New OS ' A Good-bye Kiss vs. an Eternal Kiss'

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Amazing os
One of the best I've ever read
Loved every bit of it
Please do write more!
Iqz xx

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preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved the os...

i was worried that it wud b sad one but u made it a happy one...

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jasraj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

really nice one. good job👏👏

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fiona nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Hey Zee Thanks 4 PM

Stupendous! Sensational OS

I Loved it Zee.

Keep it up dear.😃🤗

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Bulbul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Beautifully written 👏 I did not like bodyguard at all but your ff inspired from it is really very nice..the dialogue of Maan asking for an eternal kiss was the best part of the OS for me.well done 👍🏼

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Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Your First OS... trust me it was awesome... totally filled with beautiful emotions...

Loved it... and really the song for the situation was just too good...

Thanks for the PM... or else i would have really missed it...

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hemamurali65

@hemamurali65

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

ur first OS simply out of world ..superb line of story ..never took my eyes off ..wow its jus amazing dear ..keep

posting os like this friend ..

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Awesome OS zee
Loved it
The song sequence was amazing...ahhh love that song soo much
Yayy they reunited finally wiv an eternal kiss
Thx 4 the PM

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Mounchy

@Mounchy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

omg that was amazingly written!! 👏

i have not seen bodyguard yet but your OS was damn good Zee👍🏼.. i simply loved it... too too goood... keep up and keep writing such stuff.😉... the kiss was passionate.☺️... and the song teri meri you made me fall in love with this song... i dint like it before but now i love it!! 😉

keep up👍🏼...