Originally posted by: -pooluvsKaSh-
First of all maitree Happy diwali dear🤗
thanx for the diwali special update it was awesome made diwali better
i told u i will go u good comment i hope i can do it 😆
How sweet of Armaan to bring Ridz flower on morning & his little things made Ridz forget her tension that was so sweet only he can do it He pestered her to sleep too this small things of he done to Ridz meant a lot 😳hayee I love That Armaan a lot u had very well written all those cute moments it was simply awesome loved the the way u wrote
Ridz thought she couldnt think about Armaan more than a friend silly girl 😆
Nishita Armaan gf hmph poor Armaan i feeling bad for him more he doesnt this relationship with her ..Armaan is truly a gentlemen he didnt want nishita to feel bad so he agreed to be her bf
He cant see nishi like that na i can understood bechara he doesnt want to lie to her but he doesnt want to break her heart too ..Armaan feels so freely while talking to Ridz wow they special bond i loved it maitree How Armaan told to ridz he is an open for her diary he is himself while he is with ridz She was also happy hearing it from him na she felt to hug him omg u could have added it too 😉this 3 months ridz is mad reading it i am also getting mad & crazy for AR
i so much love AR bonding i am in love with them more in ur ff how depend they r for each other
AR convs r amazing man it is really dam awesome very well expressed Armaan helpless situation he cant break up with her becaz she will be heart broken but he cant be see like his gf how weird na ..Armaan is a perfect bf no one can be perfect like that ..Armaan's words always have an effect on her hayeee catch me i am going to fall more for A becaz of ur writing maitree wen she said he is special i am going gagaga ...
Armaan is going to give his name to workshop Ridz knew it is a good oppurtunity for him but beca she cared for him she was scared for him can understand her situation
the acts u wrote were so natural wen i 1st read i thought wow confession that too sudden then i thought it must be a dream the lines were amazing which u wrote especially " You know I shall love you forever and there is nobody in this world who can love you more than me..I Love You..You..are..My,Life. My Heartbeat,My soul.." This one was outstanding dear
"We shall build a world of our own like we had..Full of us,memories and love. There shall be no boundaries, and we shall finally be free. We'll fall in love again...You will fall in love again..Tell me,am I allowed to make you mine?And give us a chance" this too i was in my own lalala world wat a touching lines man i love it soo soo soo much muah ..
then later i found it was just an act but their acting was original She also thought it was real
Poor ridz having feeling for Armaan is natural but being his best friend she felt to think Armaan like that a bit weird ...Ridz didnt want armaan to go na becaz she cared but he didnt want to miss that chance anyways hope that thing gets well
coming to present parts u really made me cry a lot Armaan sacrificing his love beautifully written ..Armaan talking himself with his parents that makes me love Armaan more
U have potrayed armaan emotions & feeling very well ..He was the best human being if he wanted he could have got ridz but he didnt want ridz to looser her father becaz of him
He loved Riddhima a lot his love was soo pure can anyone love this much like Armaan while Armaan was crying i couldnt stop my tears 😭 😭 😭mujhe bhi ruladiya 😭 😭
Tanya Armaan conv was good even she didnt want AR to seperate but armaan words were supper" If we are meant to be,Tannu..Destiny Will bring us together.Someday."That's like my Armaan i know AR r destiny they r meant to be together ..I am so happy after a long time he laughed my Armaan laughed i think he got Radhu's effect before that y he must be crying lol
That sogn was creating havoc inside me perfect song suites the situation & convey armaan's feeling well hayee beautiful words ...u described AR love for each other well outstanding man
When she touched him,it felt like heaven. If she was near, he was alive. hayee hayyee mein tho mar gayi 😳u know ur writing skills r mindblowing She was his heartbeat u r making me cry more yarh kitna tadpavogi armaan ko Accident armaan ko accident hua 😭 😭 😭how much he will suffer was this enough but i am u r going bring some new twist in this way Riddhima will go to Armaan na she cares & loves him a lot so i think knowing about accident she will be worried about armaan hoping u wont do more garbar😆
but how can be Armaan dead no it is not possible sid must have heard wrong i am dam sure he is not dead y left the part in a cliffhanger i cant wait to read the next part u better udpate soon & i told a lot os bak back hope it is not boring hope i havent disappointed u with my comment if i am then really sorry dear this was stunning update loved it a lot
muah love u too tc
wat again no update till 10th dec😲i dont know how i am going to control my eagerness to read but i will try ok becaz exams r more imp all the best dear i know u will do it well