New OS ' A Good-bye Kiss vs. an Eternal Kiss'

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awesome for u'r first oneshot. really well done. luvd the title and how u made use of it.

thanx for an adorable read.

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Hey Zee,
How are you dear...?

Sorry sweety, i had read it earlier but couldnt like or comment, coz my net got disconnected n the next day i forgot...sowwiee...

Ahan...Bodyguard se inspired...i have not seen Bodyguard yet but i know the story...imagine its my favourite Salman's movie n still i have not gone to watch the movie...stupid, idiot Vidushi...

Coming to the OS...
Wonderful dear...just like a perfect hindi film...superb yaar...
Geet sacrificing her love n ready to marry that jerk Dev only to protect Maan...true love...
But our Sher Singh Khurana never loses hope...he will get back his Gith...n he got her...
In the beginning, i was scared that she'll get married to Dev...but no...Maan ne bacha liya...Like most hindi movies it had a happy ending n i love happy endings...

Amazing dear...

Thanks for the pm.

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Excellent and amazing OS...really loved it...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wwoww... it was simply awesome ... 👏

loved every bit of this .. the dance especially and the kiss ☺️

do write more OSs like this ... u're so good at it ...

love

Sana

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Z ur 1st OS is rocking marn

it was sooo fab

u so have 2 write more OS

love it 2 bits

thanks 4 da PM

Muahhh

Xxx

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

OMG Zainab what a wonderful OS. I was enthralled from the first word to the last word. The way u described their emotions and motions during the performance was awesome. I literally had tears in my eyes imagining it. as it is I too have just seen Bodyguard and I love this song. its on my mind day in and day out. when I on the music on my phone the first song I put is this one.

Simply superb and too a first attempt!...Unbelievable...Pleas do some more...and whenever u write anything else just PM me. I came upon this just by chance today. But was lucky to find it. Actually the movie Bodyguard thing attracted me to it in the first place. Am gong to read it all over again in a little while...

Thanx a lot for writing such a wonderful piece for the forum...