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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
dear friends,
thank you soo much for your lovely comments.

my brother delated by mistake the next part and now i have to type it again. will update it and pm everyone once i finish typing it.

note:
if you want pms, pls add me in your buddy list. that would be much easier to pm everyone.

love you all,

bushra
Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
hey dear
congrats on ur new ff
and starting was awesome
liked ur story well
actually i m a bit busy yaar
so dint read before
but i read now
fabulous story
update soon dear
and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

It is Friday evening. Maan asked Geet the whole time why she has to go early, who is coming and so on. Geet herself doesn't know who is coming, so she couldn't tell Maan much. Even if Maan isn't showing it Geet, he has a bad feeling that something bad will happen. How right he was. If he just would have known before what is going to happen, he wouldn't let Geet go this easily today.

Karan came at 3pm to pick Geet up. He was looking disturbed and in deep thought. He took Geet and they went home. Once inside, Geet got the biggest shock of her life. Her brother dragged her in the living room where a man around 25 years, sitting in front of her father. He looked at her the moment she entered the room. She was told to sit down. The man was smiling at her. She didn't like his smile. It scared her somehow. Her brother Brij talked first and introduced them.

B: Sonu, this is my sister Geet. Isn't she as beautiful as I told you? And Geet, this is Sonu, my close friend from Mumbai. We went to the same college. He came here to find a nice girl and settle down. He has some saved money and wants a big wedding and open here a supermarket. I know him since so long and he is a good guy, so I thought about getting you two married.

Geets eyes widens in shock with what she heard. No, this can't be true. This is a joke. I am sure it is one. But what she heard next, makes her realize, that it wasn't a joke.

B: we talked with the pandit on the phone, and he told that the best date for the marriage is on Friday next week. Monday we will go to the registration office and you will marry there. After that is on Friday the hindu marriage. Now go and get some sweets for all of us!!

Geet was too shocked to move. Her mother came and helped her up. She didn't want to. She wanted to tell everyone that she can't marry anyone else then Maan. She opened her mouth to say something when her dad said:

R: the marriage is my final decision. She will marry you and no one else. By the way, how much will you give for my beautiful daughter?

Geet fell disgusted. She wanted to talk about her opinion and here they are talking in front of her how much she is worth??

They agreed to 100.000 Pounds. Geet couldn't stand it anymore. She left from there crying and run to her room. Her dadi came after her to consol her. Geet laid her head in her lap and cried her heart out. How could they be so cruel? They arranged her marriage without asking her once! They will sell her to a man and made the discussions about her price in front of her?! She won't take it anymore.

After an hour, Sonu was gone and Geet went scared like never before in her life in front of her father.

G: paji, I want to tell you something.

R: areh, aise khya dekh rahe hoon. Jaldi batao, baat kya hai. I don't have the whole day!!

Geet took all her courage and spoke for the first time what is in her mind in front of her family.

G: Paji, I don't want to marry him. I love someone else.

All are looking at Geet with shock.

R: How dare you?!?! How dare you speak to me like this!! How dare you question my decision!! And who is the b****** which you love!! Tell me, I will first kill you and then him!!

Rajeev was furious, angry and god knows what else. With the fury in him, he slapped Geet across her face. The slap was with such a force, that she flew on the floor.

She was unconscious.

The next thing she saw when she woke up was Brijs face. He was angry. Very angry.

B: have you done anything with your lover you b*****?!?!

Geet was shocked by the question. She quickly shook her head in a no. Brij was looking at her as to think if he should believe her or not.

B: how do I know you are telling the truth?!?! Chalo, we are going!! If you even utter a word, you are death!!

With that he packed Geet on her arm and dragged her out of the house.



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So this is part 2. What do you think will happen now? Where are they going??

Pls comment and hit the like tab. If you want pms, pls add me in your buddy-list.

It would be great if you could leave a note as what was good or what could be better in the next update. It would help me a lot.

love you all,

Bushra
Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
loved it yaar...do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Loved it yaar;D;D
conitne soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

nice yaar awsome update 👍🏼

im reallly looking forward to the next part
keep writing
raina 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Lovely update...❤️

cntnue soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow awesome yaar
loved it
i hate geet's family
chi how cheap they r
living in london but their thinking is equal to a village ppl
arggg i hate them
and this brij chi is it a question to ask his sister
he is taking her to hospital for Virginity test hain na
chi chi how cheap how low the are.
hope maan save her
but u said in prologe that her marraige is over with that sonu
but i dont mind maan pulling her out of mandap and kidnap her
they both are made for each other...my MAANEET
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: teju2292

wow awesome yaar
loved it
i hate geet's family
chi how cheap they r
living in london but their thinking is equal to a village ppl
arggg i hate them
and this brij chi is it a question to ask his sister
he is taking her to hospital for Virginity test hain na
chi chi how cheap how low the are.
hope maan save her
but u said in prologe that her marraige is over with that sonu
but i dont mind maan pulling her out of mandap and kidnap her
they both are made for each other...my MAANEET



Yes, geets family is realy very cheap.
and about maan saving geet, hmmm? lets wait and see.
And yes, brij is taking geet to the hospital.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Awsum part. Thanks 4 the pm

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