Yeh Rishta Tera Yeh Rishta Mera/ MG / FF - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
nice part, where he realised what he missed in his life and wil not let the same happen with baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
nice update...
OMG maan feels geet deceived him... awww how could he????
poor geet... cant wait for the next one...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
omg maan doubting geet infedelity
no wonder he kept himself distance
me waiting how story unfold
thnx so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
how can maan doubts geet and her fidelity...i guess there is some big MU which needs to be solved...
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
i think this is all Maan's fault
he doesn't trust Geet!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
haww Maan is doubting Geet's fidelity ... aisay kaisay ... there's certainly so much more to be revealed ...
cant wait to read more
love
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
👏waiting for next part... worring for geet's condition... hope maan will support her
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Very nice cant wait next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends here is next part u ll lik I hop


Part 9(let me think which name shouts this part)


It was the first time when baby came to her house… Khuraana mension n especially her parents' room Her beautiful n innocent face was that only factor which made Maan happy from deep inside ..Otherwise he had lost all hopes ..to liv a lif with reason..He smiled looking at her

" Maan kahan kho gaye ?" when Geet said ..He came out from his thoughts

" Nahi woh kuch main ….baby k naam k barre main soch raha tha " Maan said having lil smile on his lips

" Ha main bhi yehi soch rahi thi…jab takk kuch final nahi hota why not we call her Adda ?"Maan's changed behavior gav encouragement to Geet

" Adda?" Maan repeated Geet's word

" Ha Adda..woh mainay ek movie dekhi thi usme ladki ka yahi naam tha….bahut sohni te pyari kuddi thi ... who jst lik our baby….." She became very emotional ..suddenly lil bit mischievous " Waise theek hi hai …Adda means attitude….n u hav jst attitude nothing else ...so your baby's name is rite "

" Ya u r rite my baby's name" Maan had any thought while saying this line

But Geet was in high spirits with positive change in Maan's behavior so he noticed nothing .

Maan helped her to sit on bed ….placing pillow behind her back…..n He put sleeping baby next to Geet ….She had a smile on her perfect M shaped lips …. when Maan took her lil face in his hands. …n placed two lil baby cushions…. around her ….To make her comfortable .

"Geet tumhe kush chaheay to nahi …. " when Maan said Geet nodded her head…She was looking Maan how he was playing a good father …She was happy ...lik nothing happened to her ever...n this was good for her…n whole Khuraan family…Maan's one rite step….was visible now

Days were passing …Baby's this name had been taken as final name also ..Adda Maan Singh Khuraana…..n Maan was playing all roles perfectly …as a Son, a Husband,a father…n a businessman ..but where was Maan …He had lost his identity…..completely …..half was lost due to His ML….He was jst lik a puppet in hands of almighty …..

When ever he found Geet's presence …around him…..Geet seemed rite to him….But what was the reason Geet did this to him ?…if She really loved him ….n still he was not able to accept that Geet's lov was not true …..

He had jst one motive now to give good future to his daughter Adda….He was father to Geet's child ...But not a soulmate …Geet was recovering fast …..for this Maan paid great cost…N even after three months of Adda's birth ….She was still waiting for Maan to accept her as a wife completely ….But Maan always made excuses that He need some time…on this point Geet never had any doubt …as He had lost him memory..n Geet always related his behavior to ML… Maan also had same excuse every time that he need time…So this was not a burden on Geet's mind

Adda had been turned 5 months now …She could sit for lil time n always fell on bed if no support was provided….as She was growing Maan's hopes for her also …but his hopes for himself that was dying day by day …..

That day was same as usual …for Maan but something which happened that was unusual.Maan was sitting in his cabin when somebody knoked the door….

" Come in " Maan said without noticing whos there coz there might b any staff member

" Surprise " Maan noticed familiar female voice..He was really surprised to see Meera in front of him…Maan Dev's common friend..who was in US for Monts

" Meera " Maan gave a great smile " U really gave me surprise ..where was u ..from months " Maan was not aware that jst after few days of their marriage Meera left India for US .So now She was back

" To Mr Khuraana mujhe yeh patta lagga tha k u hav lost ur memory ... really bad but atleast u can recognize me…." Meera said ..

" How can I forget my childhood friend ….."Maan said giving huge smile …

" How is Daddi….Geet n especially ur lil angle..I m really exited to met her…how she looks" She put many questions at a time

" Sabh theek hai…" Maan went in his same situation after few good moments

" Maan kya baat hai …is every thing okey 'Meera was able to notice sadness in his eyes..n his face smile

" Nahi Meera who jst normal work load " He tried to avoid

" Work load …Maan yahan tak main janti hum…kaam ka bhoj tum nay kabhi nahi liya …kuch to hai jo tum ,..batta nahi rahay….Main bachpan say janti hu tumko " Meera knew Maan was behaving differently

When Meera said this Maan had teras in his eyes lik… he had any hop that …only Meera can help him…..in this whole world

" Maan kuch to kaho" when Meera placed her hand on Maan's shoulder Maan started to cry bitterly

' Meera …nothing left…..when I started to lov her again after my memory loss….mujhe patta challa ….She was cheating me…..woh kissi aur…" Maan was not able to complete this sentence…But Meera could understand about whom He was talking no one other than Geet



Hey buddies ...hows that...Plz plz comment n hit lik ...ur response is my way


plz forgiv for any mistake I hav done

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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