FF: We are together#1- (Chap 1-22)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

Beautifully written part dear...the wedding ceremony in a such a detail was tooo good...

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: maghalakshmi
it was fantastic...very very very long one...it was a good treat for us...thank you so much...enjoyed it...i didnt see the time when i started to read this ff... but i am sure it would have taken atleast half an hour for me to finish...loved it...very very eagerly waiting for the post marriage one...🤗😊

Thanks alot love,🤗

Ohk, well let me tell you the truth, that post aint coming until Brits (the_rain) Doesnt finish catching up with all the parts.😳 Sorry.😳

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: Kinha_Luvyou
Beautifully written part dear...the wedding ceremony in a such a detail was tooo good...

Thanks alot love.🤗 It took me 5 hours+ to write this entire thing down, so I am might glad it turned out to be good.😃

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: the_rain

Batool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

See I'm here...🤪

Okay, I'm still catching up, there are so much to read and so many chapters that my head is already spinning...and I'll go mad if I don't stop reading now...😆

I love how you explained everything happening with the help of flashbacks, but I'd be honest with you, the green color you used made my eyes water; maybe a different shade of green next time? 😛

Arnav and Khushi are cute, but I love Arnav more (no surprise there..😉); love the way he handles everything and his proposals were rocking...

Okay, I've got another 8/10 parts to read more, I'd be back to read them soon..

In the meantime, you post the next part, don't stop posting, are you planning to get me killed by all the people who read this FF?

Love you...🤗

Haha.😆 Brit's finally your comment. Whew!😆

I dont blame you for that.😆 I went on to reading this entire Ff myself from the beggining so I just know exactly what I wrote before and what I must write now.😉 Trust me by the time I finished I was so worned out that I forgot eating my dinner too, and went to sleep without it.😆😲

Thankyew for that flashback thing, glad you liked it.🤗 I know that green colour sucks, and hits directly in the eye. But seriously, I'll tell you this I used that colour because I am too lazy to use another one.😆 This ones on that core line of colours in the 'IF' column so I picked that up simple as that.😆 I really forget and confuse myself in the shades when I pick one from the middle bar. But anyways, next time I'll try keeping my memory fit, and use another colour.😉

Haha.😆 Obviously no doubt on that.☺️ Thats proporsals were one big headache to write, I coudnt really undertsand how someone like ASR would owe up to his feelings on his own accord.😳

Brit's take your time to read, i'll be waiting.😉 Nopsie dear, I want you to catch up first, then only the next part will come, I wont move forward without you.😉 And my readers, they are reallly patient, they wont bang your head so dont worry.😆

P.S: I want a super long comment when you finish. (Remember!)

I Love you more.🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

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Originally posted by: Tishuu
Oh wow batool...thos season was awespke
i hv no words to explain hw beautifully u hv captured each n every emotion n feeling.
i+ sooo lucky to read this all in one go. i. eagarly await for the post marriage.
Ok so since im honest n wish u the best...since u asked for criticism...its here
Firstly ur index is slightly off...part 2 is on page 4 n nt page 5
other than tht i rli rli rli rli loved this...no criticisms because it was faultless
I just hope arnav n khusi stick thru everything. Even when shyam's truth cums out or the. truth of arnav n khushi's past being connected cums forth...i want them like ur title to "stick together" without any doubts or figjts...tht will show buaji n garima tht arnav really is a genuinely nice person. pleaseee
love it
take care
PM me whrn u start the next season
Merry Christmas xx
P.S excuse ne mitakes in my comment...doing so from my fone hehe on. the sly

New reader? Yay!

Thanks alot for the appreciation girl.🤗

Omg!😲 You read this in one row?😲 it must have taken you an approx of 8 hours to be done finishing it at an whole length.😲 I read it too yesterday, the entire thing in one go, and gosh I was so tired after I was done with it.🥱

Oh, I am sorry about that.😳 Must be a typing error by me. Thanks for informing, though.⭐️

Aww.😳 That's so sweet of you love.🤗

Well. you will know if they stick together or not, but thats is for sure, at the end of the day they will be together, I have no plans of seperating them for life at all.😊

Yeah, I want them to know that ARNAV is the bext Khushi could get.😊

Merry Christmas to you too!🥳

Don't worry about that, I read my updates and I know they were no better when spelling and grammer is concerned, so no need to say sorry.😆

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: Mysticnavya
I have seriously have no words for it !!!! It is the most perfect update !!!!! The way u hv described everything is just mind-blowing !!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Thnx so much for the pm !!!!! Update soon !!!! Can't wait to read if Arnav finds out the truth and if he believes payal or not !!!!!!! 👏

Thankyou so much.🤗 Omg! That's a huge compliment dear, thanks.🤗 Well, that is soon to come, that is if Payal does divulge the truth to him or not.😉

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: arhi-fan
It was a super long awesome update. Just loved every bit of it. Just so beautifully described. Shyam will not be able to destroy her. Really excited abt next season.

Thankyou so much.🤗

Oh I hope he doesnt destroy her.🤢

Keep the excitment going!😃

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: littlemoi

wht an update Batool!! it was beyond amazing!! i loved it!! the way you described each part was just perfect!! i felt like i was there attending the wedding!! thank you so much for the pm!! plzz update the next part real soon!! cant wait to read abt the arhi suhaag raat!!lol

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

Oh well I am speechless, something beyond amazing, oh that comment is worth reading again and again.😳

Anyways, Thanks alot love.🤗

Oh well, lets see the next aprt wont be coming until by really good friend brit's (the_rain) is done catching up with the entire FF. Sorry.😳 But I promise as soon as she is done, the very next day you will get the update.😉

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: alice54
Great update!!!!

Loved the wedding...yes it was way too long...i felt sleepy in between thank god for those songs inbetween which kept me awake and i read them in a go...and since i havent attended weddings much...your description was really beautiful...

waiting for their post marriage...want Arnav to know the truth about that creep very soon...

continue soon...

Thankyou so much.🤗

Haha.😆 I can undertsand your situation. Reading about marriage that too in such details, sometimes makes you groan and go to sleep.😆 I was sleeping too when I read this part to edit it, I was seriously like, Omg where is this ending?😲

Arnav will know the truth, pretty pretty soon.😉