MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 4 - Page 14

Originally posted by: amita5

hope nothing happens to geet...will maan accept her after he knows what the thieves did to her ?

please update soon

Originally posted by: bluerose1889

Awesome Update! Geet's really thoughtful. Even when she's badly hurt, she thought of telling Annie to not blame herself.

I can't wait till the next part!

@ritzy

I'm sorry I don't comment often, I try to as much as I can. You are a great writer and knows how to keep us hooked to the story. This twist was so unexpected.

Originally posted by: Water.

Ritz...

Just to add to what she wrote above...it is so true

I re read the update again and it was like I felt a choking sensation in my throat...it was like I was controlling for it to not come out...cus it is late here and I did not want parents to hear anything in the next room...

wow this update brought goosebumps on my hands and it was like i was right there...specially when Annie said...papa...there was blood ...so much blood...I was like wow...

pleaseee update soon...please

Now i m really scared cus the ff name is till death do us apart...r u planning to...hope not...

I want happy endings only

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yes it was her shock which I exactly wanted to portray...imagine a young girl of 18-19 seeing all this...I know they showed Geet also of 18 in GHSP but that is what made the original story so strong and poignant...

i remember when I was 18...seeing such acts makes yo realise not everything is good in this world and also to hold on to and cherish what is

Originally posted by: ajenn

If agree with both Water n Manashi's opinion.. Even I was thinking about ur main motive of bringing such plot. But we dont know what you've stored... I believe you've always been a amazing writer with well wise thought..

Like water said.. If all this happen just to prove their love.. Then I guess such scene isnt needed. My personal opinion

If yes.. its to prove how a molested victim comes out of such trauma. But how she going to and how will she.. All depends on you cos I dont know much bout this. Except bout the fact that it takes times.. I've only watch such traumatic from movies. Its not going to be a fast process..

Originally posted by: ritzy09

There were many reasons for writing this...

First and formost was the facts behind it...I just wanted to show that family should always support thier girls when they face such challenges...I will share with you two incidents of my own life...

I was 15 and walking on my colony road in delhi with my 5 yr old brother...A man came and asked me for an address...I told him I don't know...but he pestered me and asked me again. He thrusted a paer at me and whn I turned to look at it, he grabbed my br*** and squuezed it...I was shell shocked...taers came into my eyes as he took off...this was broad daylight. I was broken out of my trance when my 5 yr old brother asked me"Di...kya hua." I took a stone from roadside and hurled at him in frustration. By chnace it hit his scooter and he fell down...people gathered and I walked off without looking back and answering my brother

I was 19 and doing my engg...returning from a shop with my two friends in a rickshaw...suddenly it started raining and it became quite dark...just infront of my college boundary, that rickshaw driver stopped and gropped my friend. She screamed and it took us few minutes to understand what was going on...there were three of us and we kicked him but he was still so strong. He had grabbed my friend and torn her kurti...we just ran and jumped over our boundary and took breath once we were in our rooms...three girls and one man...and we were trmebling with fear...

All I am saying is this is reality...people are out there...I knew that I never told my parents but you know what my mom is my strength...I have seen her fighting all the problems in this life with a smile...I want hat strneth to eb there with Geet and be with her

Maan will be there but this FF is about family...Innocent Annie...if my sister was in the same place who is younger to me...I will never let her got thru this...neither did Geet...It it was my family then I will expect them to stand for me...If I had a boy friend...I would want him to support me...

That is it...there was no other reason...It was just way of expressing all those emotions and expectation I felt growing up...

Oh god, I have written a whole ramkahani here and my sincere apologies if this was too violent and you felt it was not required...yes it was defo not required by the story...it was probably just my need