Oh .. wow .. I don't know where to start .. or how to start .. but .. this was bloody.amazing.
A part of me seriously .. like SERIOUSLY wants this to happen in the show before he gets his memory back. That he receives flashbacks that are very confusing and that make his heart race. But Jaz .. you picked the very flashback that I want them to use! No kidding.. the way I imagined it.. I wanted the Mein Pregnant Hoon flashback to come first more than anything! So I was pretty excited to see that it went the way I'd always imagined it to be.
But before I get on with the comment .. would just like to say .. you made me cry and wail and throw a cryfest darnit 😭 That was freaking emotional .. what a rollercoaster ride for both us AND Maan .. oh boy
First off .. the entire update .. just gave me serious nostalgia since it all connected back to the show .. and to see that it worked so well for you story .. to see that you had all those perfect moments ready to use for each section of this update.. it was brilliance. I mean when we initially watch these episodes we don't realize just how amazing they are in their execution .. but when you have someone describe it in detail in their writing you get to feel those emotions ten times more .. and that's what you writing did to me today!
I loved that you referred to the show in this matter because it helped us visualize everything better.. and helped us relate so much more to it on an emotional level too because we got all those feelings back that we had when we watched the episodes the first time around.
I like that Maan took the initiative of going towards the Baby Room himself..that he didn't go to Geet .. because it'd probably shatter her if he did .. nor did he ask for anyone's help in this matter.. especially Daadima.. but that he went himself.. he needed to go there himself to feel all the emotions himself.. I knew he'd have a sense of deja vu because he's seen it all .. been there .. so those voices in his head were bound to happen .. it must feel so surreal .. the way you think you're imagining or dreaming things but it's just that your heart remembers everything .. but your mind is not ready to accept it 😔 .. it must be so hard .. one can only imagine but never feel unless they're going through the same situation .. and again the fact that you've put it as Maan's POV .. just makes the experience that much better .. you allow us to feel his pain.. his confusion .. his condition .. through his eyes, and no matter how much you try and say .. this is all true, you've seen this all before.. you know it's hopeless unless the person actually ends up remembering it all ..hayee the Baby Room 😭 *memories* .. I remember that scene so clearly now.. it was just so adorable the way he sets up the room for her without telling her and surprises her.. and the way he punches the punching bag .. and talks about all the different things.. see Jaz what you did .. making me become an emotional fool 😡
But again I feel pretty sorry for Maan because he's just taking it all in as he sees it.. not realizing that it's affecting him big time because he's been through it all .. just that he doesn't remember any of it .. and the memories are probably at war inside his brain .. wanting to come out but being restricted because he himself is not ready to accept that truth .. very confusing time for him ..
Glad he keeps the sonogram .. by that time I thought he'd have put 2 and 2 together.. but Munda needed a little bigger jhatka I guess .. lol ..
This dream .. you worked hard on this? Hell yea. I can tell how much work you put into this .. and I bow down to you Jaz because it was worth it! The entire dream sent chills down my spine. I was reading this in the library at my uni .. but I was so engrossed into it.. I was having to quietly react to everything.. pretty sure I got a few glares 😆 well whatever.. I'm reading a masterpiece 😛
But wow .. the entire dream .. so intricate.. so logical and sequenced .. I absolutely loved it. 😳 Not only because it sent so many flashes to us but also because it was such a vivid and almost eerie dream .. if someone with ML would have this.. they'd surely have the shock of their life .. just like Maan did ..
So we had the Mein Pregnant Hoon flashback .. hayee Pee Loon 😭 that's my ultimate ultimate ultimate favourite song sequence between Maaneet (non-dance) and my opinion on that shall never change. Pee Loon is epic and will stay epic I tell ya. ❤️ .. What I liked about the dreams was that the way you started it off .. the way you described it.. it was as if you were unsolving a gigantic puzzle piece.. one by one .. unfolding each detail of each sequence of the dream ..so it was like when you knew there was going to be another little sequence .. you couldn't wait to see which flashback he would receive next..which dark tunnel would he go through next.. what milestone in their life would he remember next... the experience of reading it was mindblowing.. 👏
I like that you added not just serious moments but some lighthearted moments within it as well .. such as one of my favourite scenes.. the sikka uchalna scene where they decide between boy or girl and she describes how she wants her baby to be like 😳
But yes as I said I loved every bit of detailing you gave it.. especially with the hard-hitting dialogues that were said.. and love how the mouths weren't moving but he'd get a voiceover .. I could totally SEE it rather than just read it.. and when that happens you know you've accomplished something through your writing because it literally felt like I was having the dream ..
Mein Pregnant Hoon, Geet falling to the ground, Rain sequence, Conference Room, Hospital Scene, All the baby moments pre-marriage, SANGEET sequence 😳, Yoga scene, and the dreaded phone call about Geet's staircase accident 😭 .. oh gosh I cried so hard that day .. and the way you described the phone call itself made me cry .. ahh .. that was painful ..
Basically I loved the dream .. I loved the scenes you chose to incorporate in the dream .. and I love how you made it like a big, dark, puzzling maze for Maan .. opening door after door.. but at the end.. the very crucial moment when they lose the Baby .. its all pitch black and he has nowhere to go .. because he wasn't there to witness the most heartbreaking moment of their lives 😭 Gosh Jaz rula dia aaj .. sacchi .. 🥺
So he gets up with a start .. I am pretty sure he was shocked and choked up with emotions ..hence it was time for some serious tai chi .. I loved how you explained that too .. because that's exactly how it happens.. he starts off so deadly and slow .. concentrating on each move .. so excruciatingly slow and threatening .. and as soon as he starts to think too much about why he's doing tai chi ..and starts to have flashbacks of what's making him restless he becomes dangerously fast.. and goes faster .. and faster and starts to become more violent .. *remembers the woodchi after Mein Pregnant Hoon* *chills* ... pretty intense ⭐️ .. I thought even now ..after that incredibly vivid dream .. he'd figure out that it was his Baby .. I mean the most important line .. "Mera Baby Wapas Laado Maan" .. and he still didn't figure it out .. is it because she said "mera" Baby and not "humara" .. I guess that's what threw him for a loop .. first off he wasn't ready to accept that the child had anything to do with him .. then he has a mirage of vivid dream sequences ..too vivid to just be a mere dream .. and then those gut-wrenching dialogues.. no wonder he severely damaged his knuckles in the process.. ouch .. self-flaggelation is not the way to go Mr. Maan Singh Khurana! lol 😭
As sort of an after-thought .. I felt as if Maan was the paraya one in this entire dream .. the way the mouths weren't moving added to that .. because although it was he himself in the dream .. he wasn't able to connect with himself in the dreams.. nor was he able to recall anything .. so that's how I felt it was.. I liked that .. he was part of this gigantic, confusing, puzzling maze and door after door the puzzle kept growing for him .. so I could feel for him .. I guess he realized after this jolt that he needs to do something about it ..
But of course you had to send him to take a shower before that..tauba tauba .. in between such a sad update I was blushing like an idiot .. well you can't exactly blame me! I mean MSK in the shower .. and then only in a towel ..hud hoti hai Jaz! 😆
Ok the part where Daadima and Nandini are talking about Geet.. I mean the girl has been through enough with her miscarriage and then having to deal with Maan's ML .. then people come along saying things about the Baby that they should think twice about but say without a second thought because they don't know what they're saying ..just digging at old wounds.. of course she'd feel all dejected and depressed..and to top that off Mr. Maan Singh Khurana's aala adoption idea .. jaley pe namak 😭 like really .. he needs to talk to her soon! The girl is just lifeless in her room now .. man 🥺
I like that he went to Daadima .. he can't be hidden from the truth any longer..and out comes the truth .. oh dear .. I am scared to know how he takes this .. right now it's pure shock to him .. although I thought the dreams would help his reaction but I guess they didn't..
How is he going to take this .. is he going to reject the idea that he could ever have made the decision of wanting a child .. wait if we're going by the story .. then the child wasn't biologically Maan's .. are you keeping it that way? ... because Maan denies that he could ever impregnate a girl ..let alone Geet who happens to get at his last nerve .. so I was just wondering if we're staying exactly like the show here .. but likewise if he keeps denying it and denies it in front of Geet..or blasts her .. or takes the wrong decisions and says horrible things then idk how I'll feel ..
But I'm so looking forward to it!
Jaz, as usual this was AMAZING. I have no words for this particular update.. I mean it was overwhelming and a large part of that is to do with how you incorporated the show within the update and you described everything so vividly.. so delicately.. it was all intricate and detailed.. and nostalgic to say the least .. but it was amazing 😳
Loved it and LOVE YOU ! 🤗 Abh khush hoja that I finally updated 😆 Been at me since the weekend! 😆
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