FF: We are together#1- (Chap 1-22)

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Heya Fellas,
This is my first attempt at a FF, and being so much inspired with ArHi I just coudnt help but write it down. Hope you people like it. 😊
Khushi Kumari Gupta stood still her eye's in wonder of what stood in front of her. Every bit of her eye's were trying to train themselves to examine the brilliant exterior of the gigantic building that had shook her spellbounded. It indeed was on of the bestest piece of architecture she had seen after the famous Taj Mahal, and ofcourse Shantivan's twin brother Sheesh Mahal.
Next to her stood her sister Payal, who too was stupidfied by the excellent exterior fo the building.
Kh: Jiji! could you please make it quick? I am more than ever tempted to go inside.
Pa: Yeah ohk. You dont really need to be in such a hurry Khushi.Just dont forget this is Shantivan- the Raizada's house and our future sasural. Please for god sake mind your ways for once and try keeping yourself out of trouble.
But Khushi hadnt waited for Payal to finsh. She had already began pacing up towards the entrance of the door slightly limping on her left leg, giving a blunt assurance to Payal that everything would be alright.
Urgh! This danmed leg hurts, Khushi thought to herself. Thanx to Buaji her towering door had got my leg entirely swollen.
As they entered the Raizada mansion they could see from a far distance taht some anxious faces were waiting to welcome them. It was most pleasing to see Anjali Di and Nani standing with pooje thali's all ready to have them inside.
Khushi stared at the good looking, innocent, delgithful face of Arnav's sister. In her midn she was secretly thinking about Arnav. Yes, she was comparing the two blood siblings. The two were so unlike each other. Sure, she had seen the goodness in him and the intenstiy he loved her with but really it was difficult to deny that his personality was still truly opposed to that of his sisters.
Anj: ( done with her mini welcoming ceremony, waved a hand in fron of Khushi's face to get her atttention ) Khushi? Where are you lost? (giggling) Already thinking about Chhote?
Khushi smiled in return but tend to keep silent.
Anj: (urging them in) Khushi, Payal, come on in. Nani is going to give me a hard time if she knows I have been keeping you two at the gates for so long. (noticing Khushi limping on her left leg). What happened to your leg Khushi?
Kh: ( in a embaraased tone) Erm..nothing Di. I banged it in the door.
Anj: (giggling) Just like you to do that.
With a polite smile both the girls entered inside. As they walked in thier eyes coudnt really budge with the scenery that awaited them. Raizada house was so much better from inside than it looked from outside.Even better even finer. The hallway looked royal,indeed with two two stairways running from two ends, opening cooridors that led to the bedroom of the family members. The vinyl flooring beneath their feet shone brilliant as if a mirror giving a perfect reflection when they looked at it. It was all too splendid to take in all at once. The splendour of the decor was ceratinly worth marvelling.
Khushi looked at all of it in utter delight, happy to think that soon she was going to be a part of all this grandeour with the one man she loved the most after her father. She was indeed feeling the happiest person on this planet.
Switiching back to reality, she took her seat at the caramel brown couch, next to Payal who was already seated on the couch, a nervous look on her face. Having that done, Anjali strated a friendly chat with the two of them.
Anj: So Khushi-Payal how did you like out house?
Kh: (almost jumping with excitement) Splendid Di! You know what I have never seen a house as big..
Payal pinched her from the side as if too quiten her down and make her realize the place they were sitting in.
Kh: (confused) What the..Jiji..
Payal intterupted her passing her an annoyig glance.
Pa:(looking ar Anjali) She means we loved you house.
Anjali almost dieing to laugh her heart out at the sisters cute nok-jhok, but out of politness refrained to do that,
Anj: (smiling) I am glad you people liked it. (turning to Jay Prakash) Jay Prakash, could you please have some beverages served for the ladies?
Jay: Yes Mam.
He walked away.
Pa: Di, dont do it, we are totally fine.
Khushi felt like she could kick Jiji right at the moment. She was dieinf of thirst and this was certainly no time to be protesting against Anjali Di's wishes.
Anj: (smiling) No need to be formal Payal. This is your house now. (looking at Khushi) just look at Khushi's face, it seems she's dieing of thirst.
Khushi kept her face down with embarassement. Payal seemes annoyed but for now she had to forget that. It wasnt really important.
Anj: Ladies, make yourself home, I'll be right back.
With that, Anjali stood up stumbling in her steps and made her way towards the kitchen.
Pa: Khushi I told you to mind your ways!
Kh: But Jiji...if Di's such a good face reader..is it my fault?
Pa: Khushi, you really are just the way you want to be. I dont know what to do with you.
Khushi was just about to open her mouth in protest when her shrap eyes caught two masculine figures entering through the gates.
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Batool😳
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Chapter 1: Grandeur

Chapter 2: Eternal Bliss

Chapter 3: For What Is Mine, Is Yours

Chapter 4: The Comfort We Share

Chapter 5: Love Is Madness

Chapter 6: The Yellow Morning

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome start dear plz update next parts too nd pm me when u update
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Great Start!!! Do pm me when you do the next update :)
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I love the start to your FF Batool!!
You've described Shantivan really well...its seems like nothing short of a palace fit for royalty!!
Khushi's character is brilliant...so full of energy.
Looking forward to the entry of the two masculine figures...😉
Do PM when you update dear!!!
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really a good start .
waiting for arnav .
continue 😊
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Hey great start please continue... Pm me when you do xX
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wow wonderful start 👏
Please continue soon and if you have a PM list then please add me 😊
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nice start dear...
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hey its reaaly goood.plz add me yo pm.
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i am like the beginning of this interesting story. :D

i wonder who the two muscular men are ;) hmmm

Please PM me for the next part yaar!

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