MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 4

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

great part
you wrote all the emotions for this update so perfectly
but now i need the next part soon its quite unnerving to wait at such points
plz continue soon

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jenny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Water.

U know I had to re read again cus I read it really fast the first time...after I read it I was like am i sure i read it correctly cus it is really late here...in the morning...and just to believe that I was reading it correctly I re read it again...and yes it was true...whatever I read...
sounds so stupid now...😕

I guess ritz's update was haunting u all nite n made u read again in the morning 😉...

Am always scared to read heart wrenching emotional dramatic scenes...

Too much to handle 😃

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update so thank god she took the promise to not to tell to dad and mom i hope that anniee should tell everything to maan plz its a request and one more thing plz dont let police kill R2 his hand and his mouth should be destroyed by maan plz dear it's a request it might be violent but plz do it i want maan to uproot his hand from his body i seriously want this plz do it

Dear I got emails telling me that this much violence was not required...so more violence...well I will add a para as to what happens to all three robbers and trust me they will get what is due to them...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ajenn
You know what ritz.. I felt like roller coaster ride reading each sentences...
I cant think of anything apart hoping Geet will be fine 😭

I've even started to think about ur Title's real meaning as well...

I need to crack my head till next update..😕

Thx for the pM...

ps: Glad that you still give us an updates to those being an loyal reader... I do keep stalking ur page even I didnt receive any pMs .. So comments from my side is of cos will be 😃Do not worry..

Thanks dear...even I felt the intensity when i was writing this...even proof readin it yesterday brounght out tears to my eyes...I took break between this and previous track because I could not handle it together...

as for the title...don't worry...as I said before, I believe in happy endings...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Water.

I agree...annie should say it all to the family on waht actually happened to geet and how much she did and sacrificed for annie...and Maan should punch the Ba***** till he dies😡

truth will definately come out and I am hoping you guys are going to like the positivity about it...

I am trying to tone down the violence in the FF for future chapters as per the feedback so no punching from Maan...I had decided not to focus on robbers but on Maaneet...but seeing the enthu, i will defo add the consequences for them...

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
thanks for updating quickly dearie...

this was one of the saddest updates apart from the last one...Your update was so realistic that I had tears in my eyes...Annie's helplessness was so evident through your words...I felt so sad for Raj and Rishabh...imagine being thousands of miles away from your children and knowing they have been harmed in this aweful way...

unimaginable 😭 can we bother you for another update tomorrow ?

Thank you darling...that is truly whta I wanted to portray...Annie is still a very yong girl who has lead a very sheltered life...her panic and helplessness on the side of the family when they are so far off...

I will defo give an update tomorrow nahin to pata nahin mere thread pe kya kya ho jane wala hai...