Dil Chahta Hain (RP) Pt10pg43 'On the Go' - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Great update dear Arwa πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
The starting scene was awesome i mean Fb was great and love that. 😳 😳 😳
They were so passionate and romantic there and i really wish to see them like this very soon akhir ye nafrat bhi to pyaar hi hai. 😍 😍 😍
But Sujal came back in his real word once again more frequently one more thing he is really very concerned about Sheena till now that's y he saved her from press. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Ab dekho kabhi kisi baat ka dhang se jawab na to Sujal dega na to Sheena now they are dancing on their fav song and they are completely lost in that.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Par vo bhi na Sujal hai he knows how to control but he was really rude with her, it makes her hate herself bcz he was behaving too arogant. 😑 😑 😑
Sheena ne i think jyada irritate hone ki vajah se hi dress bhi nahi change ki and Sujal got a blunt reply. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
But the scene when he was leaving from the party and said those dirty lines to her was really untoulrable.
But the best part was their first meeting.πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
they were too lost ignoring everything around them and i loved Sheena in that way.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
But dat kiss was unexpected, Sujal couldn't control himself to see her. 😳 😳 😳
Try to update asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! - thanks a lot

The first scene was soo full of double meaning!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe that was the idea

Sujal and Sheena are romancing in his car!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes as one of the private places they wud get in public

Sujal feels very lucky to have her in his life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ - yeh he feels very lucky

Sheena loves resting on his chest as she always felt so protected and into another world when she rested there!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - its the best place to be for sure

Sheena loves her engagement ring and doesn't want to let go of it at all!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - its her most possessed treasure

But Sujal said she has to take it off until the official announcement and they have to go back inside the party!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh as formalities always count

Sheena wants to stay here longer and Sujal agreed!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - how cud he ever refuse to her

Sujal loves it when Sheena is bad and he knew how wild Sheena could get to when she wanted to!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - oh yes very wild

They are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes they r

The scene totally reminded me of the last scene of Die Another Day!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm surely inspirations always come form places

Sujal came back to the real world from his dream and saw Sheena standing there!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yes it was an abrupt end

Poor Sujal!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”His pleasant dream got over very soon!!!!! - yes often gud dreams don't last long

The song is very nice and simply perfect for them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - its made for them song

The lines describe their feelings perfectly and is totally in sync with each of their emotions!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - yes thats why its a mde for them song

Sujal lost his temper when he saw that she had not even bothered to change her dress!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - naturally since he expects her to be classy when with him

Sheena had thought of changing but then was irritated with his unfair time limits and did not bother!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - she is also right in her part since he wud have just got angry on her being late


She gave him a blunt reply which he ignored and commanded his driver to move along as he hated being late!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - being late was just an excuse


The party was like the usual socialite parties and Sheena felt suffocated in it as she knew not one of them was real!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yes she hated the place


There is a mask in front of the real thing and she herself had been fooled by Sujal!!!!! - he was the biggest liar


Sujal wanted her to feel that she wasn't important for him at all yet she had to make him very important for her!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - of course as that was part of his torture


It was her duty to remain there on his call and only because of him that she was able to stand between all the richness in the country!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - thats what he wanted her to feel


Sujal saved her from the press which surprised Sheena as she hadn't expected that from him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - surely as it was confusing


His concern for her made him do this though he claimed it was because it is his personal affair!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ab sach baat thori pata chalne dega


He insulted her when they were alone and said ke agar woh chahe toh abhi issi waqt usse sare aam neelam kar sakta hai!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - he needs to show her how much in control he always is

Sheena was really hurt as she no way wants to become his mistress!!!!! - yes no way


His breath on her skin still scorches her in a sensual way which she had loved once upon a time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes those beautiful days


Sheena is unable to understand what Sujal wants and what is going on in that devious mind of his!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - he is so unpredictable thats why


It was nothing but double standards and Sheena had always known him to have them and that was the reason she wasn't with him anymore!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - very true indeed


Sheena is bemused by his intentions and that's what Sujal wants as then she would be vulnerable to him!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - his plan is working slowly


Sujal doesn't want the contract to become public as it was his personal revenge!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

But is he planning to make it public in future??πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - well eventually things wud cum out from the closet


Kisi bhi baat ka dhaang se jawab na Sujal deta hai aur nahi Sheena!!!!! - thats what keeps them ticking


The song "I hate you, like I love you" is perfect for Sheena and Sujal!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe yeh it wud be perfect for them


Sujal and Sheena are lost in each other while dancing on their favourite song!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - yes the beautiful magical song


It was the same song on which they both had danced at their first meet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes its significant


Both of them are not able to control their emotions while dancing and the song brought out their innermost feelings!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ab is gaane ka jaadoo hee kuch aisa hain


They still have feelings for each other but it is all overshadowed by their bitterness!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm yes it is


Sujal wants her to see the pain he had gone through when Sheena had left him!!!!! - he has had a lot of pain


Sheena wants to tell him how much she loves him yet his betrayal had ruined everything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί - its true as her heart was broken


But her love for him was not terminated kyunki yeh nafrat bhi toh ussi pyaar ka hissa hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ - perfect saying


Sujal's dream was a recurring dream which left him in darkness whenever reality struck him!!!!! - yes it was one of his inspirations to carry on and without them he felt all alone

They were still able to read each other's eyes to understand what took place in their hearts!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes as the connection is still there

The VM is just awesome and simply beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes glad u liked it


It tells the story of Sujal and Sheena very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - very well indeed


Sujal almost kissed her but once the song was over the magic wiped away and he came back to reality!!!!! - the spell does break very fast


He pushed her back as if he had just used her and she was astonished and outraged!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - a terrible feeling indeed


Sheena had endured too much of Sujal's arrogance and she breaks up as he had treated her like an object!!!!! - aakhir kab tak bardaasht karsakti hain


Sujal had wanted this very much and his golden moment was here as he wanted her to lash out at him!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈 - of course as then he wud have her under his control more

He insulted her a lot and the dirty things he said to her were really intolerable!!!!! - yeh aksar ghusse me insaan na jaane kya kehjaata hain


He treated her like a prostitute and told her to take off her dress and held the edge of it as if he was going to rip it off!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - he truly passed the line than ever before

Sheena had enough of his insolence and slapped him across his face!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - yes he deserved it


Good for her as he totally deserved it for being so mean and outrageous and saying such things!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - yes he did

Sheena said that he has totally become an animal!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - he has lost all his emotions for sure


The slap had been unexpected but her anger still amused him!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - since he has lost his conscience then why shouldn't it amuse him


Usne Sheena ko aur baate sunayi and said ke agar sharafat nahi hoti toh kab ka Sheena uska bistar phir se garam kar chuki hoti!!!!! - he also stands right in his place


Sheena is completely shattered by his insults and is crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - any self respecting woman wud

Her thoughts took her miles back to the past when she had first met him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - aah yes the golden days


Sheena was a real party animal in those days and loved the attention from the opposite sex!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ - definitely the most hap girl around


Sheena crashed into someone and fell on the ground on top of him!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sujal and Sheena's first meeting was indeed very filmy!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe ab its the most convenient way to meet anyone

Sheena is enchanted and Sujal is just lost in her beauty and they have forgotten everything around them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - as always they r totally lost in the spell


The way they are lying is totally advantageous to Sujal!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes as he got to do things unconsciously


When Sheena realized what happened, she stood up and put the full blame on him aur usse sunane lagi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - well as they say the best form of defence is attack


Sujal is not saying anything and looking at her sensuous lips and just wants to bite them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - all men are like that who hardly care what the woman is saying


Sujal is really fast and just kissed her without even knowing her name!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - thats what makes him so confident and suave


It was quite unexpected and daring as they have just met!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh something very different


It seems Mr.Sujal Garewal literally fell at first sight!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - surely he did


Sheena was left flabbergasted and no matter how hard she tried, Sujal didn't let her go!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - he is a hard one to beat


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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Arwa

Nice update.πŸ‘ - thanks alot

Sujal is remembering his happy times with Sheena..They both were very much in love but now they hate each other even more. - yes but its all part of being in love

Sujal lost his temper when he saw Sheena in her working clothes but her reply more or less angered him even more. - well yeh it was just an excuse to get angry

He is trying hard to avoid the limelight and Sheena is finding it hard to believe..Wat is going in his mind?? - he is a difficult man to understand

The way Sheena and Sujal were dancing showed their inner most feelings..They still feel a lot for each other but its all over shadowed by their bitterness.Their chemistry is still very strong. - hehehe lets say strong as fevicol

The VM was really good⭐️⭐️ and do i need to repeat this gain and again.U r just brilliant in making them.The song was also perfect...πŸ‘πŸ‘ - i'm glad u really liked it

Sheena has endured too much of Sujal's arrogance and she breaks up when he treated her like an object. - naturally anybody would

Sujal wanted this very much..he wanted her to lash out at him so that he can insult her. - yep him and his planning

Sheena and Sujal's meeting was quite filmy.both were behaving as love sick fools.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ - now what to say. ham sab bohat hee filmy hain hehehe

That kiss was quite daring when they have just metπŸ˜† - oh yes very daring indeed

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part
loved it
continue soon


thanks very much for loving the part as always


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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

magical vm on this awesome songπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

ive fallen in love with it😳 😳 😊


Hey thanks a lot for loving the vm so much and the song certainly is magical to make u fall in love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

awesome vm n an awesome part...


thanks very much for loving it and the vm too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Thanks very much for loving it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: raheelu

hey really nice part i just love to read ur fic - aaaw thanks a lot


hmmm Sujal ka gussa or should i say pyar 😍 - hehehe i cud understand the feeling

awesome VM - thanks for loving it

plz update next part soon coz i can't wait 4 long - sure
luv Sujal Sheena ❀️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Nice update arwa πŸ‘ - hey thanks a lot Shreya

Starting scene mein pehle to mujhe samajh mein nai aya ki ho kya raha hai phir dheere dheere samajh mein aaya ki dono apni engagement ring ke bare mein baat kar rahe the πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - hehehe it was intended to mislead


Flashback scene was very good , romantic and passionate of sujal and sheena πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ‘ - glad u really luved it


But to their luck again the reality hit hard to sujal he realized that what he wants from sheena and how vulnerable he wanted to be her infront of him and when they are going into the party he again started on sheena for her dress 🀒🀒 - ab ghussa kahi jage to utaarna hee parega na


Like sheena I also did not understand that why infront of others he saves her and while they were alone he always humiliated sheena like never before - well he just doesn't want the world to know abt their personal contract

and what made sheena and sujal to break their relationship when they are going to step into another stage of this relationshipπŸ˜• and now they hate one another to such an extent that whenever sujal or sheena got any chance they both did not let go off any moment to humiliate each other πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - actually that was just a dream and hadn't happened in the past. so they never had got to that stage and Sujal had only imagined it


And when sheena returned to the hospital back to her mother she just cant bear the last encounter with sujal and break down 😭 - it has gone too far that's why


But again the flashback was awesome coz it was sujaland sheena's first meeting and their first kiss which was unwanted for sheena but needed for sujal (I think so) πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰ - hehehe well it was wanted by both in some way or the other

Continue soon ... smile

Take care😊 and byeee 😊

Shreya😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: psrn

wow so romantic...


thanks a lot ruchita

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