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Posted: 13 years ago
me likeyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
i'm glad meera told him the truth
so now he can manofy geet
waiting waiting
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Friends here is update I had lil ideas for this part but suddenly my mind struck..so plz read..comment n lik..ur response n appreciation is my way 😊


Epi 11

Mai Teri Tu Mera

Yeh Rishta kya Tera Mera


Geet left KC….She was weeping bitterly…when she came back to KM ...Daddi Maa was there in sitting room …But She said nothing n moved toward her room.

This made Daddi too much worried..Holding lil Adda in her arms …She reached Geet's room where ..She was down on the floor….putting her head down on bed ….

Daddi Maa: Geet betay kya hua …

But got no response.Daddi …slowly placed sleeping Adda on bed..n also sat next to her .Without saying a word Geet hided her face in Daddi's arms

Geet: Daddi Maa sab khatam ho gaya ….Maan mere barre main aisa sochatay rahay aab tak …mujhe nahi patta tha….

Daddi Maa: Per betay hua kya yeh to bataeay?

N geet explained whole story to Daddi….which made Daddi much upset

Daddi Maa: Maan aisa sochtay hai ….yakeen nahi hota

Geet : Daddi Maa sach yahi hai

Before Daddi can say any thing Maan came after Geet….

Maan : Plz Geet let me explain things ….try to understand me(lik He was begging in front of Geet )

Geet: Maan na mujhe kuch sunna hai ..aur na hi kuch kehna (her eyes were still flowing )

Daddi Maa: Maan apne aisa soch bhi kaise liya

Maan : Daddi Maa main galat tha ..per aab mujhe saab patta chal gaya hai …isli main Geet say maafi mangta hun

In this garma garma…Adda woke up n started to cry

Geet took her in her arms..n She moved toward Maan

Geet : Maan maaf kar du …..Mere Maan se kabhi galti ho hi nahi sakti ….per aap to mere Maan hai he nahi….Dekhiye iski taraf… (Maan looked at Adda )…Yeh logon k liye to Adda Maan Singh Khuraana hai….per Maan Singh Khuraana k liye ek naazayez aulad…..

Maan : Geet tum pagal ho gayi ho ..Adda meri beti hai

Geet: Ha Maan apki beti..isli main eek faisla kiya hai

Daddi n Maan started to look at Geet ...What She wanna say!!!

Daddi Maa : kaisa faisla Geet betay ?

Geet : Daddi Maa aap ghab-ra-ea na ..main is baar ghar chod kar nahi jayongi...

Maan : Geet tum kaya soch rahi ho..dekho gusse main aa kar koi faisla mat karna…Hum dono ki baat nahi ...usse pehlay Adda hai humare samne

Geet : Ha Maan iske liye to rukki hun ….mujhe apne dukh k kaaran iski zindgi kharaab karne ka koi haq nahi

Daddi Maa: Geet betay aap kaya keh rahi hai humko samjh main nahi aa raha

Geet : Daddi Maa …main ghar chod kar nahi ja rahi…issi ghar main rahongi….Adda k liye ..apke liye….per Maan se mera aab koi rishta nahi…Agar main ghar chod kar gayi to sab tabaah ho jayega…Yeh choti se bacchi kuch he maheno ki hai…isko pata nahi rishtay kaya hotay hai..kuch batanye ki zaroorat nahi isko..per yeh mehsus kar sakti hai k ..kon uska apna hai…..apne Papa ko dekh kar woh apni Maa ko bhi bhool jati hai..chahey iska aur Maan ka rishta ek jhoot ki neev per tikka ho….isli Adda say uske pita ka haq main nahi cheen sakti…aur usko main chod nahi sakti….yehi rishta hai abb Mera Maan say aur Maan ka mere say….Adda…..

Daddi : Betay aap kya keh rahi hai yeh(Daddi had tears in her eyes )

Maan : Geet itni baddi sazza mat do mujhe….tumhary binna Maan nahi reh sakta

Geet: Isliye k Maan ko sach patta lag gaya hai

Maan : Nahi Geet …Maan ki soch par jo parda pada tha woh Meera ney hata diya ..main kaise janta kaya thi meri zindgi main

Geet: Maan maine kaha mujhe koi safai nahi chahea….aur na main dungi….apna faisla maine batta diya…Adda ko aap jaise chahay rakhay payar they ja na…per mere uper apka koi haq nahi

After saying this She left room holding Adda in her arms

Maan was still standing on same place lik statue …Daddi Maa ..gav a jerk to his shoulder

Daddi Maa: Maan betay aap kuch boltay nahi...

A tear drop fell on Maan's cheek's right cheek

Maan : Daddi Maa mere sath hi kyon hota hai aisa( his eyes were emotionless)

Daddi Maa: Maan galti apne ki hai..per galat aap bhi nahi…Geet ka gussa bhi zaayez hai…beta unko waqt lagay ga…per zayada der apse dur nahi reh sakti Geet.Abb bari apki hai …Apki memory jaane k baad Geet ne bahut mushkil say kho kar paya tha apko …aab baari apki hai….aur humko yakeen hai aap haar nahi maan saktay

Saying this Daddi took him in her arms.

Maan : Daddi Maa main sabh karne ko tayar hun Geet aur Adda k binna main nahi reh sakha..Aur Daddi Maa…Geet k bare main maine jo bhi socha…per Adda….uskey liye mera pyar galat nahi hai..meri jindgi hai woh ..jab har taraf kuch nahi dikh raha tha to Adda he mere jinne ki wajah bani

Daddi : Aur betay is baar bhi apki nanhi se beti fir say won wajah banegi..Geet ko apke pass laaney k liye

When Daddi said this..there was hop in Maan's eyes again to regain his lov

Maan: Ji Daddi Maa..aab kuch galat nahi karunga main …yahi meri sazza hai..yahi mera maksad

plz Friends here is update ..comment n hit lik ..if u want anything else ..tell me .I gonna pm to my buddies let me giv some time


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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh very emotional and sad part
Plz jaldi se Sab theek kardo
Superb update
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved it !! do contiue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
nice part...
this time Maan really has to make things right...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was so sad
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