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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Just read both parts
They were amazing!!!
Can't wait for more
Please update soon and thanxs for the pm
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Loved ur FF
Pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
I came across this just now...to tell the truth...the epilogue broke my heart😭...well u'll know that already...but pls...pls make her run away with Maan...or kill that Sonu guy right now after marriage😡... I can see Geet a widow rather than see her going away with that moron who bought her from her disgusting father n brother😡😡😡...Oh Maan can't be silent like that...it goes against his persona...he has to do something...pls make him do something...n yeah do pm me when u update next...u write so well...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: esha143

I came across this just now...to tell the truth...the epilogue broke my heart😭...well u'll know that already...but pls...pls make her run away with Maan...or kill that Sonu guy right now after marriage😡... I can see Geet a widow rather than see her going away with that moron who bought her from her disgusting father n brother😡😡😡...Oh Maan can't be silent like that...it goes against his persona...he has to do something...pls make him do something...n yeah do pm me when u update next...u write so well...😃


thx dear. will pm you sure!!😉
well, the wedding is going to happen, but to know if maan will do some action or not, you have to wait and read!!😃
thx for the compliment dear!!😳😳😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
AMAZING AWESOME PART
i know that even if she does marry Sonu somehow at the very end she'll end up with Maan
or at least i hope!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
wonderful update
omg their treating like trash
their own blood
why do i feel his taking to make
sure she V not screwing around
my heart goes out to her
waiting next
thank yu so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
thx for all your lovely comments.
will try to update today.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Part 3

Brij and a still crying Geet reached the hospital. Brij spoke to one of the female doctors and she took Geet with her in her room to examine her. After around 10 minutes the doctor came out and told Brij not to worry, as everything is ok and that she is still a virgin. Brij after being satisfied from the doctor thanks her and takes Geet back home.

After getting inside the living room, everyone was waiting to hear the news. Brij assured them that everything is fine and that the marriage can continue.

Geet was all the while numb. She can't believe that her own family didn't trust her. And as if that wasn't enough, the marriage would take place in just a few days as if nothing happened. She felt disgusted by her family. Out of nowhere Brij took Geets arm and pulled her to her room. Once inside, he yelled at her and threatened her to stay inside.

B: Don't even dare to think of escaping from here. You won't tell your lover anything or I will kill him in front of your eyes. Understood?? Now give me your phone. Don't even think to call him!!

With that said he took her phone out of her bag, slapped her tight on her cheek and left from there. He locked the room and took the key with him.

Geet was inside crying and crying, sitting on the floor and hugging her knees to her chest. What will she do know?? If she tells anything to anyone, they will kill her at the spot. They have token her phone. Now she can't even reach Maan. But at the other side, what will they do, if they get to know she talked with him? Will they harm him? Will they really kill him in front of her eyes? No!! They can't do this!! They can't kill her Maan!! They won't!! She will not let them harm her Maan. Even if that means, that she has to keep quiet and spend the rest of her life with that Sonu. Even the thought of spending a second without Maan and with this Sonu is killing her inside. But she has to save at least Maan. He will be heartbroken when he gets to know that she married someone else. He will think that she betrayed him or never ever loved him. She hopes that one day, he will for forget her and live his life happily with someone else. But she will never forget him or their love. It will always be with her.

Geet decides to keep quiet for the sake of Maan.

At the other side, Maan is really restless. He can't even breathe properly. Something is eating him from inside. Is everything alright with Geet? He calls her phone, but it is switched off. Maybe her battery is empty.

The Handa household is busy arranging the marriage and going shopping for the necessary items.

It is Monday morning. Geet was during the whole time in her room and stepped not even once outside. Her brother Karan was the only one she saw during her imprisonment. He brought her food inside, waited till she finished and took the plates with him.

Today Brij came inside with a packet in his hands. He gave the packet and told her to get ready in ten minutes and left. Geet opened the packed. Inside was a red anakarli.

She got dressed quick end tried to open the door. It was locked. Brij opened the door and took her outside. The house was everywhere decorated. She could kill herself just by the look at the house. Her eyes started to get moist. They took her outside the house, where they made her sit in a waiting car. They drove for 30 minutes and reached the registration office. They took Geet out and went to a big room, where everyone was waiting for her. They seated her on the table beside Sonu. Everything was happened after that was like in trance for her. She couldn't hear anything. All she could think about was Maan.

Brij pocked her from the side and whispered her to say yes, or she knew what was going to happen. She said yes and could hear Sonu saying yes too to the registrar. Then they gave her a pen and Brij whispered her to sign the papers. She took the pen with a shaking hand and signed the paper. Then she put down the pen on the table and an eagerly waiting Sonu gabbed the pen and signed the papers. Now it was official: she was married to that Sonu. She was now Mrs. Geet Sonu Sharma. Everyone congratulated the newlywed couple, but Geet didn't hear any of them.

After getting the certificate, Sonu tried to hold Geets hand, but she took her hand back the second his fingers touched her hand. She walked quiet next to her dadi to the car and sat inside without uttering a word.

Her dadi was really pained to see her granddaughter in this state, but she couldn't help her. She tried to talk to the man in the house, but none was ready to listen to her. She even tried to reach Maan, but when she reached the caf, she was told that he had left long time back. She tried to know where he lives, his phone number, etc. But they told her that they aren't allowed to tell her anything. And even if they could, they themselves don't know anything about him expect his name.

Dadi was heartbroken, as she couldn't help Geet.


Precap:Maan working as a waiter in an Indian wedding

Part 2 Page 5 Pevious-Next Part 4 Page 9


So this was part 3. What do you think will happen next?

Sorry for grammatical errors.

Pls hit the like tab and comment, as it helps me motivation to write further.

Love you all,

Bushra

Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
nice story!i'd just read the first to parts when u updated the 3rd😆...great going!!
Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bangalores

nice story!i'd just read the first to parts when u updated the 3rd😆...great going!!



thx dear😊

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