FF~Human After All #11~Imp NOTE on 144:) - Page 71

Sorry sorry sorry... For nt commenting regularly... I miss u all...

loved all d updates di...

Shaan's bday... Was ekdam jhakas...

U knw when i was reading dis update in d train i was smilling n blushing so much... My frind was like y r u smiling so much... Lol...

megha my cutie pie... I missed her... And even palak...

Khanak made cake fr shaan's bday...!!! Omggg... Dats so cool...

Shaan is leaving tmrw... :( awww... :(

loved the update very much diii...

Abt d HAA... Omggg!!!! Seven months r over??? Really?? 😲😲

it feels like it recently started... Omggg...!!!! Im just addicted to HAA... And ur writing...dont even in ur dream think of ending it... Its my daily routine to read HAA in d train... Let it b new update or old... :D

love u miss u...

Originally posted by: candy84

You are unbelievable! An amazing woman! And I am so glad that you are mY Friend... Love You Simi !!!🤗

No doubt.. Itezaar ka phal meetha hota hai!!! Simi..i never knew itne lambe itnezaar ka itna phal meetha hoga...It was a surprise for me well!!!

Thanks for fulfilling my Swimming pool wish... Loved it !! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

"HT"...Pundu ka Twin Bro!!😲😲 You know how to Protect urself from 3 women fighting for you...don't you????😆😆

Party was Rocking!!

Hahahaha...Rahul ki Sweety Biryani 😆😆

How cum he is leaving tomm for Chennai??? So soon????

PS: song for my HT...coming up next !!!

Hey Smiley Simi

Awesome update & Brilliantly written Buddy.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved both 'B' & 'C' part simi.⭐️ U are fantastic in explaining emotions & atmosphere.👍🏼

Waise again Sorry for the late comments.😳 Lol ab toh sorry bolte hue bhi sharam aati hain as this is my regular thing now a days 😳 Firstly Lovely Siggie by Ramzz.😃 Loved it.⭐️ I know I am repeating my self but actually Simi HAA update is incomplete Without Siggies. & not to forget your amazing Music choice. Just fantastic. I always loved it.👏 U Rock Simi,👍🏼 Chalo I am commenting here for Both the parts together Sim.😃

Part B:

Firstly loved the title Simi.👏 Sorry forgot to mention in my comments for Part A 😳….Coz that time I was drolling over Candy's siggie.😍 Part B explained fantastically ⭐️ the care, the faith, the protection, & mainly the possessiveness of a Hubby Wifey relationship explained beautifully. Shaan is a Great Guy.⭐️ I wish every girl gets a Hubby like Shaan,😃 the respect for women & mainly the unconditional love for his Wifey made him THE BEST & stands him much much much higher level in the world of Mean & cheap men & specially the M.C.P's.😃 Shaan is a perfect example for the society who treats women as their Toy 😡 & Specially for those men who just cared abt Success & Money & not abt their Love, marrage (Wife) & the relationship.😒

Okkk before I forget I want to tell you that Simi I am loving the use of Hindi in updates 😃 please Do continue using it as its making Story alive. I feel very happy when hindi sentences are added.😊 Thank u.🤗 Shaan is so cute when he talked to khanak in Hindi.😍 Loved the sence Khanak actually placed Kala tika on hubby. 😊 Haaye I love them.😍Wow they both are looking Feb, & loved the Gift khanak bought for hubby darling.😃 Their convo was So good. Sacchi bolu toh I senced trouble when Shaan talked abt the Guys who has Evil thoughts for Women, I thought Did Shaan got to know abt it or what??? 😕 I know he didn't know the hospital incident. But I actually thought he got to know abt the Guys who misbehaved with Khanak. They were the Real Pest.😡 I am so proud of khanak she hide that beautifully.😊 Yes she IS an independent woman & she can handle situation,😃 thank u so very much Simi for showing this Strong & capable enough. But NOT week.😃

The Staircase incidence was khatarnaak.😳 I so hate those guys, they are so cheap.😡 i so love shaan for the punch he gave sandy..how dare sandy talks like that..😒 I am so sure that from now onwards they will not dare to look at khanak.😊 Loved shaan here surves them right.😊 Shaan is so possessive & protective.⭐️ Khanak lets him know abt the yesterday's incident.😲 Shaan gets tensed but loved the way khanak handeled him.😕 Awwweee shaan is a sweet heart he wants to meet the male partner as he didn't wanted any devil eye near his Angle.

*sigh* at the final lines just wonderful.😊 Their words, & the kiss the care for wifey is so visible in that actions. Khanak is so sweet here.😃 Loved the whole part. Proud to be a HAA reader.

Well sorry it's a really long reply 😳 so for part C posting another comment.😳

Love you

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: IF_rida

Buttercup it was splendid👏👏⭐️⭐️👏
👏⭐️
loved the update i actually felt that i was in the party🥳

somehow i figured out that there must be a surprise from khanak by planning a party for him... but the way u've penned i lived in the moment

oh i was missing megha finally she is here...

the dress u described... haye... she must've luked breathtaking😍

i loved when he said to khank's parents that u've goven me the most precious thing... undoubtedly she's the best thing ever happened to him👍🏼

the song selection was superb ...especially the part that he joined her... its like this songs is especially written for shanak😍

wow... she has made the cake... one more shade f her personality😊

simi the poolside part... i was 'ving goosebumps😍

my heart was beating at ist double pace☺️

it was steamy hot☺️

i never knew that the cold water of pool can make this so HAWT☺️

hmm the dress was beautiful but it was obvious he'll hate it later😉

but em happy we finally got the poolside romance

it was shanaklicious... i was ☺️☺️ ☺️ and ☺️till the end of the update and still i am ☺️

hmm i too wanted him to take her to chennai but somehow i feel like that she shd stay back
😳
real life is like that... though i dunno how we are goin to survive even widout the shanak moments😕

but u know wht is goin to be the best thing😊

the colored lines was awesome as alwayz... reflecting that their bond is getting stronger and their immense love😍



HMMM as far as ur ques is concerned ... my dear buttercup do u really need to know that is has been interesting for us or not

its not an ff for me ... its like a part of my life... i feel like i know them since ages

em saying it again luv u and HAA a lot.🤗🤗

hmm the update shows u must 've worked really hard so u can take a brk but a very little one

coz em eagerly waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: JyotiS

Simi read the last two parts of HAA: "Eternally yrs B & C". I don't want to say how much I loved it or how wonderfully you have brought Shanak's emotions, love, agony for each other but like to say your HAA is a piece of work which made me/us glued to it and I/we have been falling for HAA like hook, line and sinker.

@ Part B: Loved the interactions between huby and wifey. That Sandy had to be taught a lesson and I believed he learned if not God knows what is coming for him in future. Thanks to Khanak for not letting know about yesterday's incident cos by this time Sandy & co. would have been minced meat. Itna gussa is not good for your health Shantanu😛 Doctor in Khanak wanted to help that chipko out with treatment😲 ( I know doc hain na, has to show humanity)😃.

@ Part C: Loved how Shan was getting irritated an dimpatience as no one wished him on his B'day. dadi was such a nautanki and deserved an Oscar I guess. Megha blurted out and truth came out😲😆😆😆. Surprise ko satyanas😆😆😆😆. Wow!! Khanak has done lots of things on his special day😳😊. She baked his B'day cake to with Pooja assistance👍🏼👏. Well done Pooja👏🤗. Songs were too good and my favs too😳😊. Awww the pool scene left me blushing😳😳👏.

Haila!! He is leaving for Chennai in the morning😲😲. Hope she could manage to get few days off from her work and accompany him☺️. My fingers are crossed😊.

As for the next tracks of HAA it's upto you you can show how Shanak's relationships are getting stronger as days pass or you can do with HAA whatever you want to. But I personally request you "please don't end HAA so soon". A song is dedicated to our beloved Jodi😳😊

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya
Aankhon aankhon mein woh lakhon gallan kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

Ab dil chaahe khamoshi ke honthon pe main likh doon
Pyaari si baatein kayi
Ho kuch pal mere naam kare woh, main bhi uske naam pe
Likhoon mulakaatein kayi
Ho pehli hi takni mein bann gayi jaan pe
Naina waina uske mere dil pe chapeh
Ab jaaun kahan pe, dil ruka hai wahaan pe
Jahaan dekh ke mujhe woh aagey badh gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

Mausam ke azaad parinday, haathon mein hai uske
Ya woh bahaaron si hai
Sardi ki woh dhoop ke jaisi, garmi ki shaam hai
Pehli puhaaron si hai
Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai
Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai
Jaane kya kya do aankhon mein main padh gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya
Aankhon aankhon mein woh lakhon gallan kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VezV9jFDBNE&feature=related

Pink & purple lines are to die for😳😊. thanks Simi👏⭐️. Hope you won't take too long to update the next part😊

Love,

Jyoti

PS: I don't know how to insert a video link here

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Smiley Simi

Awesome update & Brilliantly written Buddy.👏

Part C:

U and candy Rocked the update camptelely Simi. Loved. Loved the Music & Siggies were just mind blowing. Was watching Siggies like a burthal for few minutes.😍 😍 Love you candy for this. candy u are a magician. Loved the party update & yes before I start my non stop Bakwass 😳

A very Happy Bithday to our dearest Shantanu Khandelwal.

Awwweee our poor guy gets irritated on his brthaday as he thinks everyone forgot his birthday.😆 😉Loved Rahul here.😊 Even he didn't wished him.😃 I knew it that khanak must have planned something for him as its the very first birthday of hubby darling. 😳 But Shaan is Shaan he shuts Rahul up by taking Jyo's name 😉'..Poor Rahul.😆 Shaan gets happy seeing His Mom calling.😃 But bichaare ka Popat as she didn't wished him. Infect she asked him to came home ASAP as dadi wanted to see him.😲

Loved the Acting of Khandelwals. Specially Dadi & Second Madhavi aunty ⭐️, Dadi did the best nautanki.😉 But our princess came & Booommm .''.. saare natak par se parda uth gaya. Wow our Princess wished Chachu first.😃 Loved the way every one teased shaan & wished him.😃Specially Akki Bro. Finally Shaan comes to know abt the master planner of the event 😃 & he serched for wifey.😍 Wow Boo taking Hindi was really nice 👏 & the way he teased his devar was very realistic.👏 But kuch bhi kaho Star was my Princess Megha form the Khandelwals.⭐️ Her innocence & cuteness is just awesome,

Finally Shaan saw Wifey.😍 & loved the discribtion of khanak's dress.👏 Wow I actually imagined it from your detailing you Rock Simi.👍🏼 Awweee Boo is super cute here.😊 Loved this Boo.😃 Loved the whole sence they took blessing from elders & yes not to forget their cute love exchanges, loved their talks.👏 Wow the party was Feb Simi.🥳 Again the entry of everyone, reminds me of Shanak marrage & the masti.😍 Rahul was sweetest amongst all specially when he called Khanak Bhabhi.😃

Oohh ho Candy madam gets an approval from the bro for Her love life her Pandu.😉 Congo shongo candy. Ab toh bhaiya se bhi permission mil gayi.😉The convo between khanak's family & shaan was very touchy.😊 Wow khanak made a cake for hubby. How cute yaar.😍 The performance by Kash Megha & shanak was a real treat or should I say the best return gift for readers.😃 Loved the song choice, one of my all time fav.😃 I find it too cute when Madhavi aunty asked hubby to get some tips from Shaan 😆& her calling them RLB reminds me of RBO.😍 Thank u simi.🤗

The Swimming pool sence was just outstanding & magical.😍 *phew* loved it.👏 Brilliant discribtion of their love& togetherness,⭐️ khanak gets tired goes on terrace for fresh air. Hubby coming.😉Her dhamkaoing him again not knowing its Shaan 🤣 & than their make out *sigh* U rock simi. U are best with writing seductive & physical stuff with such Passion & decency.

Ooh oh shaan is leaving tomorrow morning 😭 he is really worried abt wifey & wanted her to accompany him.😃 But her duties, profession & responcibility towards patients doesn't allow her to join him, U doctors ROCK yaar, Thank u for being their when people needs u the most.😃 But she said that will try. Please Simi tell na are you planning to send her with him 😕, actually I know u are not sending her coz by this u are going to give us the new lesson of marrage & love 😃 i.e ki Dooriyaan pyar aur vishwas ko aur badhati hain, Right Sim??😊 The final Lines & the words used by khanak was just mind blowing.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Brilliantly Written Simi'''..Kudos!!!!.

Waiting for the next part''.jaldi dena.

Love you

Pranjal.

OMG.updates galore wich i have to read n started reading...

Let her Go with him ... PLEASE !!!!

it has been and lovely and interesting journey simi...looking 4ward to seperation track n long distance love...love u muahhh