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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part~3


geet comes and sits back...smiles at dev...

dev was silent...his face was not glowing at it was...it seems a bit awkwrd for geet...

'kya hua dev?aap itne chup kiyu ho gye?kya bat hai?she asked...


'geet...maan ne tume call kia tha..sory but you were not here...soi picked it up...'he said...


the smile in her face vanished instantly...what if he had said something to dev...about their relatn...she tried to bring a fake hapines on her face...'acha?...kya kaha unhone?...kiyu phone kia tha/...uff..ye maan bhi na...apna koi bhi kaam thik se nahi kr sakte mere bina...hmesha meri zarurat padti hai unhe...'she tries hard to pretend...


'stop it geet...or kitna?...or kitna jhoot bologi sabse?...is duniya se?...muje sab kuch samaj aa gya hai...k maan nd tumhara rishta kya hai...am sorry...i knw its your prsnl matr...i should intrfare...but...'he could say anything else...'i cant beliv...maan tumhe aise treat krta hai?...my best frnd...nd tum geet...tum kitni asani se jhoot keh rhi thi muje...h na?...dsnt it hurts geet?...he said...


'it hurts...it hurts a lot dev...to see that your husband...dsnt needs you...dsnt loves you...dsnt...'she broke down cmpletely...'dev...i love him...me unse pyaar krti hu...par mere sath aisa kiyu hua dev?...kiyu...'


dev holds her...tried to compose her...she was sobbing...'geet...tum mujhe apna sachha dost man sakti ho...u can tell me evarything...or agar dost k haisiyat se nahi to ek ajnabee k haisiyat se hi kaho...tumhara dil halka ho jayega geet...'he said...


she was still sobbing...'dev...me pehli bar kisiko insab ke bare me bta rahi hu...pehli bar...kisine pucha mere dard ke bare me...pehli bar...thank you dev...rhnks for being a frnd...'


'anytime geet...dont think that am only maan's bst frnd...form now...am your frnd also...'he said...


'geet...you loves maan right?...so why dont we planned something to bring him to you?...he asked...


geet looks at him...she trusts him by now...1st time someone is so gentke..good with her...'kaisa plan?...'she asked...



'ummm...simple way se start krte hai...wy dont you try something to please him...like shopping for him...cooking his favrt dishes...and smthing else...'he asked...


she was excited...but...'but...i dont know about his likes and dislikes...ghar me to me sab ke lie jo khana banati hu...wohi unhe bhi...bt unka favrt kya h...muje nhi pta dev...'she was sad again...



'oho...dont worry dear...when dev is here...i will tell you...help you...i know everything about him...best buddy hai yar mera...'he smiled...


geet laughted looking at his antics...'realy you wil help me?...thnk u dev...'


'no...dosti me no sory no thnx...so...kabse suru kre ye sab?...'he saked her...


'umm...kalse?...'she said...


'done...fir kal hum isi time milte hai..meet me here...i will take you to the mall...ok?'

'ok dev...pakka...to ab me chalti hu ho rhi hai...bye...'saying this...she leaves from there...



dev also bid him good bye...at keep satring at her dissapearing image...'achhi ladki hai...diffrnt girl...so innocent...so naive...'then he dissmissed her thought and smiled at himself...


how was it guys?...

it gonnab difrnt from other stories...😉😉😉

hope u wil lik it...

plz leave ur cments...


lv u all...

~~~soumi~~~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice update...so Dev is going to help Maaneet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Hi..thanks 4 da pm n awesum update. Will Dev really help Maaneet? Update soon n pm wen u do
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Lovely parts dear.
Im glad dev knows the truth and wants to help her. :D
Want him to make maan jealous with geet ;)

Cant wait for more :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
loved it yaar ..i hope dev dosent fall for geet ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Awesome parts... loved them
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
awesome 3rd part
I have doubts on Dev intentions
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
me confused with dev and his intentions
is he playin nice with sm other motive or genuinely nice???
very nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome updates dr, loved it
contimue soon
nd thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
loved the update...
so dev helping maaneet...
waiting for the next

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