
"Is this the way you talk to your father?",he asked,his anger visible in his tone.
Riddhima almost laughed,"Father?Are you joking? I Don't even have a father!"
"Riddhi-",Padma tried to say something,but Riddhima turned to her and said,"Please Ma,let me say it. Finish it for once and all. I'm tired,okay? Tired of having lived this way for seven years.Tired of having a name..thats not even mine!"
"See,Padma?",he told her,"This..This is why I sent her to Delhi!All these years,she didn't say anything at all..And now when she's back.."
"Yes,Mr.Gupta,definitely. I know you'd like me better to stay back in Delhi.Ofcourse,why wouldn't you? I was Dying out there..Suffocated with all the fake smiles I was giving people,and you'd like you're daughter to do all that! Thats why,Thats why Mr.Gupta..I say,like I've told you before,I was Never Riddhima Gupta and I shall not be. I was always Riddhima Desai.Always!You have no right on me..Not even the right to call me your daughter!"
"I was Right.",he said,clenching his teeth,"I was right. That boy was always wrong for you. How will a Orphan know the worth of manners,Parents.."
"You have no right to speak about him.And his name is Armaan.Armaan Mallik."

"I know his name,and how he is. I can't believe you've still held on to that. He wasn't worth you."
"Oh Thank you,Mr.Gupta.",she replied,tears threatening to spill,and her mind hardening,"But I know what to do in my life,and what not.Who deserves me,who is worth me..its up to me to decide.You do NOT need to interfere."
"Interfere!I am..an..Interference?!",his voice thundered,more like a stunned shock,"You know,you are crossing your limits."
"No,Dad..It was you who crossed All his limits!",she said,her voice breaking,"It was YOU who broke me seven years back! It was you..who sent me to Delhi to supposedly LIVE,and it was YOU..Who Killed Armaan!"

Her last words sent a shiver of horror and disbelief down him.He watched,as his heart constricted on seeing tears down her eyes. His words had been a blow to him,and when he realized what he was losing,he saw her out of his gate,wiping her tears with a free hand,and banging the door after her with the other. Shashank Gupta sank to his seat. He had lost his daughter,maybe forever this time.


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See,I told you,I TOLD you it was crap. Now you want to Literally throw away your computer or bang your head against the wall saying and cursing yourself,Why the hell did you read it :( Anyways,I want Comments. 😆 Criticism is always welcome.

PLUS,There is a hint of mystery here too..About Riddhima 'Desai'..Confused? Well,I'll clear it up soon,Promishe! The next part's gonna be REAL important !! :D And Still wondering about Armaan?I gave a hint here in Riddhima's words :P Dun kill me 😭

OMGEE I blabbed so much.Sowweey. Comments!

Love,

Maitree :)

Edited by ..Maitree.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice preview, can't wait 4 the part.Continue soon.
Thanks 4 the pm, take care.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Preview Maitree! Once again, I reeeaally hope he isn't dead :D

Continue soon!

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - I know I'm supposed to comment, but I'm inactive and will probably be so, so small comments shall have to do, sorry :|

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