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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

maan's dream sequence was perfect ... brilliant ...

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Awesome update.
Plzzz add me in ur pm list.

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Jaz🤗

specially for the detailing in the dream!

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

loved the update...
waiting for the next part...

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shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

very emotional... finally the truth is out.. now waiting for Maan's reactions..

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Bbeautiful prt,maan gettng glimpse of his past bt still nt able to remeber it
poor geet,feelng so sad 4 her
grt prt 👏

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Hi Jaz..thanks 4 d apm 4 d ateaser n past 2! soory for late likes n comments.Saw da teaser n read da update nw as no IF @ wrk so can only read updates @ home! 😭 Only coem on IF thrice or fout tyms a week! So please bear wid me! Nyways thanks 4 da long deatiled emotional, sad n painful update! well written, appreciate ur tym, effort n hard wrk! Maan dreams n inner feelings were superbly portrayed ! Maan cannot get away from da dreams! feeling for geet! Maan still does nt remember and asks Dadi! Maan shocked ! geet pregnant wid his child! Update soon!

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LD-Radha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

- AWWW the shoes! Thats always the thing that melts me. Everytime I'm in a store and see baby shoes...awww...just imagining their tiny little feet and fingers...too cute!

- PIANO AND FLUTE!!!!!! My two instruments! I dont know if you knew that or not but MWAH to you for using it anyway. That just made my day! It just reminded me of Shes the one though. :P

- This thunder/lightning/memory/<NAHIN!> scene is amazing. What did they call it back in english class? Pathetic falocy or something? I dont know if thats supposed to be a good thing or bad thing but it fits together really well...the weather matching the emotions.

- If I was Maan...I'd be seriously scared. This whole Geet appearing/disappearing and dialogues that he is reminded of...I get this really creepy feeling. I dont know if it was meant to be that way. Not that its bad or anything.

- CLEARLY I didn't see the "Maan's dream" part even when it was in bold...sigh...thats sad.

- Ahh the famous "mera baby vapas la do" dialogue. MAN it feels like forever...FOREVER ago that happened in the show. It seems so distant now...the first half of GHSP I mean. Such a distant memory that it feels like it never happened.

- Hehe the famous punching bag too! Nice incorporations Jaz!

- Great...Mr. Saxobeat is on tv again...MAN. I JUST got the song out of my head. Sorry, totally unrelated.

- That was long! I'm so proud of you. I don't know any other FF writers that could even come close to the length of updates you have. That is a SKILL.

So now I know why the dream was so perfect...you spent so long on it! Your work payed off though...it was everything you wanted it to be.