Hey Smiley Sim
Awesome & brilliantly written…..Loved the part,.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Loved this insecure Doc sorry Wifey.😳 This shows how much she loves him, beautifully described part Sim.👏 Loved it,⭐️ Khanak being jealous and possessive that shaan is doing so much of tariff of a girl 😲 and she thinks that he dont love her like before and would leave him any day😒 (this is too much over here ha I so wanted to go to khanak😲 & tell her Shut up woman don't you know how much he loves you😡) but love shaan here he handeled her beautifully 👏 he is a perfect hubby he knows how to clam her. he made her clear that she is her life for whom he can do anything ,😊 awesome love. Loved each & every line 👏 ….u have awesomely written that part, their passionate love their care their possessiveness all were so visible here,😍
Finally loved the shant atmosphere in the room.😃 Shaan made her feed but loved it when he gets angry after her insecure argument regarding Anu.😳 Best part is khanak & her cold what a timing of chiek 😆 (lol that was super funny) shaan than made his angle sleep.😍 He is so adorable.😆
BTW I didn't get it why alarm buzzes at 4.00 am.😕 Khanak tries to find shaan on the bed.😊 But ddint find him 😲(loved your discribtion …..brilliantly written. Khanak serches for him in whole house but didn't get the site of huby. I can so imagine her expression from your discribtion Simi.👏 That is so scary for poor girl.😔 She sees his lappy & other stuff there.😳 But no site of hubby……I know I am saying this again & again but sacchi beautiful discribtion, her state of mind thinking about all the wrong things cheaking his bike is there or not (very realistic & natural discribtion 👏)
She goes down in the serch of a hubby,😊 Poor girl she is so disturbed. Her anger, her frustration, her helpless ness, her dependence on him described beautifully. She is so much disturbed.😒Than she feel the hold of someone around her beautiful choice of words 👏 & she screams first try to scold guy in hindi & than in English.😆 Loved it funny & hilarious.😆 But finally shaan spoke otherwise to I can imagine,,,,that's funny lol.🤣 Loved the way you described khanak here. She is so angry ki she again pulls out issue of Anu,😲 but shaan again beautifully handles her.👏 Awesome Simi. U have created an extra ordinary man,
Finally they entered their apt.😊 & shaan finally tells her that he went on Run to think & feel relax.😃 Khanaks way of apology is so sweet & cute,😉 Shaan is amazing kisi bhi situation mein he can joke & make her laugh.😍 Finally shaan answers why he needed to think shaan shows her his work & his plans to fulfill her dream.⭐️ and shaan hospital's design , which he made for fullfilling his wife's dream is too good 👏, it shows his actual love which he treasures so much 👏,there convo was so cute & Awesome.👍🏼
Last part was awesome & super hawt.😍 Loved the part,😉 streaming Hot, her watching his scar at the ear 😛, her actions his responces,.😍 Sim tussi great ho you write hot stuff with such a decency man .,,,,,You are too Cool Oops or should I say u are too Hot.😛 😉 Btw got it why 4.00 am alarm buzz.,😕 me stupid samaj hi nahi paayi…..(He..he ..he)😆😉loved the lat part.👏 U have brilliantly described their togetherness, as usual the lines in Blue & Pink were awesome & fantastic. You took me to Shanak dream land 😍,,,,,that's why late comments.😳
No sacchi extremely sorry for the late comments,😳 was sacchi busy plus real life issues 😲,,,,,,Uff,,,jane do kya bolu. But update made my day,,,,,thank u.
Waiting for the next part,,,,,,kab milega,,,,,,please say Today…..Waiting for it …..jaldi dena,,,,,
Love U
Pranju.
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