FF: We are together#1- (Chap 1-22) - Page 66

lovely update batool..

simply superb ...

but wot about shyam now...

that leech ... i sooo haet him ..

btw gr8888888 update continue soon :)

and plzzz add me to ur pm list tooo ..

Originally posted by: Water.

Read ur FF in one go.

Update soon and add me to ur PM

Originally posted by: the_rain

I caught up! I caught up! I caught up!

Omg! Finally, Brit's it took you days to catch up.😆 I have been waiitng for your comment since I think for an eternity and I finally got it, Yay! Finally I can update now, whew.😆😉

*does a crazy dance , laughs like silly 🤪*

*going crazier for getting Brit's comment*.🤪

I'm sorry it took so so so long but you know I can't read much from the screen at a go, it hurts my eyes. I caught up by reading in buses, from my cell on my way to Uni-home, home-Uni. I'd have loved to comment on each part but I can't log in from my phone, I have to read without signing in...

Aw, Brit's I caused you sooo much trouble didnt I?😭 I suck.🤢 You had to read it mad, so that I woudnt get mad at you, I am so sorry, I am no better than our Laad Governor.🤣 * Batool bangs her head to the wall for causing Brit's so much trouble"😡

It doesnt really matter if you didnt comment, you gave me this lamba comment I wanted, what more would I want?😳

Okie, so I'm catching up from the part where Arnav gave it to Garima, loved that portion...only Arnav could do something like this. Hurt Khushi even a tiny bit and boom, he's there to save her...

Aya Re Dekhun Khushi ka Body Guard.🤣

Jokes apart, I love Arnav's chracter to the core, real or in my FF or in your FF (which is the best one😉) He's always there for her, without wanting anything for her to give him back except for the love and care he always yearned for.

Oh, I was holding my breath when Arnav found the photo torn...was he mad or what! Khushi chose the exact time to call...though am glad she called and he shouted...that's why we got to see the amazing ArHi scenes...him coming to see her...I like the attire of Khushi in this scene...salwar & shirt, she must've looked good...

I had to rack my brain for good, to move the story forward, all ArHi and no story would have made this FF a super duper flop. That photo torn scene was significant in a multiple number of ways, that is why I had it there, because these pictures that we capture are memories that are closed to our heart, and if ANY, be it anybody meddles with them, we get highly furious.

I personally love that ArHi scene alot, and really wanna see one on screen, SaRun would look so dreamy,😍

They both lost track of time...heheheh...

I was cheering for Arnav when he found that torn piece of pic with Jeejaji, under his pillow...I was like 'Go Arnav, smart boy figure it out!'

Haha.😆 I wanted to give Arnav the James Bond style of figuring things out, but then I realized that I woudnt be able to write much, If I keep drooling over his integllgence, so I let that idea drop low.😳

But I was so mad when Buaji thought why doesn't Arnav die, can I hit her once? Just once? With rolling pin?

Hit her an infinite number of times, I wouldnt really mind. I have dark spot in my heart for her chracter by the way.🤢

The moment Arnav sent an MMS I knew Khushi is not going to get it, someone else is going to open it and exactly that happened..😔, Payal opened it and it was stupid of her to hide it from Khushi. Didn't she think what would happen later? Arnav would be even more mad if he thinks that Khushi intentionally hid it from him. And Arnav also decided to keep her away from it. I hate it when people decide like this. I get that he's confused but still, hiding and lack of communication always makes things bitter...but you created the drama very well using this...

Oh well, that I knew many would expect. I know its stupid, but its the present that I have tried to focus on that every individual chracter does not want to spoil. We lack communication because we as humans do not want to spoil our present and make the best out of it. Delay the worst for the later, and that is where we all are wrong. Nobody thinks of the after effects nobody thinks that 'sooner the better' was a saying that ever existed. It was only smart of Arnav as I think, to keep it away from her at a time of such immense joy. He didnt want to spoil it for her, neither did Payal so they left it for after wards.

I like the fact that Payal decided to share it with Shashi though, loved the father-daughter bonding...

Yeah, I specially wanted to write that, because daughters are more close to their dad then their mom. Like me, I dont collaborate or even talk much to my dad because I fera him, we dont share that kind of friendly bonding, and as a person I have always yearned for that bonding, so that I decided to show it through my chracters.

You made me so happy with the way Arnav was thinking that this is his last day sleeping alone...

Thankyou.🤗 Well. lets see which man doesnt think like that, the bight before the day he gets married willingly?😉

Ah, Arnav is Arnav...I love him for that...loved the banters between him and Anjali regarding the Kurta...first when she made him agree to wear one and then when he was hyping about who this is suffocating him, I can so imagine Arnav doing this...

Only Arnav can create a havok out of tiny tiny things in life. he manages to never let the big things in life trouble him, but its the small things that leave him to nowhere.

And the scenes of Payal-Khushi leaving their house was so emotional...

Those scene are my personal favorites, after ArHi scenes in this FF.😊

Arnav on a horse...poor poor poor him...

I was rofling too when I wrote that. I just could see him on the horse, making the most horrible expressions on earth.

OMG! OMG! OMG!

* Let me breath for a few moments*

The last part was beyond amazing Batool, your best so far...it's one of the most beautifully written piece of marriage happening, everything was described perfectly and I felt like being in the wedding myself. Thanks for making me experience ArHi wedding...🤗

Omg! Thankyou so much Brit's for that.🤗 You made my dad with that.

*wiping tears, goes all emotional*❤️

Okay, the end of Pre-Marriage...it was brilliant, the total of it. I've got a feeling that the post-marriage is going to be even more wonderful. And Shyam truth is also going to be out post marriage, right?

Thanks a tonne.🤗 I hope your feeling is right.😉 Well, post-marriage is more action pact, and its got everything that my mind can think about ArHi.😆 Ofcourse, its going to be out. Kitne din dabba kar rakhun gey main aus ki secret.😆 Not to forget the connection of their past.😉

I can't wait to read more now and since I commented, you should update fast...I hope you've got an array of updates ready...😎

Haha.😆 Well, to tell you the truth, I havent really written anything, but I soon will, no doubt on that. I have been stuck in a lot of things these days, with my report out, and this conference on m y head, I am going all nutts.😳 This weekend I wanted to update, but since I have to attend this very important three day conference, so probably I'll update on monday latest, and if possible than tomorrow (Thursday).

PS. I hope this comment is lamba enough for you..😃

This was more than the defination of lamba for me. it was super duper long, as I wanted.

Thankyou so much for this Brit's.🤗 I love you loads.❤️

Originally posted by: lara3110

Loved your awesome FF and understand you want to stop now. I do hope not. You write so well, it would be a shame.

Please continue.

Happy New Year.

Originally posted by: asha...

Hey Nav Bat

I haven't had a chance to comment in a long time...really sorry 😳

Loved all the parts...wonderfully written...Look forward to reading more 😛