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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
wow very nice... loved it... plsss update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Part~4


next day...


geet went to shopping with dev...they visited a big shopping mall of delhi...


dev-so...what do want to giv him as a surprize??


'surprize?but wo kislie...?unka to b'day abhi nahi h...'she asked innocently...


dev smiled at her innocent...'geet...men likes to get surprize...agar tum unhe achanak unka koi manpasand gift de do...he will be happi...maan sayad tumhe pasand krne lge?...understand???'he said...

geet nodes her head...


they were busy in choosing some perfume for maan...as dev told her that maan likes branded perfume very much...after choosing a bit...geet took a perfume and goes near dev...


'dev...is perfume ki smell dekho...ye to bohot hi achhi hai...maan ko ye pasand ayega na bohot?...;she said enthusiastically...


dev smelled it...'geet...this is for girls...not for men...so u should choose somethins else...'


she was amazed...'girly wali?...aisa bhi hota hai kya??...hamarehoshiyarpur me to hum sab ek hi perfume use krte the...aise boys or girls alag hote h kya???...she asked with rounded eyes...


dev smiled again at her antics...'yes ms. hoshiyarpur...they r diffrnt...so...can we choose something else?...'he said...



'yes...why not...'she said morosely...'ye perfume bhi to achhi hi thi...kitna achha smell tha...kher chaddo...'



this time dev made the choice and selected a perfume...'take this one geet...maan will surely lik it...dekhna...'he said to her...


she become excited with the thought of making maan happy...'sachhi me dev...he will be hapi?unhe ye pefume pasand ayega na?...'


'ha...pasand ayega...or tumne iske piche itni mehnat ki h...too maan ko pasand to ana hi h na?'he said to her...


geet smiled in return...'kash maan bhi aisa soche...chaliye ab hume chalna chaiye...kafi der ho gayi hai...'

they comes outside the mall...dev drove her back to KM...


as she comes down from the car..she offered dev to come inside and have sone tea...but dev refused her sweetly saying that he has some other important work...as she proceed toward to entrnce...dev called her from back...

'geet...ekbar suno...'


geet turns back...and finds dev is standing near his car...she went there...'ji...kahiye...'


'this is for u...please take it...'

it was the perfume geet at first choosed for maan...she was amazed...


'dev...ye...me...i mean...aapne kab..?...


'dekho inkar mat karo...i will be hapi if you take it...i know u kie it...please...accept it as a frnd...'he said...


'thik h dev..am taking it...thnx for it...and thnx for helping me...thnx a lot...'she said...


'please...dont say thnx...we r frnds right?...'


'right...'she smiled...


'ok...bye for now...see u...and inform me k kya hua...ok?...bye...'saying htis he left...



in the evening...



geet was waiting in maan's room with the perfume...to gift him...'geet...bilkul mat ghabranaok?...bas unhe chupchap ye de dena...unhe zarur pasand ayega...dev ne kaha h na...sab thik hoga...'she prayed to babaji...'please sab thik krdena...'



after a while...nakul informed her that maan has arrived...


'ye aa bhi gaye?...dont wory geet...have patience...kuch nhi hoga...'


after sometime she saw that maan entered to the room...he was talking oh phone...that she even doesnt noticed her...he straight went to the couch and opened the laptop...

'adi...what is this all...?you should have informed me before...aj tak koi bhi client ne bina deal final kie KC SE CHALA NHI GYA...do u have any idea hamare reputation pr kya asar par sakta hai???...'


geet was waiting for him to end the call...he talked for sometime more...then opened his laptop and grossed in his work...


'ji suniye...'geet called him politely...


but he was too busy to listen...

'ji...aap bohot busy ho kya?...ekbar meri bat suniye...'she was a bit louder...


it irritated him...'ya geet...am not a dumb...tell me quickly...you can see am busy...dont have the whole day for you...'he said...

'ji woh mein...'she fumbled...

she handed him over the perfume bottle...'ji ye...aapke lie lia mene...'

just then his phone rang again...he seemed disturbed over something...he starts to shout over someone on phone...he was realy getting angry...geet didnt understand anything what is the matter...for once..she thought to leave the place...then she dismissed her thought...


when he cut he phone geet was still standing there...

'what?...ab kya h??...kiyu khade khade mera muh dekh rhi ho?...'he shouted...


'ji..ji...woh...ye...mera mtlb...'she showed him the perfume bottle...


maan was already hell angry due to some matter on office,,,,now geet's behavior made her more annoyed...he took the bottle from her hand and throuws it on the floor...it broke into pieces...that made geet shrink into fear...


'enough...who told you to do these stupid things for me???...just stop it all...do u understand?...now please leave from here...leave...'he shouted...


geet ran from the place craying...


precap~~~~~~~dev's next sugeestion to geet...😲



hi friends...how was it?????😊😊

sorry guys for the delay...😭😭😭😭was busy in college stuffs...

try to update next part very soon...

may be tomorrow...


love u all...


~~~soumi~~~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
hope that dev is good dear
i hope he is dear
i cant see he cheats her
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awww Maan...angry young man...iska kuch nahi ho sakta...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
loved the update...
is dev helping her or trying to split them...
waiting for the next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
awasome update
continue soon
hope dev is good here
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Awsome but why is maan so rude?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
part 4
hope Dev is good and has good intentions...
poor Geet feel so sorry for her...
and Maan he will be terrible when he realizes whats he doing to her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Loved it hope maan soon starts liking geet. continue soon.

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